Jesus Chicken Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 [color=blue]I have been writing a bit of poetry lately, and I have finally figured out a way to get more stumilus for it. So I shall be writing more. This is one I just wrote, feel free to commment.[/color] [I]Truth[/I] Most people are normal, it?s the insane ones that are special, That?s why I like you, But I wish you would speak the ****ing truth to me, show me where you stand, Speak what I want to see, I can?t deny this feeling of hate, I have wasted my time, or so it seems, It?s the reason I am leaving my mind in this state, Deep regret and sadness have taken my mind, you know how I feel about you, But give me something to find, I need a reason to believe what you say, I need you to act on it now, I need you to take it away Because most people are normal, it?s the insane ones that are special, That?s why I need you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 [COLOR=indigo]Hm...to be honest I have mixed feelings on it....I liked it partially and I didn't like it at the same time. I personally don't like the ending yet I really don't quite understand the poem so I can't judge it fully. Its a nie poem though...keep working on it. Of course thats meh stupid opinion, so oh wells...[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Chicken Posted June 22, 2003 Author Share Posted June 22, 2003 Any opinion is better then no opinion, isn't it? It's about the girl who has been messing with me. I don't understand how she feels, so I tried to make that confusion evident in the poem. I hate her, and need her at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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