Jamvis Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 i dunno if this is supposed to be in here or in g&s so im gonna put it here and feel free to move it! so ne1 have any poetry? i got some! looky! must i be tormented about my looks? or have my nose forever in the books? must people be more crewl than kind? or do they only have torture in their mind? people as a whole need to clean up their act. and make up for those who lack. people whom ive never met, ive found not one that has liked me yet. look inside of me. what is my flaw? did i do something wrong? did i break a law? as the days go by no one tells me what i did wrong so my life continueally sings this song i have no puprose in life if i do it is to always strive people always hate but if they took the time to relate... they would see my true colors and see that im a gift from above. -Jamvis- thank you for listining good enuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gohans_girl Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [COLOR=royalblue]You must have [SIZE=4]ALOT[/SIZE] of time on your hands[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 Yea u must have lots of time to do that.......Anyway i hate poetry!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lia Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 i like it:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted September 29, 2001 Author Share Posted September 29, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Forte [/i] [B]Yea u must have lots of time to do that.......Anyway i hate poetry!:D [/B][/QUOTE] that hurt my feelings and thanx chic ... ok um any1 else have any entrys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piccolo Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 Great poem. it sound like you're bore of life or something and people ignoring you. You're a talented writer, keep up the good work. Have you ever send your poem anywhere for publishing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Twisted Face Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 he crys to no one ,what for he sits a corner no one knows he sits in a place know one goes he walks around were you cant see him but he sees all of you falling slowly down the steps tattered and torn without repent little is left of this mangled creature but he keeps living, is charged by his soul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted September 29, 2001 Author Share Posted September 29, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B]Great poem. it sound like you're bored of life or something and people ignoring you. You're a talented writer, keep up the good work. Have you ever send your poem anywhere for publishing? [/B][/QUOTE] nah im not sure i could do anything like that... um nice twisted ok um i will post another poem later... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piccolo Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 why don't you try to send your poem to the publisher. I did mine, and one of them get publish, but I don't get pay for it . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted September 29, 2001 Author Share Posted September 29, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B]why don't you try to send your poem to the publisher. I did mine, and one of them get publish, but I don't get pay for it . [/B][/QUOTE] awww then there is no point for me to do that then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Twisted Face Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 im shure you all have already heard this one of mine,but i will post it again: "time seized" as he lay there in the chair hair brushed, pants creased head nearly bare blood so far from rushed time seized he looks down at his wrinkled hands scars faded from his pains and a tear falls from his eye he misses the brands from his life memories so faint from such long times ago wish for just one last look before he died he has forgotten who he was who he is who he knew who he loved who he ever wanted to be did he succeed? was he still not finished did he ever start who is this man did anybody know did anybody ever even care and sadly all he could do was stare his face not describable not quite a face at all no qualities no uniqueness there at all such a plain man that lived in a plain house no designs pure original just a square plain and tall all he needed roof and walls he has long since forgotten his name where he came from, where he will be did he have a life did he know it was time so he decided it was right that he wanted to die he would die because he missed his wife die because he had no life he wouldn't eat he wouldn't drink he had no mind, he couldn't think all those times when he was a kid when he got in trouble as everyone did every time he closed his eyes it all ways seems he would just cry but he never quite knew why at that moment time seized his life flashed by he knew it was his time he remembered every moment every laugh, every tear then suddenly he remembered everything that he held dear he remembered his first teddy bear remembered his first kiss he remembered his first wife long gone all eternal bliss he'd seen so many lives go by day by day a different child faces he rememorized then he smiled and closed his eyes he walked with his wife finally gone and he cried from heaven cause in two young men he lived on and the world ended and drifted away with a snap god took us away but the two young men mysteriously stayed and he remembered he passed away the world ended for him but it was ok cause crying from heaven he remained "time seized" a lot of times we do not realize every little thing that doesn't catch our eye but when you know that you don't want to live then you realize and the memories are the happiest times and from heaven you must cry -twisted face - 4-19-01,4-20-01 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gohans_girl Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [COLOR=royalblue]Im not gonna post my poem it sucks![/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice Dragon v2 Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 im not into poetry that much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gohans_girl Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [FONT=arial]I guss I could post it[/FONT] [SIZE=4]Water[/SIZE] [COLOR=deeppink]Water is blue and sparkels in the sun water is pretty all day long we couldnt live with out water is graet all dy long[/COLOR] [COLOR=skyblue]I wrote it 2 years ago when I was 8 I cant belive I wrote it down![/COLOR] :wigout: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Break Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 Shadows are nothing more, than an object blocking light's path, Don't be scared of the door, That opens to the Class of Math. errrm that sucks big.:laugh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ5 Vegeta Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Gohans_girl [/i] [B][COLOR=royalblue]You must have [SIZE=4]ALOT[/SIZE] of time on your hands[/COLOR] [/B][/QUOTE] What a dumba** remark. Poetry is a way of self expression, and it doesn't mean you have too much time on your hands you idiot, it means you're more talented than [SIZE=4]SOME[/SIZE] other people that sit around and criticize your work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piccolo Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jamvis [/i] [B] awww then there is no point for me to do that then [/B][/QUOTE] Depend on where you sending to. Someplace they pay you cash for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ5 Vegeta Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B] Depend on where you sending to. Someplace they pay you cash for it. [/B][/QUOTE] If you go to [URL]http://www.poetry.com[/URL] you can get your poems copyrighted online and get them put on the poetry.com site and plus every poem you send get's entered into a contest for the best poem of the month and you can win up to 10,000 dollars. Plus professional poets make good money. Like if you have your poems copyrighted and someone wants to use your poem, in a movie, or a book, or a commercial, or a product they're going to make they have to pay you for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nothing674 Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 An Epiphany Have you ever thought? Your mind been caught, In a web of fierce melee? Ever pondered through, With a pacifist view, The hatred of the day? My conscious strewn, Across the room. Wounded where it lay. Now with it healed, A truth revealed. That view is here to stay. This is my poem, I wrote it in creative writing class at school. I wrote it for the Sept. 11 tragedy. I've never been that much into poetry, but it is a very relaxing art form sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted September 29, 2001 Author Share Posted September 29, 2001 well this is a poem to make you think: i hate ppl thusly i hate you all due to the fact that you r ppl... but if i hate blacks does that mean i am in denial of my true charachter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conpiracymonki Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [b]All mines are weird and oh-so freak-ey,..although some are serious..anyways,..there's one in my sig, and here are a few: [u]Dem serious ones[/u] [u]Imagine[/u] (Been published in school mag. Got an award too :p It was the winner out of 117 schools, a contest, for Refugee Week) Imagine having to move to another country Because of a war That other people started. It?s not your fault. In fact, it has nothing To do with you. You leave your friends and relations behind. You arrive and you don?t know anyone, And nobody knows you. You?re alone and scared. You have to make new friends, And get used to the place. You have to learn a totally new language. You go to school And everyone stares at you like You?re different. You feel that you are. But inside you?re the same As everyone else. I?m glad I wasn?t Put in that situation. Aren?t you? [u]Bullying[/u] I get bullied everyday, It hurts inside, and I feel upset. When I go home, I?m still angry, So I shout at my little sister. What?s wrong with that? That?s not bullying? is it? [u]The Teacher[/u] (Been Published in newspaper, and school mag) People used to think that I wasn?t good at anything. They were right, I wasn?t. They used to say all sorts of things ?bout me. I kept it all locked up inside me. So now, when someone has a lot of trouble with something, I help them. Because I know what it feels like. People don?t call me dumb anymore, They call me Sir.[/b] DOIKs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabyGirl Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [color=deeppink]Heh *points to sig* I wrote that one... :p[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conpiracymonki Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [b]Heh *points to sig* I wrote that one :p[/b] (My sig, I mean :rolleyes: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabyGirl Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by AJ2K1 4 Life [/i] [B][b]Heh *points to sig* I wrote that one :p[/b] (My sig, I mean :rolleyes: ) [/B][/QUOTE] [color=deeppink]That poem is all confusé...[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conpiracymonki Posted September 29, 2001 Share Posted September 29, 2001 [b]It about my lil 8 month old sister..U like? :D[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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