Zen Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 Hey, everyone, i'm creating two manga sereis. One of the is called 5-Five Love and its like a mix between Love Hina and Ranma 1/2 and another thats going to be called Strange Lif3 and its like a mix of Akira and FLCL(Furi Kuri). I just wanted to know if you guys thought that these were good ideas for mangas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Semjaza Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 There isn't exactly enough information here for me to give a good opinion on any of your ideas... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted July 30, 2003 Author Share Posted July 30, 2003 Well, i don't want people stealing my ideas, but here. 5-Five Love is about a 19 year old in college who is a talented martial artist. One day, he sees a group of five girls who are best freinds getting attacked by a gang of thugs. He disposes of the thugs and the girls fall in love with him. They are now constantly talking too him and going to his dorm. But the guy isn't a very popular guy. He is always being challenged too fights and those thugs belonged to a gang and are now after the guy and the five girls. The girls act as almost a burden too the young man, as everytime the are around him, he gets in fights. This starts too get annoying to the guy and the girls fight over him through out, constantly making hte moves on him. Strange Lif3 is about a young 13 year old who is slightly pervetted and adgettaed by his borring life. One day, while skateboarding, he is hit by a truck. When he wakes up, he has uncontrollable telekinetic abilites that reflect his feelings and inner thought. Expect alot of skirt flipping and crushed bullies. And thats the basis of both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dd protector Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 Wow. Strange Lif3 sounds kinda kewl although the plot seems bizare. But 5-five love actually seems kinda corny. Its just a basic hero situation, it needs someting else. But hey thats just my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted July 31, 2003 Author Share Posted July 31, 2003 Well, actually 5-Five Love is more of a comedy than anything else. There are one or two fights an episode and the girls are the ones who are actually bothering the guy. Kinda like Tenchi Muyo. He doesn't ask for them, they just come too him, and he finds himself protecting them when there around. Weird and funny is what i was going for with Strange Lif3. I guess thanks.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayokano Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 I like Strange Lif3,that would be funny.The whole idea of getting hit in the head and becomeing telekinetic when getting hit with something is cool. *goes and hits himself with a pan* Ummmmm...everybody eles has said what I was going to say about 5-Five love..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 Might not want to read my post. I don't really have anything nice to say, but I'm trying to say something nice... Ummm..., intresting. Sorry, I lied, VERY intresting. How did you could up with these things? Geez...Strange Lif3, intresting, plot should work out well. And 5-Five Love. I got nothing to say about, cause sounds like tenchi with a twist in the whole plot. To me these would sell well as mangas, and might do well as a anime show. Other then that I got nothing nice to say. Ok, I think...I'll keep my mouth shut forever now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 I like both ideas. Like Ruby said, I think that 5-Five Love is indeed like Tenchi, but it would still sell good as a manga and anime. I would enjoy to see them both. ~A fan of fan fiction~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted July 31, 2003 Author Share Posted July 31, 2003 Thanks all. I can't wait to finish the first issue of Strange Lif3. I'll emedentley put the first issue on a site. From there, i'll let you guys read it. Feel free to countinue to post so i know how i can improve it or just give me a comment. Maybe be like a critic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 O_O wow, can you really handle three mangas? The new one your making is a manga, isn't it? What's Underground about? I like the title, 'Underground' sounds like it would be fun to read. Some reasone the title undergorund makes a few words pop into my head. Anyways, please tell more. ^^ that is if you don't mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted August 2, 2003 Author Share Posted August 2, 2003 All righty. Its full title is Underground Warrior. It follows the stroy of a 15 year old guy named Kenji Tsukasa. He lives at home near poverty with his single mom and little sister. Kenji lives in a small apartment building. His next-door neighbour is a great martial arts teacher mastering Jeet Kune Do. His name is Onizuka. Onizuka is the closest thing too a father/ brother that Kenji has ever had and he teaches him martial arts for free, seeing the young boys potential and determination. Kenji beats him self into an extremely powerful fighter and comes too the strenght of a grown man. Kenji, always needing money, hears of an Underground fighting league simply called "Underground". Kenji, desperate for money and with no way of getting a job, enters the tournament and actually is veery succesful. He grows a freindship with another young 18 year old fighter name d Yong Lan Koriyashi, whoi is half chinese and half japanese. Now Kenji looks too become the champion of the fighting league so that he may support his mother. But he must also hide the bruises and black eyes he receives from his mother and school freinds. He fights aslo for the effecvtion of his true love aswell. He has a load on his hands. It kinda complicated. But i love action and i needed to do at least one good action story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 ^^ WOW! That I think is the best manga your doing, just my opinion. It sounds intresting, and I love fighting. The name "Onizuka" reminds me of my friends matial arts teacher. His teachers name is "Oni," oh boy just thought of what he must fight like. Just to let you know, if I ever get a chance I'm going to be reading your mangas. All of these story plots are good. But "Underground Warrior" sounds the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted August 2, 2003 Author Share Posted August 2, 2003 Wow, thanks. I probably won't be able too publish it, I'm only 13, so i will probably be posting the script on a web site or something. But, hey, don't count out STRANGE LIF3 yet. I have a bunch of scenes planned out. Like, heres an example, the main Rivals name in Shinji, now what swear word rivals. Now what swear word rhymes with Shin. Hears the scene- Koji and Dan say together- "YO! SH**-JI!" Shinji runs at the two freinds saying- "What the hell did you just call me!?!" Shinji countinues too run and Koji causes a locker door to swing open with his telepathy and its slams Shinji in the face, decking him. DAn and Koji look at each other and say- "WHAT A F***in MORON! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" And give each other high fives. Koji may have htese powers, but it doesn't mean he uses them responsibly. He is very much like Naruto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trigun 11 Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 Both Sound Good. Strange Lif3 Sounds so funny. Maybe you should do an rpg of it. 5-Five Love Does sound like Tenchi Muyo. It should be good. I look forward to them both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted August 2, 2003 Author Share Posted August 2, 2003 It would be an extremely strange RPG. I could give it a try, but ot would be hard too pull off since its pretty much a comedy all a round. I could do an Underground Warrior RPG pretty easily,though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 Yeah, I still think I'd rather read "Under ground warrior". And even if your 13 you could still get it published, you'd just have to talk to NDP, Clamp, or TokyoPop. Your age dosen't matter, to tell the truth, my friend has a chance to get his graphic novel published with TokyoPop. All you'd have to do is get a hold of some one represtenting one of the companies. At let's say an anime or comic book convestion. Underground Warriror might be good as an RPG. You'd just have to have enough fighters, and that kinda stuff. Strange Lif3 sounds funny, but then again it is comedy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted August 2, 2003 Author Share Posted August 2, 2003 I'd prbably go with CLAMP seeing how they have a partnership with TokyoPop and that they are actaully the smallest out of the 3. I think i might just submit the script. I can't draw fight scenes real well, but i can choreograph them with words real well. I already have the first chapter of "Underground" typed on my lap top. it looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 Hmm. Strange Lif3 sounds kind of interesting, especially the skirt flipping part. :luv: *Hits self in head.* Mind outta the gutter. 5-Five Love seems a bit overused to me. Then again, the entire "Tenchi-style" genre is kinda boring IMO. Well, there is my opinion for today. Maybe I should have kept it to myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted August 2, 2003 Author Share Posted August 2, 2003 You seem too have failed too read about Underground Warrior, it will probably take place of 5-Five Love, oh wait, it just did. Read about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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