Writing The Last

[IckleKoth]

Today, the day of the Apocalypse
Death, destruction everywhere I turn,
The 4 horsemen have taken everyone
Everyone I love
Everyone I Loath
Everyone I know
I have survived but know not how,
I now wish i havent
I may be the last.
I may be the final person left.
I don't know, so I search,
I am going insane
Everything, gone, no birds, animals, nothing.
I search for friends
I search for anything to keep me sane.
I may be the last, but there is always hope.
Today is the day
The end of the world,
The day of the Apocolypse.

This Is the CHANGED Version. See The Original at [url]www.poetry.com[/url] < Last Name, Murdock. First Name, Joshua.>

[Epsilon]

Anyways good poem. The thought is good, and the way it's written is great. Having every thing being taken away only left with your self and nothing more. And alone searching for friends. The world coming to an end, and being the only one left. Just being there to search for a friend or just some sort of hope. This is great! ^^ Hope to read more of your work.

[IckleKoth]

Thank You Ruby. It Was For A School Project. I Got A 70 >:\ ***** Teach. it Took Me 'Bout 10 Minutes So I Guess That's Why T_T.

[Epsilon]

You took ten mintues on that? *looks up, reads poem once more* Um....that's strange. Some times if you take time on a peom, some times it can get messed up. On the other hand though you can come out with a good poem the same way. I guess it's just the way your thinking of things I guess. Anyways I read the original and the one you have above. This one is much better cause it has more feel to it. It's also strange that you had only gotten a 70, I think you should have gotten in the 90's or at least 80's.