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black and white chibi, please critique


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[color=teal][b]LOL, I see you got instructions from a how to draw manga book. The blue one, no? My friend Mike had one...But that's off topic! The chibi is okay really...The body's a bit off center from the head though. But otherwise it's great! I wonder how it would look colored...C-ya on the other side! *flys off on one of her winged monkey soldiers*[/color][/b]
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[color=teal][b]Hmmm...Actually, I like the first version better. The eyes look sort of weird with that diamond shape...Aren't they supposed to be rounded off at the bottom of the eyeline? I think it'd look better that way. And also, I think the mouth would look a little better if it was also colored. But otherwise it's okay. C-ya on the other side! *flys off on one of her winged monkey soldiers*[/color][/b]
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Ok, that "c-ya on the other side!" thing is creeping me out. And that is just how I do it. I can have some more stuff up once I get my scanner back. But don't expect it to be amazing, I'm only 11 and have only been drawing seriously for about 6 months.
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The sign off thing IS pretty wierd, but then again, so am I. there's a few things I colored by hand(non digital) at [url]www.geocities.com/comicaganza/yalboart[/url]
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*Shakes head at erinzyger* How could I be best friends with such a nut case? Oh yeah i'm one myself...Well anyhoo back to the subject. Its okay I guess just but you should practice more. Since you're talking about a scanner I'm guessing you did it by hand so I think you should lighten up on the eraser. rember practice makes perfect! If you practice more you will evently get your own stlye thus different and better eyes. Belive me I know... When I started out I used pokemon eyes*shudders*
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