Guest Taylor Hewitt Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 It was raining outside. As TH sat there he wondered whether he had what it took to claim dark castle, and take what was his. The dark orb. It is a magic ball that gives the user unlimited strength. As she died, TH's grandmother's last words were to claim the dark orb in dark castle, or all hell would break lose. He did not know where to go, and all his grandmother left for him was a scroll with the word bob on it. He had no family and lived alone in a small hut. He had nothing. No money. No relatives or friends. He had a small farm behind the hut. He grew vegetables, had cows and provided for himself. He had no objects or weapons, but he knew the task ahead of him. He didn't know if he could do it. He needed help. Accomplists (...). That sort of thing. So he waited. Waited for a message from god. Or a messenger perhaps. Or just someone or something. --- Character Information: Name: Taylor Hewitt (but he prefers TH) Age: 13 Height: 6.2 Gender: Male Physicle Descrioption: Blue eyes, red hair, tall, big. Personality: Happy, intellegent, nice, serious sometimes. Humourous with great sense of humour. You will find out his personality through out the story. He also has a temper and will be angered easily sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Kesaki rushed through the streets. Gaurd; stop her, don't let that theif get away! Kesaki; oh gosh all this over a few shillings? Kesaki turned a corner sliding through the mud. The rain drenched her hair and clothes and lightning lit up the streets showing the gaurds where she was running to. One of the gaurds appeared in front of her blocking her path.She turned to run the other way but she ran into anther one of the gaurds and fell back. the stolen curency spilled onto the road and was burried in all the mud. One of the gaurds picked her up by her shirt collar. "You know what we do to thieves like you?" Kesaki gulped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Inside the dark temple, full of candles and stones, Ryden sat there with his eyes closed. "This is a unexspected visit Ryden." Said a deep low voice. Yes, not likely of you to come without notice." Said a girls voice. "I have come for something immporant." The fire gleamed. rydens white hair blew to the side in the draft of the relem. "We shall listen." A cold heartless voice said. "I wish you be a mortal." The fuire lowered, as if it was the feelings of the elder gods. "You can not be both." A cold vocie said. "I do not wish to be." Ryden closed his eyes tighter. "But your power is what makes you a god." The women voice said. "You do know Kon will take the throne if you do this." Ryden opened his eyes. "I know." There was a cold laugh. "You would be nothing without your power!" "It is our choice." "No! He will not have a choice! He stays a god!" The voice began to agrue. [b]"Silence!"[/b] A greater voice said. "You love a mortal, they no not know, do they Ryden? This is a big step. this is your power. You willing to give it all up?" The women voice said. "He wil not!" A old voice said again. The otehr gods ingored the old god, and listened to any signs off Ryden. Ryden's eyes bwgan to fill with water. "you love them enough to give up your immortallity?" Ryden let down his head, and slowly nodded. HIs white hair flipped over his head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Taylor Hewitt Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 TH sat at the kitchen table so. He sensed something. He did not know what. But it was some thing. He sensed that there was a loss of power somewhere. He did not know what it was. But he was tired. He worked all day in the farm. So TH went into his bedroom, and flopped down on his bed, and quickly fell asleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 kesaki stared into the gaurds eyes. They had her this time. Gaurd: now hand over the money. Kesaki reached into her pouch and dug her hand around for the money. Kesaki: oh no! It must've fell out. Gaurd: Well, isn't that just too bad. --------- Kesaki winced as the gaurds tightened her chains. They walked out slamming the dungeon door behind then. Kesaki sat down and layed her head back against the cold hard stone wall of her cell. Kesaki: Man, now what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Ryden walked along. His eyes wide open. He knew something had happened to his love. "I...I am....I am so....stupid! I am...why...did...I do this? What if I am not loved..." Ryden began to shake. He had never been one day without his power. Thunder stot from the sky, as he began to cry. He missed being a god. "I can not live...like this..." He rubbed his eyes. "ortals depend on me...bt what if I am not strong enough? What if I shall fail to protect them??" Ryden crosed his arms. "This...is not...me" He began to shake again. HIs blonde hair was shrot and still, not waveing like last time. "I only have....a few bolts of power....enough for attacks...but not teleaportion..." He looked around. "I...am...I..." He began to cry again. "Was I foolish? Did I take my love for mortals to far?" He said to himself. HIs eyes where normal, blue. But he still felt like they where white. "I...wish I had one last chance...to straighten things out...." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Taylor Hewitt Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 A few hours later TH felt that somebody needed him. He woke up instantly. Jumped out of bed. He ran out the door and a little girl screamed and ran away. He soon realized he wasn't wearing anything and quickly went back inside and got dressed. He went outside and a little girl screamed and ran away. Whatever. He just walked. His eyes were closed. He felt he knew where he was going. He walked. He walked. He walked down the street into the market. TH was wearing his new leather boots. *SQUISH* He stepped in something. He opened his eyes and saw he stepped in a big mud pile. And people were staring. "Crap", he said. He looked down and saw coins. He picked them up and scraped the dry mud off them. "Cool", he said. And put the coins in his pocket. He closed his eyes, and started walking again... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Kesaki waited untill the hall way was quiet. then she pulled out a bobbypin from her hair. She worked with the locks on the chains until they gave way. Kesaki stood up and picked the lock to her cell. she quietly opened the door and made her way down the firelit hallway. She eventually found a staircase and made her way up it. After taking more and more she ended up at the top of the basement and snuck out. Kesaki: Yeah! Free! Gaurd I found her she's this way! Kesaki: oh ****! not again. Kesaki started running and eluded the gaurds for a short while. She never stoped running though. eventually she ran into Ryden. [font=gothic][color=indigo]Keep the profanities to a minimum please. - The Harlequin[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 OOC: Did I mess things up? Well, I did put my char in the old age, so I thnk I'l post. IC: Ryden looked at the girl. "Kesaki?" Ryden whipped away the water from his eyes. He then saw a load of people chas after her. "Run. I'll back them off." Ryden watch Kesaki run down the path. Ryden held out his hands and little bolts of thunder grew. But his power was too weak. He let down his hands. He lifted them up again and closed his eyes. Again, the power in him wastoo weak. He looked around. Kesaki was far away. The guards came closer. He tried one last time, and held out his hands. Little tiny bolts grew, grew bigger. He then opened his eyes to find he had enough. He tossed a ball of thunder at the guards. The trees zapped, and the guards dissappeared. Ryden looked at his hands. "What have I done to myself!?" He turned around and ran to Kesaki. OOC: Please forgive me if I messed it up. I'll delete my post if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Kesaki stopped and waited for Ryden. Kesaki: whoa, is that you ryden? Ryden: yah, it's me. Kesaki: what happened? Ryden sighed. I gave up my immortality. Kesaki: whoa...Well thanks for helping me. Ryden: no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Ryden fallowed Kesaki. "Do you think I was a fool doing it?" Asked Ryden. "Why did you?" Ryden picked out an apple he got earier and eat it. "Because...be...because of my love for the mortals..." Kesaki blinked. "What do you mean by that?" "I...I...like some one here...but a god can not be wo things...so I chose to be like you and the other here. My power is still with me, but I'm so powerless! I can not do anything! Please...could you teach me mor about this new life?" Asked Ryden. "Ummm,sure..." Ryden tossed his apple aside. "Atleast my new look is better." Kesaki walked then stopped. "Who is this mortal you like?" She asked. "Ummm, you wouldn't know her..." Ryden turned around. He sighed then fallowed Kesaki. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Taylor Hewitt Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 OOC:Ok back sry if i was angry or whatever. Back to the game. --- As TH walked eyes wide shut, he for some reason had to open them. He saw a man. And beside him was... the most beautiful person. Her hair was beautiful the way it moved. Her eyes... ohh so nice. He had to approach her. TH walks up to them. "Hi", he said. He reached into his pocket and pulled out the coins. "Are these yours?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Ryden looked into the mans eyes. [Color=blue]If I am correct...this is Taylor hewitt. The gods told me about him[/Color] Ryden walked ot him. "Are you Taylor Hewitt?" Ryden whipped his eyes again. "Umm, yes..." Taylor looked at Ryden in cnfusion. "Ryden. God of thunder. Well, I was." Ryden walked ahead. "How do you know me?" Asked TH. "The eldr gods told me about you. But I wasn't able to send you a sign, because I lost me power." Ryden shook TH's hand. "Please to meet you. Fallow me." Ryden said. Ryden took out another apple and began to eat it. [Color=blue]This better be true...[/Color] Ryden walked along, then looked on the floor. He seemed to have stepped in something. "Well, the mortal life does have some surprises, doesn't it." He sighed. OOC: Thread all fixed thanks to Taylor's quick thinking! :') Well, is wasn't any ones fault, these things happen. :') Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 OOC: I was the one who messed it up. Sorry. I'm going to start over. Actually somebody just bring me in. I'm lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Kesaki took the coins. Kesaki: oh my gosh where did you find these? I almost got killed 'cause of these! TH: you were almost killed by coins? Kesaki: no The person I stole them from. TH: why'd you steal them? Ryden: she's a thief. TH: oh. Kesaki: what was that for? TH: what did I say? Kesaki: do you have a problem with me being a thief? Th: no, I never said any thing like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Taylor Hewitt Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 I think it's fine being a theif. Theives wouldn't steal unless they were p00r or had a good reason right? Money drives the soul. Anyways Ryden what is it you want with me. I don't know you but you know me. It's weird. You're a god - but who's god. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Ryden twichted. "I can't believe..oh well." Ryden arrived at a temple. "Now, you must do what I say. If you do not, it may cause your death." Ryden placed his hands in a trianlge. "Now, keep your hands on me. Do not let go." Ryden closed his eyes as they placed there hands on him. He stood there, without a sound for ages. "What's wrong Ryden?" Asked Kesaki. "I have little power...But soemthing is blockng me..." Ryden opened his eyes. "I need more power. To get though..." Ryden looked at them. "Coudl we give you some?" Asked TH. "I'm a god...." "A mortal" Added Kesaki. "Then, we may try." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Kesaki focused most of her mortal energy to ryden. What was he trying to do? It didn't matter she trusted him. Ryden used her energy to unlock his power.A bright yellow light surrounded him and knocked Kesaki and Taylor back. Kesaki: Ryden! ryden felt an electrical charge flow through his body and then leave. Ryden raised an eyebrow. Ryden: Whoa what was that? Kesaki; do you think you found your power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Ryden shook his head. "I can't get back home..." He walked to the stone door and bashed his fist on it. "WHY!?" He yelled. He fell down and keep his fist on the door. "Maybe...may...maybe there ashamed...and won't let me back..." Ryden jumped up and punched the stone again. Blood gleamed form his hand. "I should never have done this..." He said to himself. "Try again!" TH said. "Why? To find the same resault?" Ryden lended against the wall. [b]"If you can hear me Kon, let me back...please...[/b] Ryden's voice was deeper and shallow. Ryden let down his head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Taylor Hewitt Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 "Maybe I can help." TH Focuses his energy towards Ryden. He felt a little weak. Weaker... weaker. He fainted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Ryden turned around. "Pick him up, hurry!" Kesaki picked him up and grabbed Ryden. Ryden's eyes shot with thunder. Then, some kind of thunder portal brought them into a place that was full of dark templates. "Lay him down here." Ryden said. Kesaki lay Ryden down. "Stay here until I come back. Do not touch the stones." Ryden walked off into the black. He then was sat down, and candles burned around him. "Why do you return?" Asked a deep voice. [b]"YOU SHALL BE BANNED FROM THIS PLACE!"[/b] Ryden looked around. "Kon...I'm your brother...don't be" [b]"QUIET![/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Kesaki watched Taylor. He didn't seem to be moving. Kesaki: is he .. breathing? Kesaki put her head on his cheast to check for a heart beat. TH: what are you doing? Kesaki jumped at the sound of his voice. Ksaki: gosh you scared me. You ok. TH sat up. TH; yeah sure I'm fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Taylor Hewitt Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 "I think you... I think you just saved my life. I saw us. I mean... I saw all of us. I was up there. *points to sky* And then... I think your touch gave me life. Life. Thank you!" *jumps up and hugs kesaki* Kesaki is stunned. "Anyway thank you. :)" "Now were has Ryden gone?" Suddenly Ryden was in the air, upside down being thrown out of some building. *POOF* It was gone. TH: Now what? Ryden: We must go to Dark Castle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Ryden rubbed his back. "I just hope I have the power to get out..." Then, he heard his brothers voice. [b]"YOU SHALL NEVER COME BACK![/b] Ryden lowered his head. "Yes..." Ryden held out his hands. "Ryden! You can't let Kon through you out of you own home!" Kesaki yelled. "But quiet...don't judge his word..." Ryden looked back at the stones. [b]"LEAVE![/b]Ryden held his hands out, and the thunder brought them back. Ryden punched the walls again. "That's it..." He said bashing his head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesaki_Inedia Posted July 14, 2003 Share Posted July 14, 2003 Kesaki looked at him. Kesaki: Dark castle? why? TH: I'm supposed to go there. Ryden: That's what I just said. TH: oh...but how did you? Kesaki: He knows all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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