Writing Poems that I feel. . .more than just words. . .

[Whiteblaze]

[COLOR=teal]That's cool, the way something in real life was carried into your dream. That happens to me sometimes too. Sort of like when I hear rain in my dream and it's raining for real. It's funny how real life things can slip into a dream and vice versa![/COLOR]
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[COLOR=darkblue]Here's another called, [B][I]The Unsung Hero[/I][/B], by someone named [B]Erik Hugus[/B].[/COLOR]


[B]The Unsung Hero[/B]

Dream deep the story of the night
Where temporal ties have no meaning;
In a land where strings of puppets and quantum obscurity
Disappear under the weight of an unbridled subconscious;
Where subdued cries against tangible oppressors
Take shape and form in the dreamscape as the tapestry of tonight.

Whether hero, adulterer, savior, or victim,
Visiting far horizons or aiding lives in distress--
Nobody's hero closes eyes to turn the tide, save the day,
And find infinite fulfillment in personal pain or pleasure.

The waking world with its goals made not met
Is forever dwarfed by night's tales yet untold.
We'd spend eternity here if only we knew the way--
Forever dreaming our passions and paving over our regrets.


[I]Copyright ©2003 Erik Hugus[/I]

[Epsilon]

Kinda sounds as if they were writting down their dreams along with their thoughts on dreams. It's soudns as if the person was thinking deeply while they wrote it. And the heros it's great! ^^

[Guest dayday]

It reminds me of 911. Because it said heros and victims. For some reason that day didn't affect me.