Writing Naruto; The Zen

[Vilearchangemon]

hello!This is my attempt at a naruto fan-fic.This takes place 10 yeares after the end of "Naruto". Naruto and Sakura and Naruto are married,and Naruto has become an instrutor,like Kakashi.The new main charcters name is Shiro,and he poses an unique spirit,but I'll explain that in the fic.I hope you guys enjoy this.


Naruto;
The Zen
Zen 1: Chakra Empowred!

Another fist flew forward,connecting with an elbow,pushing the blocker back a few yards.The attacker landed from midair,and bowed."How was that Master Naruto?" The boy asked." Good Shiro.....very good!That all for today." Naruto smiled again,as he turned back for Konohagakure Village. Shiro stayed,and practiced.As soon a Naruto dissappeared,Shiro summoned up all his Chakra.The wind around him picked up.His silver hair swayed and his blue eyes glistened.A silver flame shot over his arms,and balled up at his fists.Pain shot threw him as the flames dissappeared."Why can't I summon the Kyubiki's true power yet!?WHY!!!!!"

Naruto wandered through the village,and made his way into a small hut."Sasuke!Sakura!Where are you guys!" Naruto shouted,as he wander further throught the hut.he found Sakura asleep on their couch.he walk over to her,and planted a kiss on her forhead.He then walked into the back and found Sasuke.he snuck up on him,and surpiresed him.Sasuke jumped,and turned with a kunai in his hand.He saw Naruto,and sighed."If you value your head,never do that again!"

Shiro once again summoned all his Chakra.The silver flame balled in his hand,and struggled throught the pain."I call you out Kyubiki!I summon your power now!"Shiro stood back and raised his hand high over his head,and planted his feet.'White Flame Cannon!!!!!!!!!!!!!"A pure white line of flames shot from Shiro's hand.His hand scorched,and began to swell."This is Kyubiki's true power then......"he then passed out from the intense pain.The flames died.

Naruto and Sasuke watched in horror as the flames died.They even woke up Sakura.The whole village watched in horror.Naruto was the first to speak."That was the power of a Kyubiki,and it came from where Shiro was!" Naruto looked at sasuke,and then the two dashed off to were the flames came from.

Well,what do you think.