Writing Guilty As Charged, a Megaman X fanfiction

[Star I Am Not]

One member of the community suggested I post this here, and so I have. :whoops:

This is a pretty serious fanfiction that I've taken forever and a half to write - and I'm only with chapters one and two. *sweatdrop* It's based about the Megaman X games, as stated in the title, starting "six months after the events of MMX6" (the official explanation I tell everyone). This is going by the ending where Zero goes into a pod and doesn't wake up until Rockman Zero starts.

[URL=http://www.cherden.com/star/gac_cp1.htm]Chapter One - Insult And Injury[/URL]
[URL=http://www.cherden.com/star/gac_cp2.htm]Chapter Two - Do You Dream of Nightmares?[/URL]

Constructive criticism is very much appreciated. ^_^