PersonV01 Posted July 18, 2003 Share Posted July 18, 2003 Dreaming I am dreaming dreaming dreaming of things never seeming to be reeling towards me. i live in a world where dreams are for children and reality tires the mind. a world in which optimism is cursed, idealists are shot, and the way a person perceives the world is the way the world perceives him: a dream. because i am dreaming dreaming dreaming of a dream that was suppose to be a reality, an actuality to that of fact and fiction, able to cut the blades of friction, within them are lies, that weather my eyes, now tired, so tired, and early red young with a breathe for death. because i am dreaming dreaming dreaming of a world that is never seeming to care, about individualist individuals, who speak with a soul that cries, a mind that laughs, and heart that shrieks, with things known as feelings. yes, i am dreaming. because the way i perceive the world, though it seems to swallow me whole, killing me in its every fold of crucified beliefs and eyes dilated to one thing, i continue dreaming of a reality that is both seeming to choose the free smiling and free speaking, those willing to seek thinking, knowing that, in this world, an optimistic, idealistic, boy, one yet to know the full taste of the world, learning to grow and aging to know, that he can, in this world, with the dreams he once knew, can change to the world he now knows: peace. [I]ya. a poem i wrote. i wont say its meaning. i like people to come to their own. its just better that way.[/I] [B]-PV01[/B] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 18, 2003 Share Posted July 18, 2003 To be dreaming, and having there own meaning. Good idea not telling what it means to the writer or else it clouds the view's of others. ^^ Anyways here's my veiw on the poem. To me it seems like the person is on the brink of both their dream anmd the reality they know. There dreaming in some what of a night mare of sorrow and bliss at the same time. Just till it becomes the true things of the world they want. Into their real dream that they truely want and not something on the edge of both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Chicken Posted July 18, 2003 Share Posted July 18, 2003 [color=blue]Hmm...I like it man. It's nice and original, speaks the truth, for sure. I would have to say that this is your view of the world. I certainley would prefer a dream to the current situation. But a dream is nowhere near as good as reality. It's all superficial sure, but every now and then, you find something here in reality, be it a song, a person, or a book that makes it all worth while, and thats why I'm still here. Well done.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PersonV01 Posted July 19, 2003 Author Share Posted July 19, 2003 ::bows for them:: thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Demonic Angel Posted July 19, 2003 Share Posted July 19, 2003 ::sob:: that's very COOL! and i mean, TOTALLY COOL! keep up the good work on writing poems. You can publish them, ya know. And if u do, i'll buy one of them. ^_^ *~Demonic Angel~* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... PersonV01 Posted July 19, 2003 Author Share Posted July 19, 2003 hahaha, thank you. um, maybe one day ill publish all my work. this is just one of many others. anyone can write like this you know. the trick is never to force yourself to write. all you do is write with absolute feeling, with having only one emotion and yearning to express that emotion in every way. -PV01 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Create an account or sign in to comment You need to be a member in order to leave a comment Create an account Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy! Register a new account Sign in Already have an account? Sign in here. Sign In Now Share More sharing options... Followers 0
Demonic Angel Posted July 19, 2003 Share Posted July 19, 2003 ::sob:: that's very COOL! and i mean, TOTALLY COOL! keep up the good work on writing poems. You can publish them, ya know. And if u do, i'll buy one of them. ^_^ *~Demonic Angel~* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PersonV01 Posted July 19, 2003 Author Share Posted July 19, 2003 hahaha, thank you. um, maybe one day ill publish all my work. this is just one of many others. anyone can write like this you know. the trick is never to force yourself to write. all you do is write with absolute feeling, with having only one emotion and yearning to express that emotion in every way. -PV01 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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