White Digivise Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 Only A Spirit Is that what I hear? Have you come back to me? Or are those just memmories, Lingering forever in my head. Someday we shall meet again, Though... will it be a joyous day. Will we be just spirits, Lost in a world. Not heaven, nor of hell. Not of our own, nor of our ancestors. Times change, I know. But how much, your soul alone could never say -W_D Dedicated to(reason of creation): Saying good-bye to friends or am I just saying hello for the first time. Thinking of my freind again. Welcome back to my ife L.L. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 that was beautiful W_D seriously... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 sooo are there anymore entries? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 this is one i wrote while thinking of my daddy!! :D [b]Deeply Pitted[/b] Deeply pitted In my stomach Is all the emotion I have for you If it was Love I?d Let you see it But no-that?s not it Maybe if you looked at me -Not what you want to see- Looked at me! Then you?d know How I was feeling? But now it?s too late The last bit of Love I may have had for you is gone It?ll never return Just be satisfied that I acknowledge your existence? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 here's another...if anyone cares! :D About You I'm not mad at you It's not entirely your fault I do still love you Just not with all my heart I know you have other friends I'm not your only one But when you left to talk to her It nearly broke my heart It's her I have the problem with The problems not with you Though I get jealous sometimes My heart is always true I'm not mad I'm not angry I am jealous this is true I'm not upset I'm not hurt No ... I don't hate you I'm not mad at you It's really not your fault But when you do these things to me It always breaks my heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stardust Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 Here's my award-winning poem I like to watch the stars at night When I'm all alone I like to daydream of worlds all my own I like rainbows after rainy days I like to pick roses and wish they could stay I like to walk through fields of colorful wildflowers I like mystical things unicorns and magic powers I like to walk along the seaside from time to time then for just a moment the whole world will be mine did ya like it?I submitted it to this school writing magazine last year and it got picked to be in it,so,I guess it's a good poem*honest opinions*:angel: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Macaiodh Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 Fantasy World. Oct. 2000- I have read of the Otherworld Where faeries dance on the petals of roses & satyrs lurk in the shadows of trees & powers reside deep in the human mind enabling me to do what mere men only dream of? I have pondered lustfully The stalkings of the vampires in the darkness, Driven only by their thirst for blood & the evils that roam unhindered by the trappings of the flesh? I have probed the minds of the insane & wondered what lies beneath even as I revered the unknown force at work & envied the carelessness of the kill? I have roamed amidst the empty shells That call themselves people & drew back in horror when I saw the void inside & I have seen the zealots in their holy buildings reaching tearfully to the sky for their silent gods then falling helplessly to the grounds at the foot of their altars? I called out in vain to something Whose very existence I questioned For a glimmer, a sign, an answer, Yet it remains silent as before? Until finally I raise the knife to my throat, Desperately praying I will not awake in hell, & then the fear overcomes me That there are no faeries or spirits or other realms That my own soiled hands will be the only reward For this misery which is life, That I will die & return to the dust, That no dark prince will feed me his immortal blood, & then the knife falls from my grasp, & all I can do is weep at the stupid simplicity of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 i thought up this one in church... "THEREFORE" I am God, therefore i am holy. I am an Angel, therefore i am forever. I am human, therefore i make mistakes. I am perfect, therefore i am supernatural. I am one, therefore I am only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Freak Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 Heres almost all of my poems...but 2... [b]You'll Never Know How I Feel[/b](this one is published) When you left me... I cried all night wishing I were dead... I said I was sorry and I meant it... I wish you weren't mad at me The feeling that I hide is bad I'm all torn up inside... Thats the feeling that I hide I love you dearly as if you're my bother... Please come back to me. [b]Death[/b] When Death comes it will take you away, hide you from the very day, and never let you find your way, Death is coming...she awaits your death, and that is Death's way of life. [b]Without[/b] Without death there can be no life, without life there is no hate, without hate there is no love, without love, without hate,without life without death,this would be a cold bitter world. [b]Ode to Silence[/b] Silence comes and silence goes as though th darkness in the meadows... Through out th land... Silence stands Silence comes as it wants and leaves as it pleases... [b]I Heard Some Angels Singing[/b] I heard some Angels singing, Singing along with bells-a-ringing. Their soft angelic voice... helped me choose my choice. When I heard the Angels singing, It brought back sorrow stinging Along with my joy, Also remembering that hearts are not toys. With remembering that all, I began to fall, On my knees I prayed... That you would always remember me, The way I am now. [b]Pain[/b](One of the people in the poem is on these boards) Pain is the worst feeling I ever had It hurts so much I just wanna give up and die But I don't give up Because I have two great friends They just won't let my life end For them, I would fo anything I would die for them... Thats how much I love 'em They are so kind,so caring They may not say it,but the are So for them.I hide my pain but share their pain too This is just a lil "thank you" poem I love you guys!I will never give up on you two.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 sweet! those are totally kool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 I got one. "The Trinity" If America is united in cause and in trust it would be said that we are as one in a whole but we all are not one person. Then why is God The Father, His Son, and the Holy Spirit considered one when they are truly three different beings? I made that in church. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 I think of you day and night, When i think of you i want to take flight I think of you and our love, Sometimes it seems youre from above... I think of you with care, As my thoughts go into the air I dream of you and wish to meet you, Hoping that dream will come true I think of you constantly, As visions of you pass me faintly I think of you all the time, gosh it was hard to make all that rhyme Dedicated to: *truck honks* no one will ever know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Macaiodh Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 i wrote this when i was 14, about this punk i was in love with..heh, heh... --all of me for phil my eyes are always searching for the face that i adore. my body couldn't ever fight the power of his lure. my heart is being strangled, hung ornately on his leather. my mind i'm slowly losing 'til the night we are together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 niiiice and the poem that i had dedicated that too knows who they are and is on these boards at this very moment! -§ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piccolo Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 You guys need to send your poem to publisher. Really, you can make money. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B]You guys need to send your poem to publisher. Really, you can make money. [/B][/QUOTE] yeah ill do that.... are they really that great? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 Maybe Jams and others but not mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 oh stop your poem was good too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piccolo Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jamvis [/i] [B] yeah ill do that.... are they really that great? [/B][/QUOTE] They're good, give it a try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B] They're good, give it a try. [/B][/QUOTE]k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piccolo Posted October 7, 2001 Share Posted October 7, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jamvis [/i] [B]k [/B][/QUOTE] Wish you luck :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamvis Posted October 7, 2001 Author Share Posted October 7, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B] Wish you luck :) [/B][/QUOTE] ill need it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Digivise Posted October 8, 2001 Share Posted October 8, 2001 I know my poems are bad... my endings stink :cross: People around the globe can agree with me there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piccolo Posted October 8, 2001 Share Posted October 8, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by White Digivise [/i] [B]I know my poems are bad... my endings stink :cross: People around the globe can agree with me there. [/B][/QUOTE] I read your poem, it's not bad,you have quite a thought there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted October 8, 2001 Share Posted October 8, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jamvis [/i] [B]I think of you day and night, When i think of you i want to take flight I think of you and our love, Sometimes it seems youre from above... I think of you with care, As my thoughts go into the air I dream of you and wish to meet you, Hoping that dream will come true I think of you constantly, As visions of you pass me faintly I think of you all the time, gosh it was hard to make all that rhyme [/B][/QUOTE] i liked this poem! it was kute! :D treally beautiful!:babble: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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