RPG Trigun: A new time

[T man]

O.O.C: I'm so happy that my first rp's gone so far. I give thanks to all of you who joined :D

"Why don't you two have the wedding at the ranch or would you rather have it back in your home town" jacen asked as jake started fireing at him. "I'd have to think about that" kitsune said. "Hey vash how about some help here" jacen said as he jumped behind some ruble. "Uh, oh ya hold on" vash said after he stoped crying about what hisame said to him. Vash started fireing at jake. "Hey jacen can you make your shots faster" vash asked. Jacen started fireing at a faster rate. As jake ran vash started shooting at him from the front. "This should end quickly" jacen said as he pulled out a whistle and blew on it. After a couple of shots jacen and vash hit jake in his arms and legs. "At least that's over with" vash said as he walked over to hisame to try again.
"Hey kitsune why don't I give you my share of the money as a wedding gift" jacen said as he pulled out some rope to tie jake in. "You will. Thanks. I appreceate it" kitsune said. Once jacen finished tieing jake the thomas came back with the girls. "Hey, vash has been pestering her to marry him" jacen said pointing to hisame. "He has. Vash if she doesn't want to marry you then she doesn't want to marry you" meryl said starting to give vash a lecture."Thanks jacen. He was getting annoying. I was afraid i'd have to shoot him" hisame said smilling. "It's o.k. Now let's go turn this guy in and get the prize money" jacen said smilling as he swung jake over his shoulder.

[originalimp]

meyrl: " VASH YOUR ALL READY INGAGED TO ME!"
vash:whistles
yurak: he seemed at peace but then at that moment a gun shot was heard and yuraka was shot of the thomas he rolled in the dand while the thomas walked on

[Kesaki_Inedia]

OOC: Please originalimp write in complete sentences. What grade are you in? PLease, again, for the sake of this rpg, Write in complete, punctuated, sence making sentences. Thank you.

IC:

Kitsune stopped the Thomas she and yuraka had been sharing and quickly jumped off. She rushed to his side.

"Yuraka!"

Kitsune looked around to see who had shot him but the only people she could see was her gang. Jacen hurried over and looked around as well.

"Snipers..."

every one hit the ground as shots came fireing from no where. Kitsune dragged Yuraka, who was gaining conciousness(sp?), Behind a sand dune. She reached into her boot for her gun but noticed it was gone.

"What the?"

[originalimp]

yuraka: he stared at her weakly he was in a dream world of his own where he was with his old wife an eden of sorts
kitsune:she noticed yuraka had an assorment of guns left he hadnt goten rid of and took a machine gun and got ready " this is for the crew !" she jumped out from the rock and started shooting bullets. She took down two of the snipers quickly with the exploding machine gun bullets.yuraka:he stuid weakly and threw some bombs at the other ones and they were gone he fell weakly he had nearly killed him self again he was an inch from death as some would say.