Writing Together Forever

[Guest dayday]

Okay I really need to get back into my stories a little more. So if you like this reply. I'm very serious you need to reply. Nobody ever wants to reply for some reason. It's ok I don't really care how you think about it. I just want some replies.


[I]Together forever no matter how long from now until the end of time we?ll be together and you can be sure that forever and a day that?s how long we?ll stay together forever.[/I]


Chapter 1
What Happened


Videl, Gohan, and Pan are driving home from a party at the Brief?s. It had been Vegeta?s birthday and for his present he wanted to fight Goku so they left early. No one really wanted to be there when he started shooting energy. Pan had wanted to stay and visit Bra but they told her she could tomorrow. They rode home in silence. The only sound was the rain hitting the wind wipers and the sound of them moving side to side.
Gohan drove very slowly as not to get into an accident. ?I can?t see anything through all this rain,? he said finally breaking the silence. ?It would have been more fun watching my dad and Vegeta fight.?
?Gohan don?t talk like that. Besides the rain isn?t all that bad. Relax a little.? Videl patted him on the shoulder. ?We?ll get home soon.?
?Not with all this. Nature is out to get us. It started raining as soon as we came out of the house.?
?Now you know that?s not a nice thing to say. You could get hurt jinxing yourself like that.?
?Daddy,? Pan called from behind his back. ?When are we going to get home??
?Soon I hope. Just go to sleep and I?ll wake you up when we get there.? He turned and winked at her.
?Gohan, watch out.? Videl tapped him on the shoulder. ?Gohan, watch out! That?s a red light! Be careful!?
?What?!? He turned around and slammed on brakes but it was too late. They slid across the road and hit a truck coming across. The car flipped over and landed.
Nobody moved for the longest time. The man that had been in the truck got out half conscious walking over to the car he had hit. When he peered inside he saw the bodies of a young man and woman and a little girl. He gasped at the sight and quickly ran to a payphone. He called 911 and told them about the accident.
Shortly after an ambulance arrived at the scene of the accident. It took them half an hour to pull the whole family out the car and get them onto the stretchers. They checked the driver to make sure he was okay then went off to the hospital.

Two hours later Gohan woke with a severe headache. He heard a voice call from beside him, ?Gohan, Son are you okay?? He turned his head and saw Goku standing over top of him.
?Where am I?? he asked. He sat up and saw Chichi and Goten sitting across the room he was in. ?Where?s Videl and Pan??
?You don?t remember anything at all? Nothing??
?No. Tell me what happened.?
?You should rest for now. I?ll tell you later.?
?No I want to know now. Where are Videl and Pan?? His mother, brother, and father all looked at him and said nothing. There was a gloomy feeling starting to spread through his body. ?What? Why is everyone looking at me like that?? Chichi stood up and walked over to his bed and sat down beside him. ?Mom??
She took his hand in hers then said softly, ?Pan?s going to be fine but we?re not sure about Videl.?
?What are you talking about? What happened to them? To me?? He sat completely. ?What are you not telling me?? Chichi laid her hand on his hand and he snatched it away. ?Tell me.?
She looked at Goku; he nodded his head. ?You were in an accident. Your car had flipped over; you might have made it if you weren?t half saiyan. But...?
?But Videl?s not half saiyan.?
?Right. You don?t need to worry the doctors are doing everything they can.? She stood up and walked back over to her son in his chair; He whispered something in her ear and she nodded. ?Right,? she walked out the room.
Gohan looked at his brother. ?Where?s she going??
Goten looked at him and shrugged his shoulders. ?Nowhere important.? Their eyes locked and Gohan knew that he was lying.

[boothten]

[color=darkblue][size=1]Wow! That's very well writen, other than the fact that I odn't want Videl to die! lol, anyways, again, very well written. I like it. I hope to read more! ^^[/color][/size]

[Shinmaru]

Aw...poor Gohan. This is a very well-written start to the story. The grammar is near perfect and the spelling is spot-on. I look forward to the next installment.

[Guest dayday]

What's wrong with my grammer?

[Morinaka]

That's great, and from i've seen from other posts your talented writer/poet.
Couldn't see any grammer errors or bad spelling. Just copy and paste to MS Word or something if you really want to check.
Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next part :)

[Guest dayday]

Chapter 2
I Can?t Say Goodbye


Doctors and nurses were running in and out of room 216. The patient inside was losing blood fast and she had a slow heart beat. Half of the staff was working on her. Chichi walked up to a doctor coming out. He tag said Dr. Cam. ?Excuse doctor. Can you tell me how the patient in this room is doing??
He stopped and looked at her. ?Not to well. She probably won?t make it but we?re doing are best to help. Do you know her??
?She?s my daughter.?
?I?m sorry you have to go through this. It really a bad situation.?
?I?m fine. It?s my son I?m worried about. He?s going to scream when he finds out she?s going to die. Do you think he can visit her first??
?Yes where is he??
?He?s a patient here with her. Just down the hall here.? She pointed to Gohan?s room.
?You may bring him now if you like. It?s very hard to talk to a person who isn?t breathing.?
Chichi hurried back down to Gohan?s room to get him. He was sitting on his bed crossed legged, looking at the ceiling. She walked up behind him quickly as not to frighten him. She placed a hand on his shoulder; he turned his head to her. She said, ?If you want you can go see Videl now. But I can promise you that it will only be a short one.? She put on a weak but gentle smile. It didn?t comfort either one of them. Gohan smiled back and stood up. They walked down the hall together until they reached the room. ?I?ll wait out here while you go in.? She turned and this time put on a real smile. ?Besides, you need this time together with her.? And with that she turned and left.
Gohan walked slowly into the room. Only now one nurse was inside. Everyone else had given up. The nurse was cleaning up all the tools and such they had been using. She turned around when she heard Gohan come up behind her. ?Yes how may I help you,? she said.
?I came to speak with her,? he nodded toward his unconscious wife lying on the bed next to him. ?It?ll only take a minute.?
?That?s fine. I?m afraid it?s all you have.? She picked up another operating tool and left.
Gohan walked over to Videl?s bed and sat on the edge. Her head had a line of blood coming from the side and she was breathing heavy. When she felt him sit down she opened her eyes. ?Are you okay?? he asked.
She turned her head slightly, to weak to say anything. ?I...? she started.
?Don?t say anything. It?s just a waste of energy.?
?I h...h...have to say this once ag...gain so you don?t forget. I love you no matter what. That will never change. Understand?? She reached her hand out and he grabbed it so she wouldn?t have to.
?Yes. I love you too. We?re going to be together forever no matter what. I can?t say goodbye. Not yet.?
?No,? she shook her head.? Not this time. I?m leaving soon. We both no that. It?s time to say goodbye.?
?You can say what you want but I?m not leaving you. Never.?
?Baka,? she gave off a weak laugh. ?You a...always watched me to make sure that I was all ri...ght. You never worried about what anyone was doing because you watched me. Thank you but this is our final meeting. It was nice knowing you.? With that her hand grew limp in her hand and her heart monitor beside her gave off a steady flat note. It was over.
Gohan sat there with his mate?s hand in his and cried. His father told him never to cry but he couldn?t help it. His life only had one person in it now, but it just wasn?t the same without someone to share it with.