Writing Original Fiction: Untitled so far

[Dmitri_Dragoon]

The following excerpt is from the sequel I am writing to The White Trinity. I haven't thought of a title for it, but I soon will, I just thought I would let some of you out there to read it and tell me what you think so far. If you want to read the first installment to the White Trinity Duology, click the link in my signature.
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The Untitled Sequel, (Very Unfinished)

On a wide open field, the world of Azeroth?s greatest forces met. They stood upon two ridges looking over their enemies on the other side. Then with the order they charged forward and met each other in combat. The battle was long, and fierce, with neither side seeing a victory soon they ordered the retreat reluctantly. For neither side wanted to be the first to run. Somehow they turn and ran at the same time. One army ran into the forested region of which they called home, the other force, ran into open plains that were the homes of others.
The leader of the army that fled into the forest called upon the magic users that survived and had them open a communication link to his commander. The elf composed himself and looked into the portal at another elf, that he had learned to respect. ?King Deteria, once again we have had a stalemate. We were unable to defeat the Army of Talis,? the commander said.
?And why is that General Amakiir?? Deteria asked.
?Because I believe both sides fight with the same ferocity as the other,? General Aramil Amakiir answered truthfully.
?Very well, but I want better results the next time I hear from you, expect me sometime soon.? Deteria said with finality, then his image disappeared from view.
Aramil turned away as well, he had to train his troops to do better, but he didn?t know if he would be able to. One of his captains entered, gave his salute and waited for his permission to speak. Aramil gave a wave of the hand for him to continue.
?General sir, the casualty report is in. We lost three hundred twenty-nine soldiers, only five hundred remain in our force, we need to regroup with the main army, and replenish our forces.? The captain said. Aramil started pacing, trying to figure out what to do, he didn?t know how to tell his king that he needed more men before he could attack again.

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Gaia King Deteria, as he called himself now, was pacing in his private chambers. He had to defeat his foe, but Ibis, the Sun Master, was a harder opponent than Deteria thought he would be.
Deteria stopped his pacing when he felt the presence of another in his chambers. He turned around and found himself facing Nina, the Queen of the Moon. She appeared as she always had, beautiful, and with a serious look on her face.
?Deteria, this war has gone on for three years now, when will it stop??
Deteria looked at her for a moment, then a smile spread across his face as he shook his head. ?My dear Nina, I shall not stop until the Talisian threat is destroyed,? bitterly, he added. ?I care about what happens here, unlike you.?
That last sentence seemed to strike a cord in Nina, for she started to scowl at him. ?I do care what happens here, it?s just that I cannot take either side without bringing the wraith from the other side onto me. You should know that Deteria.?
?Yes, I understand your desire to stay neutral in this war, but I would still like to have some support from the moon.? Deteria said.
?And you shall receive none. Deteria, I love you, but I do not want to see you fight this war, you and Ibis are destroying this world with every battle you fight. You are destroying what you are trying to save. You are to blind with anger to realize it. So please find a way to stop this war.? Nina pleaded.
?And how would you suggest I do that?? Deteria asked.
?Parlay with Ibis, call up a peace treaty, give into some of his demands, or something like that.? Nina explained briefly.
?Negotiating with humans is like talking to a stone wall, and they expect the world. I would be better off telling a horde of ogres to plant flowers.? Deteria said.

[Dragon Warrior]

This is shibby and I'd like to read more. What exactly is the story about? Maybe I could help you with a title, if you wish :< MEH