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Dorvalla, an outlying planet in the Videnda sector, was well renowned for it's warm saline seas, verdant forests and arable grasslands that stretched off into distant horizons. But much of Dorvalla's reputation, and it's business, came from the mining of Lommite ore, which was a vital component in the production of transparisteel; a strong, transparent metal used for viewports in starships and ground-based canopies. At one point, Dorvalla was so rish in Lommite that over a quarter of the population was employed in it's extraction.

However, Dorvalla fell into problems sometime shortly before the Clone Wars, and it has never really recovered. Eventually the Lommite mines started to run dry. Lommite Limited and InterGalactic Ore, the Planet's two biggest mining companies, both pulled off the Planet when it threatened to become unprofitable. What little Ore is left is mined by insignificant colonies who struggle to get any business at all, especially since the discovery of Lommite pockets near to the Coreworlds. The mines, it seems... were destined to become graves that the Dorvallan's were slowly digging themselves into.

However, their troubles were only beginning...

The Republic finds itself at relative peace since the destruction of the Yhuzan Vong*. They go about their daily problems as they used to... the Jedi Council again firmly established within the ranks, as it has always been. They paid little attention when Dorvallan miners send distress calls of "miners going missing". At the time, they believed they had much bigger problems. However, soon these missing miners became slaughtered colonies. Entire colonies of miners were being found dead, not robbed or pillaged, simply dead. The only other things harmed were their radio equipment. The attackers obviously didn't want their victims calling for help.

In desperation and fear, several Dorvallan mining copanies posted ludicrous bounties for anyone who could bring in the killers, alive or dead. The attackers, who seemed to live in the vast forests, only emerging to attack the colonies, were completely anonymous. Any bounty hunters willing to take in the task would be doing so completely blind.

The Republic finally contacted Dorvalla and instructed them that posting bounties was not an appropriate course of action. The Dorvallan's replied simply that the Republic would not help them, and so they had to help themselves. In response to this, the Republic sent in a Special Task Force to investigate, and to provide protection for Dorvalla's largest existing mining company; Dorvalla Lommite Inc. Three days after the Task Force landed on planet, they, and the entire crew of Dorvalla Lommite Inc. were found dead. However, this time the attackers sent a transmission back to the Republic from the Task Forces radio equipment:
"You have raped Dorvalla of it's beauty and freedom. We are taking out Planet back so we may nurse her. All who interfere shall suffer a fate worse than that you have inflicted upon our Planet. You have been warned..."

The activities of Dorvalla have troubled the Jedi for some time. Since the first distress calls, the Jedi have felt a strange disturbance from Dorvalla, something through the force that is neither light nor dark. With this message, they decided to send in a small group of Jedi to invesitgate... and, if nessecary, deal with the attackers.

*For this story I am assuming the Yhuzan Vong were beaten.

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Okay, you can be one of the Jedi going on Planet, you can be a bounty hunter going after the attackers, you can be a miner, a senator, whatever the hell you like. You are free to pick any race you want, and I will be happy to help with any information you need.

Here's what you need in your sign up:

Name:

Age:

Race:

Occupation: [Your job. This includes Jedi]

Weapon(s): [Remember, Jedi do not carry blasters. Also, try to be reasonable with the amount of weaponry.]

Ship: [Again, Jedi do not have ships of their own. All Jedi who join can post their preffered ship that is assigned to them on missions. Normally this is a starfighter or some type.]

Bio: [A brief account of your characters past.]

Description: [What your character looks like.]

Personality: [Is your character a psychopath? Let us know here...]

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[B]Name:[/B] Kain Vaskor

[B]Age:[/B] 29

[B]Race:[/B] Chiss

[B]Occupation:[/B] Jedi

[B]Weapon:[/B] Single-bladed Crimson Lightsabre

[B]Bio:[/B] Born on the Chiss homeworld of Csilla, he was discovered by the Jedi at a very young age, and taken into the Temple for training. He went through the training as did every other child, and was chosen to be a Padawan when he turned 13. His skill in battle quick earned him respect from elder members, even though he was only a young man. Given his talent and his abilities, it was only a matter of time before he grew arrogant. During puberty, he had an unusual desire for power... which manifested when he was constructing his lightsabre. He constructed the handle to look like his masters out of respect, as most Padawans do, but when Kain found the crystals he wanted to use, he found he could channel his energies into it. Tempted, he began channeling into it his desire for power. The next thing he knew, he awoke with crystals in his hand that had a strange glow to them. Inserting them into the handle, the result was a blade that had a red glow, much like Sith lightsabres of old were said to have. The council was furious with Kain upon discovering this... telling him that such things were the path to the dark side. Kain, through desperation, depressed his desire and ther such things, knowing that that path was wrong for him. However, the council made him keep his lightsabre as it was until he became a Knight, as a reminder of what he may have become. He passed his trail at 19, but chose to keep his lightsabre, as he had grown accustom to it, and was fond of the fact that it made him more individual. He has recently begun to study Vaapad (form VII lightsabre combat) from a Jedi holocron, which was the style that Jedi Master Mace Windu had invented, and had volunteered to go to Dorvalla when he heard of the crisis there.

[B]Description:[/B] Blue skin, completely red eyes, scruffy black hair. Stands at 6'3" tall. Kain has a well developed body, though he does not look bulky. He wears deep brown Jedi robes (like Anakin in AOTC), with a black cloak over it.

[B]Personality:[/B] Like most Chiss, Kain is very intelligent, and has a knack for using logic over instinct... which is why he sometimes finds it so hard to trust the force. Pragmatic and dedicated, he always displays a certain authority, but recognises his superiors...
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[B]Name:[/B] Hayden Dimmack

[B]Age:[/B] 30

[B]Race:[/B] Human

[B]Occupation:[/B] Bounty Hunter

[B]Weapon(s):[/B] A Heavy Blaster Rifle, with its stock cut off, and the barrel hacked off and rounded out: Making it a very powerful Blaster Pistol. and a EE-3 Blaster Rifle

[B]Ship:[/B] A re-configured TIE-Fighter, its Flat out-ward wings have been replaced with flaying, strech wings. The cock-pit has remained the same.

[B]Bio:[/B] He was condemned from his Home Planet for acts of Treason. For being at a young age, he wasn't to be killed. A cargo barge to Kamino was to drop young Hayden off there. Where he was to set out on his own with help from no-one from his Home Planet.
He wandered the wilderness of Kamino until arriving at what seemed to be an extremly old camp. The tents were ravaged of weather, and the supplies where gone, traces of them could be found here and there. Hayden stumbled on a decaying body in armor of a sort. Hayden lifted the armor and the decaying body, drifted into the air, dust. He un-latched the buckles on the side and put it on. He lifted the helmet and put it on his head. He put the Thigh-guards, and shin guards on. He put the boots on which seems to have tiny claws at the end. He put on the Guantlets that had various gizmos inside, all of the armor was sizes to big for him. He grabbed the Blaster next to the dust of a body and, holstered the Blaster Pistol at his side. He continued on and came upon a village. People who even gave him a slight glance ran in terror. One old man pulled him aside and asked him why he was so far from home. Hayden told the old man his story and was asked how he obtained powerful Mandalorian Battle Armor. Hayden then grew up in that town, training under the Blaster. Until one day various Vagabonds ravaged his home-town and killed all. They left Hayden wounded and dying. Hayden survived and went after the Vagabonds. His Mandalorian Armor saved him countless times, as it saved him during the raid on the Vagabonds home. After getting revenge for his home he became a Bounty Hunter to offer his skill...for a price.

[B]Description:[/B] Wears Deep Blue Mandalorian Battle Armor. It is dented and rusting due to its over-use. He rarely removes his helmet, but when he does he has short brown hair that naturally spikes itself up. He has a scar running down his left green eye.
His right eye is a deep Green, and his pupil is a square.

[B]Personality:[/B] He usually keeps to himself, but when talking needs to be done. He keeps calm and talks in a mono-tone, which make him a very calm and mannerd person.
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Does this take place during the Old Republic or the New Republic?

[b]Name:[/b] Kelath "Kel" Conotha

[b]Age:[/b] 33

[b]Race:[/b] Human

[b]Occupation:[/b] Jedi Knight

[b]Weapon:[/b] Lightsaber; black blade

[b]Ship:[/b] n/a

[b]Bio:[/b] Born in Coruscant, he was constantly surrounded by aliens and Jedi. When it came time for him to make his lightsaber he didn't make the crystal for it. He did it the hard way and mined for his crystal, which was no easy task. When he finally completed it he was surprised that the blade turned out black, he hadn't ever seen one like it. He trained very hard with his saber and became very good with it.

The Jedi Council chose Kel to go to Dorvalla, because they thought that his skills with the force and his lightsaber would come in handy.

[b]Description:[/b] Shoulder lenght blonde hair tied back, mustache and goe tee. Blue eyes. 6'4" tall. Normal build.

[b]Personality:[/b] Kel is happy, he loves life and everything about it. Even though he is happy he is still very serious, but there are always ways to get a good laugh out of him. When in battle Kel changes even more than normal. He acquires a ferocity about him that makes him an unstoppable force.
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I've read most of the new jedi order books. I even know how the yuzhan vong would react to jedi and machines. If this is after the new jedi order books I all ready know what to write. I read alot of star wars books
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Name: Irvine kairow

Age:20

Race: human

Occupation: jedi knight, fighter pilote

Weapon: a light sbare with a purple blade, smoke bombs, blaster

Ship: x-wings

Bio: like most jedi he was trained in the jedi temple after it was moved away from black holes and relocated. Before he left to go train in the temple his father told him that he would get him a ship. Once he came home from his training his father had gotten him a old x-wing and a R-two modle droid. He read about what the yuzhan vong have done and different fighting styles. It is his dream to fight some one who is as strong as he is or some one stronger. He was sent to dorvalla because the jedi council thought he would be skilled enough and it would be good for training.


Discreption: black hair, blue eyes, sand colored cloak, purple shirt, black pants, brown boot's, blue tint goggles and gloves with hole cut into the fingers

Persionality: He is willing to do what is needed to help others. He jokes around some times but can be serious when needed.
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[color=royalblue][size=1]OK thanks Yoda

[I]Name[/I]: Jerak Desaan

[I]Age[/I]: 26

[I]Race[/I]: Human

[I]Occupation[/I]: Jedi Knight

[I]Weapon[/I]: Lightsabre, blue crystal core (Can't beat tradition)

[I]Ship[/I]: N/A

[I]Bio[/I]: Jerak was born on the planet Correllia where he lived until at age 4 a passing Jedi noticed his powers and requested that he be allowed attend the Jedi Academy on Coruscant and be trained as a Jedi Knight. Jerak's father a local Parts Merchant was overjoyed that his son may exceed him in life and be famous as one of the protectors of the New Republic and allowed his son to be taken for training. Jerak showed very promising skill while in his youngling clan, and was watched eagerly by both his instructors and his instructor's colleagues when it was time for him to be chosen as an apprentice.

In the end, he was chosen by Jedi Knight Riece Jetal. He was slightly sceptical of her at the beginning of his training as she was only just over finishing the trials herself, however he quickly learned to respect her after an encounter with her in Lightsabre combat where he Style 5 over powered him and he was beaten. He promised her on that day the next time they sparred he would win and that he would win well. She agreed to his challenge but said it would not come while he was an apprentice.

He came to respect his Master as the years passed and learned much of what he now holds dear from her. While in combat training Jerak learned the art of Lightsabre Style 2, practised by Master Obi Wan Kenobi. It is a more elegant form of lightsabre combat and Jerak finds that it suits him quite well in combat. Though it has been nearly eight years since he passed the Trials he still kept in regular contact with his Master. However he hasn't heard from her since she went to Dorvalla to recruit a new apprentice and is worried for her safety, the council fears he may have developed feelings for her.

[I]Description[/I]: Jerak has long fair hair left untied (Similar to Qui-Gon in TPM) and a small beard of the same color, he has deep blue sparkling eyes and is quite attractive to the opposite sex. He is normally built and wears robes similar to those of Master Obi-Wan Kenobi in AOTC.

[I]Personality[/I]: Jerak has a normal persona although he is slightly more disciplined that other Jedi he has learned that he can have some enjoyment in life, this is what he believes was the most important lesson Riece taught him. He is a normal person with their ups and downs but is very likeable.[/size][/color]
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[COLOR=royalblue]Why not...?

Name: Vastus Megelani

Age: 28

Race: Massonic

Occupation: Jedi

Weapon(s): Twin blue lightsabres

Ship: She takes public transportation.

Bio: Found at the age of 4, as the sole survior of a natural disaster on her homeworld, she was taken to Coursant [my mind is gone, spelling is off...] and promptly forgotten about. A female Jedi named Thracia found her and took her to the temple. There, she progressed rapidly and was adopted as Thracia's Padawan. Her first in years. The strength of the Massonic people aided her, giving her both a firmness of will and a powerful, yet graceful body. Her fighting style is flowing and flexible, able to bend forwards to the ground and backwards with superlative ease. Thracia taught her the skill of healing, and she uses it with good measure.

She uses both her own lightsabre, and Thracia's. Her master retired as soon as she became a fully fledged Jedi, and gave up her weapon to her student. When she said goodbye, she was immediately "volunteered" to go on this mission to Dorvalla. With her lightsabre technique and power to heal, she is not afraid.

Description: See attachment, generally short, but strong and stuff.... She wears a long cloak over her bodysuit.

Personality: She's rather calm, but grows upset easily and doesn't offer personal information to those who ask. She will be kind and compassionate, but can change in the blink of an eye.[/COLOR]
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[color=ff00cc][b]Name:[/b] Tsri Talaris

[b]Age:[/b] 27

[b]Race:[/b] Human

[b]Occupation:[/b] Jedi

[b]Weapon:[/b] Purple Bladed Lightsaber

[b]Ship:[/b] -none-

[b]Bio:[/b] Ever since she can remember, Tsri always feared her dreams. Sleeping at night would be her most difficult task, for her dreams would always be nightmares of people dying and suffering. Ear-splitting screams and brutal deaths would play constantly in her mind, even after she awoke, sudden flashes of her dreams would appear. Her mentor would constantly wake her up at night, to find her sobbing or shivering. Because of her visions, Tsri prefers not to speak to anyone else, because everyone she sees, she has visions of dying. A few times, the people she had seen from her dreams died the following week, or suffered the exact way she had seen them. Therefore, her master gave her a device to record her dreams, so they could interpret them once she awoke. Recently, most of her visions were of people residing in the planet of Dorvalla, but as always, all she could see of the murduers was a shadow.

[b]Description:[/b] Tsri has medium-short, straight, layered ice-blue hair, that starts at her eyes, and layers after every inch. She prefers to wear a black jumpsuit, with a black, hooded robe over it. Her eyes are usually the same color as her hair, but tend to shift colors depending on her mood. At a height of 5'6 and thin build, she's not very strong, but very fast, and can continue fighting for a long period of time.

[b]Personality:[/b] Tsri tends to be quiet, and is somewhat shy. She avoids contact with other people, and keeps to herself.[/color]
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Okay then, I'll start this up soon. Seeing as I can't be bothered to make anyone cry, all applications are accepted. For once, I have chosen to ignore some of the mistakes in the earlier sign up's... such as Dmitri's "mined" black crystal. I'm sorry friend, but all crystals for lightsabres are obtained by mining for them...

I shall leave the sign-up's open for a while longer, so others can join if they choose and Outcast can complete his own profile.

With all that said, good luck... and may the force be with you.
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Name: Sylian Day

Age: 27

Race: Human

Occupation: Bounty Hunter/ Parts Trader

Weapons: Blaster pistol and other small items she comes along.

Ship: In the process of being built. Her group, however, has a guardian class system patrol craft they use to go on missions.

Bio: Sylian was born to a family of traders who lived on a planet, Fondor. From them she learned from them of the best parts to make ship and of weapons that many people looked for. At an early age she began to help her father build ships as well.
After so many encounters with not so polite businessmen she decided to find a way to defend her family as well as get their money back. Many of the more skilful traders showed her how to fight as well as which weapons are more useful in battles. With these skills she picked fights with the young neighborhood boys till she was able to finally fight the men who decided not to pay for her families business use.
Being able to do such a good job, other small traders also enlisted her services and soon she went out on missions with a small group of bounty hunters from her planet. Not the most skillful she is still learning and takes her wins with her losses, but always walks away from each mission with a new found ability.

Description: She stands about 5?10 with a very boyish figure. In order to appear as a man she cut her hair. It normally grows no longer than her ears. She also wears very rugged clothing and her sex usually isn?t distinguished until she speaks. But by that time she has shown her skill and people bypass the fact she?s a female. She has light brown eyes and doesn?t wear much armor at all.

Personality: Stays quiet, doesn?t show her true personality until she?s gotten to know you. Only speaks when spoken to and if she can will only use body motions to talk, (nodding or shrugging of shoulders that sort of thing.) When she can trust you her personality is still kind of cryptic and you only see the mean side of her. She thinks in order to be respected, she has to stay ?hard?.
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I dont have much to time to complete the rest of my sign up so i will complete the rest of it tomorrow.

[b]name:[/b] Seifer Vi-vander

[b]Age:[/b] 26

[b]Race:[/b] Human

[b]Occupation:[/b] Jedi

[b]Weapon:[/b] A silver bladed lightsabre with a white handle.

Bio:

Description:

Personality:
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[COLOR=green]I can't resist a Star Wars RPG...

[B]Name:[/B] Abob Ttef

[B]Age:[/B] 26

[B]Race:[/B] Human

[B]Occupation:[/B] Master Rifleman/Mercenary for hire

[B]Weapon[/B]: Laser Sniper Rifle

[B]Ship:[/B] The [I]Idiot's Array[/I], a Skipray blastboat IX

[B]Biography[/B]: Born on Corellia, in the quiet town of Bela Vistal, Abob grew up spending much of his time outside in the mountains. He got his first rifle well before legally allowed, and has become an expert shot. He decided to use his skills with a rifle to become an Assassin/Mercenary for hire, as a way to see the galaxy and make a hefty profit. Never being one to flee from danger, he leaped at the chance to journey to Dorvalla. He intends to be the first to discover what this mysterious murdering threat is, and exterminate it.

[B]Description:[/B]

[IMG]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=459516[/IMG]

[B]Personality:[/B] Quiet and negative, he rarely says anything nice. He doesn't make friends easily, but when he does, he's loyal to the end.


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