Writing Deception

[Phantom]

[color=red][size=1][center]An unraveled knot
A Gordian knot, the
Illusory hand cradles it?s
Young spawn

Cradled as though to
Impede upon its fervent brood ling
To act as a façade within a façade
Lingering, growing to its limit

At once released upon a pallid youth
Common sense blown away, in ruins
The deceptive twist and its yearning
For that swift existence-thieving moment

The fleeting moment to be [i]Taken[/i].[/center][/color][/size]

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] *throws roses* Bravo! That was awesome, Mishka! Very descriptive and brooding, just like I like 'em. Like I've said before, you're a very talented writer.


P.S. [i][b]Evelyn.[/i][/b][/color][/size]