Art Original Characters

[eleanor]

[size=1]I made some picture of my original characters! I love them to death...heh.

[IMG]http://maladjusted161.250free.com/artwork/tachi.jpg[/IMG]

That's the first one! [/size]

[Demonic Angel]

[size=1]It's cool, but...there's something wrong with the shoulders. o.O
Or maybe it's not...dunno but i think there's something wrong with it.
But the other parts are great. So Amazing picture! ^_^[/size]

[eleanor]

[size=1] Yeah, I think it's how I draw shoulders. I tend to make them slope down [i]a lot[/i] for some readon.

[IMG]http://maladjusted161.250free.com/artwork/003.jpg[/IMG]

And there goes the second one...[/size]

[Demonic Angel]

[size=1]Ooo, i like the second one, but the first one is also interesting too.[/size]

[eleanor]

[size=1] Really? I liked the first one better...::shrugs::

Here's my third picture:

[img]http://maladjusted161.250free.com/artwork/seth.jpg[/img] >_< I don't like this one at all...[/size]

[terra]

Mm. The third guy is pretty hot. Love that open shirt. Maybe you could put in a hint of that eye that's hidden by his hair, though ... at the moment he just looks ... like he only has one eye. Like, maybe we could just see a corner of his eye peeking out :)

Go with your style on the sloping shoulders thing, but I agree with Demonic Angel, the first one's shoulders a bit [i]too[/i] slope-y. The other two's shoulders are fine, though. And of course I can never draw original characters so I'm impressed :) Nice job!

[Braidless Baka]

[color=red][size=1]I really like your drawings mal... it doesn't matter where I see them ^_^ I can turn round to anyone now and point out your style, it's so unique ^_^

One thing I've noticed is you tend to hide the eyes (or maybe it's just in these drawings) and they're not actually hidden by anything... but they don't look out of place... am I making sense here? *blinks*

I really think they're all good. Although I like the first one the best - the shoulders do irk me a little though - and the third one comes a close second. And I like the birthday you picked for the second one ;) meaningful ^_^;;

Are these actually for anything? I know you enter contests and whatnot, or are they doodles/muses?[/size][/color]

[eleanor]

[size=1] I was bored, and it was very late at night, so I thought, "Heck, why not?" Lol, they're just sketches, really. I have five OCs that I'm in love with right now...^_^

Yes, I do tend to hide the eyes when I'm drawing facing that look striaght forward. I don't know what happened to the third one, lol. I used to only draw characters looking to side or 1/3 away, so I've been practicing looking foward faces lately.[/size]

[Braidless Baka]

[color=red][size=1]I don't draw so much, but I have at least *counts* geez... I must have at least a dozen OCs that I really love ^_^ - But I write, so rather than sketching, I tend to jot down passages about them in notebooks or whatever.

What do these OCs do? Do you have any story ideas for them? Or are they just muses waiting for something to happen to them?[/color][/size]

[eleanor]

[size=1] Well, one of my OCs (his name is Matthew...need a better name) is not so much involved with the other four. I have numerous pictures of my female OC, and she's one of my favorites. I was thinking of developing an anime plot, probably something to do with some sort of legend. If you noticed, my OCs are all from succesful ancient countries (Greece, Egypt, China, Japan, and Atlantis) Heh, I don't know if I really beleive in Atlantic or not, but it seemed like a neat thing to add in.

The first person (Greek origin)'s name is not really Tachi, as that's obviously a Japanese name. I guess it's his nickname or something....

The second one is Atlantian, he doesn't remember his name and was granded o3 by some guy. I still have yet to figure this whole thing out.

The third one is Egyptian, and I think Seth was one of the High Preists of Ancient Egypt. I was hoping I could make my OC some kind of descendant of the real Seth.

Ryouji is the Japanese OC, and I've made him a happy character, much like Duo from Gundam Wing or Ed from Cowboy Bebop. He's just...I don't know. I'm not planning on making him have some scarred past like the others. (hehehe)

I have no idea what the name of my female OC is going to be. She's the one from China, and with a personality similiar to the Asuka from Evangelion. Except, not nearly as arrogant. If I were to make an anime, I would most probably make her the narorator (sp?!).

Matthew is a characer that comes off and on, but I'm making him very important to the whole 'legend' thing. And guess what? I'm horrible at making plots and it'll take ten thousand years to come up with a good one. lol...

But I have a picture of all five male OCs. [URL=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=27936]::cough::[/URL] Hope this plot doesn't sound too cheesy. [/size]

[ephemeral]

I think the shoulders of the first one is kinda messed up, but the other two are good. The second one sort of scares me, lol! ^_^