Demonic Angel Posted July 18, 2003 Share Posted July 18, 2003 [COLOR=royalblue]My Dark World bring me back back to myself again i want to be free from this darkness and to be stopped from crying. I want my old self again But I cannot free myself Everything is dark And there's nothing or anyone to get help. Darkness covers everything It also covers me Covering the entire world Letting me not able to see. I feel like I'm blind And I'm alone in the darkness All I do is crying What I'm doing is useless. Now I got used to this Living in the dark And its much better to be alone No more lies No more hatred No more people to get mad on. All dark, All alone I'm alone in my own dark world. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Here's the poem made by me. You can also rate it, if ya want to. Well that's all for now. Have a nice day![/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 19, 2003 Share Posted July 19, 2003 ^^ That's a good poem. Having nothing or anything that can help you get out of (bascially) just a dark voide. Being alone with nothing but darkness and your own mind locked away from every thing else. Crying and seeing just darkness. It's like being locked in your own mind with the world around. Only the world is ignorent. It's great. I really like it. ~ P.S. Welcome to the Otaku Boards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demonic Angel Posted July 19, 2003 Author Share Posted July 19, 2003 Thanks! I just made that poem when i felt depressed one day. I sometimes write poems without realizing that I am writing it. ^_^; I am sometimes out of my mind, or maybe not myself. Weirdy, huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 Yep, I have three split personalities my self. Anyways having things pop into your head when feeling something different from what you usually feel isn't all that weird. And nor is the fact of have you go out side your mind and writing something with not knowing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blastmon Posted August 15, 2003 Share Posted August 15, 2003 10/10 fabulous brilliant wicked can i use it in a story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demonic Angel Posted August 16, 2003 Author Share Posted August 16, 2003 yeah sure you can, if you really needed it. ^_^ Also thanks for the rating, Blastmon, but are you sure it deserves a 10/10? o.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blastmon Posted August 16, 2003 Share Posted August 16, 2003 yes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted August 17, 2003 Share Posted August 17, 2003 [size=1] Blastmon, I'm not going to ask you much more to [i]put some thoughts into your posting[/i]. Spam is not allowed here. One word posts aren't allowed here. At least two sentences isn't that hard to type up, is it? I hope not. As for the poem...it's okay. But there's just way too many poems that I've read that are like that--pure teenage angst-type stuff, written almost the exact same way. But don't feel discouraged. It just takes time to get better at anything, and this is included in that.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ladyscorp2006 Posted August 18, 2003 Share Posted August 18, 2003 Hey I like it. It describes me and my world. Dark and quiet (except for the crying part), just like a black hole. Yup that poem seriously describes me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blastmon Posted August 18, 2003 Share Posted August 18, 2003 I'm not going to reply in this section anymore, i'm trying to be nice, i think its a great poem, i'm replying because its good it deserves credit, i know what it feels like to have no one reply to your posts because thats all that happens to me no one hardly replies thats why i'm replying here if somethings good it needs credit i just wish i was good at Poetry and stories, thats my dream but no one replies so thats why i think other stuff is brilliant because i don't get credit and then i get told off for breaking rules when i'm trying to be nice! And whats the matter with one word posts!!!!!!! now i'll post my stories and just read everything else and won't reply i hope your happy Mitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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