Writing An interesting perspective

[GreenEyedDragon]

[color=sky blue]Well, here goes...i've posted on here with my story that in my sig, but this is my first poem...so just tell me what ya'll think.[/color]

[color=green]
The Maze

I think that i love you
but how can i tell?
is it crying when you go away?
or wishing you well?

I never like to see you go,
i want to be with you always
between love and like, i go to and fro
i seek an answer at the end of a maze

And oh, how this maze is overgrown
there is no visible path
but i cannot be shaken, will not be thrown
i'm at the mercy of my own mind's wrath

Occasionally, i think that i'm near
but i want you to help me through
i want a certain answer, but the opposite i fear
and i can only find the right one with you

I've never felt this way before
everyting is so new
i've walked right through the prettiest door
and the hardest obstacles i am to go through

if we are to make it to the end of the maze
by helping each other the whole way through
then maybe, just maybe, i can spend all my days
with you.[/color]

[Whiteblaze]

That was beautiful! Is that [I]really[/I] your first poem?
I think it's very good, and I'm not just saying this to be saying this, I think it's very nice! :)

[GreenEyedDragon]

it was not my first poem...lol not at all, that would be really really interesting, now wouldn't it? Naw, thats just the first one that i've posted in here...although i don't have too many....thank you for your compliments...i appreciate it:D