Writing [|] Sonic the Hedgehog: Tails of Hope [|]

[Shippo]

ehh, my first fanfic ever! It may not be that good.
[|]Sonic Tails of hope[|]
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[b]Prouloge[/b]

[i]Ever since that one day when Miles ""Tails"" Prower met SOnic the Hedgehog, he has changed in extrodinary ways.
Not only has he become stronger and faster, but he has also gained weaknesses. For one, he is always leaning and depending on Sonic.
He is a follower and not a leader.

~now Sonic has been captured by eggman and his twisted mind~

Everyone thinks its the end of the world because there is no hope.
But they were wrong...
A tiny shadow (tails) must become a hero and embark on his un-forgetable journey on saving his best friend/role model...[/i]
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[|]Sonic! Tails of Hope![|]
Tell me what you think of it soo far, its just the prouloge.