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I don't have a story or poem or anythign to put in this. I just thought I might tell everybody that I've become a semi-finalist in the International Open Poetry Contest. My poem was chosen out of thousands of others.

I'm also getting mine published in 'Eternal Portraits'. Here's the entry that I did:

"Crying Flowers"

Flowers that cry
All through the night
Hold in their pain
Til no one's in sight
The tears will flow
And no one can say
That flowers don't cry
During the day
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I wanna thank my 6th grade teacher, Mr. Loring, for this. He made us do a monument for 'The Trail of Tears'. That's how I got the idea for this poem. Thank you so much!
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Guest Majin Buu
WOW, Thats great I love reading your poetry. Is there like a prize or anything? I wish you luck! .. not that you need it :)
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Guest dayday
There is a prize.

-104 cash or gift prizes including the 1,000.00 Grand Prize
-10,000.00 Annual Grand Prize

That's basically it.
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Guest Majin Buu
HOLY! Thats alot of money!!
We are good friends riight? and good friends do stuff for each other riight? tommorows my birthday, and friends give each other gifts on birthdays :D. LOL j/k
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Wow! Really cool, I'll have to go out and get a copy of the book! ^^ Finnally you get reconized for your great work. "Crying Flowers" one of your great poems can be seen for years, and years to come. Once the books out I'll have to get it the first day it comes out.:D Oh, yes and Congrats!!!!
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Congratulations on your acheivement, and its a lovely poem. Short yet sweet; I like it. ^^

Hmm.. It's from poetry.com, right? I hate to be a damper on this, but it's going to eventually wind up costing you money for them to publish it. You have to pay for it's publishing, and pay for the book (I believe it's close to 50 bucks). It's only sold in hard-cover, so they'll eventually make profit off of it, and you'll get nothing in return.. The same thing happened to me a year ago, but my parents didn't want to spend the money. So nothin' was published.

Anyways.. It's a great honor for you, and I'm glad for you. ^_^ Thousands upon thousands of poems are sent in every year, and they only choose the best of the best to be published and enjoyed by many for the years to come. Good job on ya, and congrats once again.
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Guest dayday
I don't know if I want to become a poet. I just do it if I'm mad or moody in some way. But esp. when I'm mad. I do that real easy.
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Guest Taylor Hewitt
Congratulations you should be very proud. I have read your poetry and they deserve to be published! I love it when you write new poems.
Thanx and good luck on your poetry career!

Good luck and best wishes.

Taylor Hewitt
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[size=1] Heh, not to burst your bubble or anything, but I've also become a semi-finalist in the exact same contest; so has Charles. But it's good that you've won.

Just the fact of being published is more worth it than any prize for me, so I could really care less if I win first, or second, or anything. What matters is the publishing. Knowing that I'm going to be read by some people, and it actually might mean something to them.

As for the publishing costing money. No. I have gotten the letter, and it only costs money if you want to buy the hardcover book yourself..at least that's what has happened to me. It costs extra to get the book specially placed with a little blurb made by you about the poem heh.

Ah, and here's the poem I submitted. You'll notice it is more than 20 lines. I shortened it for the actual entry to 20, but I'd like to just post the whole thing like it should be.

[b][u]The Chimera's Kiss[/b][/u]
Morbid wails The Chimera stalks
Mending the wall the vine mirrors on the leaflet
Refractored the trepidated hoof halts
Dilapidated white the bark and inhumed nutrient

The loneliest word you'll hear
Cries of if only the cadaver's touch
Malignancy The Chimera stalks the fear
The necromancer fains known here

The emaciated espalier tremble with his touch
The breath of The Chimera so numbly cold
The loneliest word you'll ever know

If only if only emulsify this soul
The Chimera stalks mollified white the bark equivocal
Eminently if only it was so

So many wails so many cries in the dark
The opaque emaciated feebles the emptiest anoint
This Chimera is a terrible kiss those lips efferent bark
A kiss is a terrible thing to waste an anomalous delight

The loneliest kiss you'll ever know
So empty, the abhor so terrible the kiss to waste
The Chimera stalks his eyes rough bark aglow
Dead?hear the dead?come closer cognizance the taste
If only if only it was so

Walk in this grave The Chimera calls
Hear the necrotized moan and wail so
You shouldn't tremble when we touch the walls
Kiss The Chimera's ether taste the whole

The loneliest realization you'll ever know
The Chimera's kiss if only if only it was so

A kiss is a terrible thing to waste
The Chimera's kiss anomalous in delight

I take your hand the folds imprinted and hark
The Chimera and our lips are part
If only if only it was so
Engulfed the fire is abhor in taste
The tomb is later than you see to haste
And a kiss is a terrible thing to waste

The Chimera's kiss brethren in twixt
Exhumed inhumed in incised wick
The loneliest word you'll ever know
If only if only it was so[/size]
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[color=royalblue]Mitch you wretch....oh well. Anyways, I do write tons of poetry myself, but I don't enter them in contests. I want them to remain as they air...without thinking about how popular they could be.

My best ones though...are usually about me and my relationship with my little sister.[/color]
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Guest dayday
Well well well, very interesting. Seems I have a little competition. This make dayday very happy. Anyways, hope I don't see you at the convention.:D
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Guest dayday
That makes me happy. I have plenty of people giving me money to go. So I can go if I can get it in the next month.
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Guest dayday
I'm not paying all that money for a book. I barely get by because I by some of my own food and clothes. And I'm serious about that. So since so many people love me, I get a some for the convention. Man everyone's a semi-finalist in this thing. Anybody else what to tell they're one too.
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