Writing My first FanFiction

[Shippo]

This was originally an RPG i started up, but it died out quickly. I like the whole idea, so i decided to make a whole new story out of it! O yea, this is my first fanfic so it might not be good^.^ othere than that..enjoy!
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The setting is a different place, and a different world....
A world where music is addoared greatly.
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The reason the music is so valued there, is because every insturment you own, contains a monster, You just have to summon it first...
The way you summon a monster that lies inside your instrument is you have to use your heart and devote your time to summon your monster.
You need skill and heart.
Many people learn how to summon monsters, and then they have tournaments to prove their monsters and themselves.
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Chapter 1-
Kyle sat down on the grassy fields of the park. He reached into his pocket and grabbed his cherished harmonica. When Kyle was 6 years old his grandfather passed away. He gave young Kyle a harmonica to remember him. Kyle has grown since that day, and has learned many new tunes, and melodys. Kyle even mastered the art of summoning the monster within his harmonica....
(short chapter, huh??)
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Chapter 2-
"Hey mom! I want a harmonica when [i]I[/i] grow up!" Said a little boy to his mother.
A small smoothing tune came from the middle of a small crowd. In the middle of the crowd, was Kyle. He was playing his favorite melody on his harmonica. Kyles playing skills attracted quite a crowd.
[b]Meanwhile...[/b]
Down at the [i]OTHER[/i] side of the park, a gang of musicians stared in disgust at Kyle.
"THat kid...He thinks he's the best...We'll show him...RIGHT GANG?!?!"
Exclaimed the group leader.
"Right!!" They hollered back,
"Now...Get your insturments and lets show this crowd what kinda music we can play! Eh, gang?!!?"
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Ehmm, To be Continued :sweat:

[Kesaki_Inedia]

Well it's sound pretty neat so far. Its...kinda short though.