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[color=blue]I have been writing a bit of poetry lately, and I have finally figured out a way to get more stumilus for it. So I shall be writing more. This is one I just wrote, feel free to commment.[/color]

[I]Truth[/I]
Most people are normal, it?s the insane ones that are special,
That?s why I like you,
But I wish you would speak the ****ing truth to me, show me where you stand,
Speak what I want to see,
I can?t deny this feeling of hate, I have wasted my time, or so it seems,
It?s the reason I am leaving my mind in this state,
Deep regret and sadness have taken my mind, you know how I feel about you,
But give me something to find,
I need a reason to believe what you say, I need you to act on it now,
I need you to take it away
Because most people are normal, it?s the insane ones that are special,
That?s why I need you.
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[COLOR=indigo]Hm...to be honest I have mixed feelings on it....I liked it partially and I didn't like it at the same time. I personally don't like the ending yet I really don't quite understand the poem so I can't judge it fully. Its a nie poem though...keep working on it.

Of course thats meh stupid opinion, so oh wells...[/COLOR]
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