mystikal Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 [URL=http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/anime/-_for_cat_-.jpg]click here to see the picture.[/URL] this is a b-day present for my friend. I don't really know how to draw backgrounds.. -.- so it's skrewed. and I need to learn how to shade, still. I won't say anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WW2 Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 It a good pic with good CGing, but there is one problem: the girl's right ear sticks out a little too far. With her head turned at that angle, you shouldn't really see that much. Keep up the good work.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 [size=1] WW2 is right about the ear thing, but the picture's gorgeous. I think the best thing about it is the CGing, I love it! Hope you post some more. 9.8/10[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarK DeatH Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Wow, really good. But yeah, the ear is messed up... But the CG is awesome, and the drawing is also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystikal Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 XD I hope I can fix the ear; but after staring at it for too long, it doesn't look that wrong to me o_o. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chris Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 [color=green][size=1]wow, that's really good. nice job. the cging and drawing are both excellent. great job.[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaiyanPrincessX Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Its very good but the way the body is turned looks a little akward to me. Thats probebly just me though. Aside from that its great. The ear doesn't bother me too much. I really like the eyes for some reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Semjaza Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 I see that you didn't do any solid white areas on any of the clothes highlights in this one... I think that helps this out immensely. I don't really think any of the clothes look out of place. Once you start addressing shadowing I think you'll be good. Not really normal shadowing, as you seem to have that down... but self shadowing, as in the shadow the character casts on itself. Once you have that going, I really don't think there'd be anything "wrong" (and I use that word loosely, since this stuff is excellent), with any of your work. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystikal Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 o0o. My uni-braincell might die when trying to pay attention to smal things o_o. I think I should bow to you as my teacher, Semjaza? o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sara Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 [size=1]That''s so pretty. I love her hair, especially. Looking at it again, the only thing that stick out is the little bag at her side--it really needs some sort of shadow to show it's below her arm. There are a few other similar places, but that's one that sort of stick out for me. Other than that...I really love this picture.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystikal Posted July 3, 2003 Author Share Posted July 3, 2003 how should a picture be properly shaded? what do you ppl do? o_o do you use a brush completely or cel-shade it first, then use smooth brushes to smooth out the necessary edges? cus I am not sure if I am doing the right thing, given that after so many tries I cannot shade like anime artists do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 [size=1] I think you should just...make the area beneath the bag darker with smudge or something. I'm not a real expert, I've only CGed once. [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nezzyjean Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 Wow! That is really good! the CGing is awesome..but the ear sticks out a little too much. Its really good though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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