Writing my poem

[ars_magicae]

ok well this is one of my decent ones:

One Lost

Twas many blue moons ago
That i last saw her face
Oh, how I long to see that face
And its beauty like a blooming rose
To be lost in her eyes again
Those oceans of tranquility
And to be enwrapped in her presence
Overwhelms and entangles all senses
But I shall never again
See the beauty of that face,
Be lost in those eyes,
Or even feel her presence
Fore she is the One Lost
Lost to the tides of time
Locked forever in the past
A puncture of the heart
A scab upon the soul
A feeling of eternal emptiness
Of which you'll never want to know
But if I could go back
And never even see her face
I would not
I could not
I must continue on
Fore she has allowed me to see
The next beacon of light
Out upon the horizon
And that light is the one I seek
The one that fuels my journey
And when I finally reach the light
She will be my One Found


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