mystikal Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 [url=http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/anime/-_manga_cover_o0o.jpg]click here to see XD.[/url] 'tis my friggin manga cover o_o. It's called rhapsody, not dream and nightmare -.-... yes and I put up my manga on my sitie, even tho there's only like, 4 pages. so if you want, you can go lookie, but it's really sucky so dun laugh at it -_-'' and it's not a space sci-fic or pure-romance kinda thing as it looked like on the first few pages and this stupid pic o_o. SOMEONE TEACH ME HOW TO SHADE DRAGONS AND HAIIIR. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarK DeatH Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 It is VERY cool! Except the dragon looks like a rubber dragon ^^;; Only that. I don't see a problem with the hair though, but the dragon looks like a rubber dragon ^^;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arkadyz Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 [color=silver][font=times new roman][b]Well I checked out your manga on your website...Its not half bad...Some of the background characters are drawn kinda iffy...And the same with a handful of the scenery... But its still cute and funny...The teacher is wacky :p Most of the characters look good and your panel layout is pretty good... The cover page is excellent as always...The dragon does look alittle off but that doesnt reallt bother me that much :D Oh yeah and the way the text looks in the world bubbles I dont really like... Its still far better then most of us could do though so good job :D [/color][/font][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 [size=1] So you finally chose on the manga title! :P I like the picture, but yeah, the dragon [i]does[/i] look like rubber. Put some scaled on it, eh? I also like what you did with the girl, with that...light-effect thingy. But the green-haired guy...is just standing there, alone. ^^ Love the manga, the teacher is very amusing. I have one just like her. [I hate her guts]. Thought, at times, you make people's legs look fat and striaght, like they have no knees. [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Genkai Posted August 4, 2003 Share Posted August 4, 2003 Wow, that's good. And you know it. Except the eyes of the girl, I dunno.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystikal Posted August 4, 2003 Author Share Posted August 4, 2003 XDDDDDDDDD *covers eyes from all the suggestions* i dun wanna seeeeeeeee-- anyways... thanks for the comments... I really suck at drawing if I don't take forever to fix something ioi I wanna draw better... so it doens't look skrewed up and bad -.-''' someone need to teach mee~ T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mei Posted August 4, 2003 Share Posted August 4, 2003 [color=green]Amazing, your work just looks so professional! I love the way you made the drool come off it's teeth though, it's lovely..in a..notsolovely way.^^() I've got to agree with the majority here, the dragon does look a bit..fake.Oo Also, the young woman on the right, well, her legs seem a bit...fat? Maybe it's just me. Otherwise, I think the picture looks wonderful. Keep up the good work, much better than anything I could even dream of doing. Also, I'll have to go check out your manga, it's sounding interesting...[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tical Posted August 4, 2003 Share Posted August 4, 2003 That looks awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavyblade Posted August 4, 2003 Share Posted August 4, 2003 That's really good and the dragon does kinda look rubber. It's great though the people are great and the effects are outstanding. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted August 4, 2003 Share Posted August 4, 2003 [size=1][QUOTE][i]Originally posted by mystikal [/i] [B]XDDDDDDDDD *covers eyes from all the suggestions* i dun wanna seeeeeeeee-- anyways... thanks for the comments... I really suck at drawing if I don't take forever to fix something ioi I wanna draw better... so it doens't look skrewed up and bad -.-''' someone need to teach mee~ T_T [/B][/QUOTE] What's that supposed to mean, eh? Lol...don't worry. Sometimes learning by yourself is the best way. I guess. ::shrugs:: I learned by myself....I always hated online tutorials.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavyblade Posted August 4, 2003 Share Posted August 4, 2003 Yeah they suck and the ones I've seen don't make much sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystikal Posted August 4, 2003 Author Share Posted August 4, 2003 I think legs too skinny don't look... good... o_o but then ppl kept on saying that my drawings have fat legs. I used to draw anorexic ppl and now I think they look wrong. I can't really decide, cus I got used to my own style so much I can't see too much wrongness in the proportions without waiting for half a year or something. how can you draw legs without making they look like they have swollen from sitting for too long? I always want to avoid that problem and I can never find out. [url]http://www.newdawnfades.net/emerald/[/url] this is a really good artist's manga site. She started a manga too, except she cged the pages in detail instead of just colouring it in, like me -.-''' does hers look better? I just wanted to know cus I can't really tell. =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amibasuki Posted August 4, 2003 Share Posted August 4, 2003 [FONT=arial]niftiness. the cover page is awesome. actually, I went to your site and looked at the manga pages you've got done so far (pretty cool, btw). the only thing I could think of with the legs and arms is maybe they're not shapely enough. at certain times (like at the top of the second manga page), the legs looked a little too straight, almost like she was wearing slacks under her skirt. maybe you could try making her calves a bit skinnier than her thighs, and then she wouldn't look too skinny, but she'd still have a nice shape. meh, nit-picki-ness. regardless, you're still doing a great job. I'd kill to be able to draw like that.[/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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