mystikal Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 [img]http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/anime/-_Concerto_-.jpg[/img] my website layout picture. He looks like a girl and she looks like a ghost. the violin was fine before i coloured it. and i didn't know what to do for the sky, so i just did that even tho it didn't match. I also killed my sitie with the layout. click [url=http://shilin.fateback.com/]here[/url] to see the layout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 [size=1] Yes, the violin looks a bit weird. With the way it's positioned, we shouldn't be able to see the finger board, just the girl's fingers. The violin position itself looks strange. Most violinist make it so that the violin's pegs are resting near or on the chest, with the bottom in their laps when they take picture or anything. Also, her girl's shouler isn't matched well with the rest of her arm, it looks a bit weird. Everything else looks allright, it's a very well done picture. I love the CG as usual. I like the layout, too, it's nice. But I liked the previous one better. ^_^[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 Very... nice. I'd like it as a background image, and it is still very cool. Very nice job. (If you drew it.) If not, then good job finding it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arkadyz Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 [color=silver][font=times new roman][b]Ah another fine piece of artwork mystikal...I can only find one thing that bothers me (Other then the ones alreadyt listed by maladjusted) and that is his wrists...It may be a small thing but when someone is such a great artist such as yourself I tend to be overly critical...Those rings that cut off hand where the wrist is look wierd...I dont know if your trying to make it look like hes wearing gloves or what... Other then that lovely drawing... oh and dbzgrl mystikal does all her own drawings :D [/color][/font][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 [size=1] Oh come on, dbzanimegrl, don't be a cynic! (you're copying me! XD j/k...) Mystikal has her own website, so I know she's stealing other people's work. She's just very talented with her work. :D[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystikal Posted August 3, 2003 Author Share Posted August 3, 2003 oh my, o_o. I forgot to shade those friggin "ring" things n the hand T_T. too late. it's everywhere =_=. let's hope no one sees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzureWolf Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 Geez, mystikal: you take the phrase "You are your own worst critic" to a whole new level. :) Conversely, you have probably the best work I've ever seen. It's hard to criticize when someone does such a good job, but you did point out some things that aren't noticeable until you, the creator, reveal them. Yeah, that "guy" really looks like a girl (I've never seen you make a guy - one that actually looks like a male :D). Additionally, I never even saw those ring things until you pointed them out, but I would love to see how the picture looks with them properly colored. EDIT: This picture isn't my favorite out of all your work, and, relative to your other pieces, I like it much less. Stand-alone, however, it's great (I just think you've done [I]MUCH[/I] better before). Thought I'd say that too. Hope you don't take that too negatively. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 [size=1] Being a good critic on your own work helps you tremendously. It stops you from being too arrogant, and let's you correct flaws in your work. Though, if you over-do it, it's just plain annoying to other people.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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