Writing Lost Memory Please R&R [E]

[Trigun 11]

Here's a new piece...really really sorry about the title i know it's extremely inapproriate but i really dont know what to call it...anyway, Please Rate and Review

i've spent so many days living in confusion
living a life that i can't leave behind
'cos there seems to be something missing
that i've kept locked in the back of my mind
and until the day i saw you once more
i never knew what it was that i lacked
until the day i heard your voice again
i realised how much i wanted you back

just saw you standing there
in all your style and grace
your laughter rang through the air
and it puts a smile on my face
every careless word you speak
imprints itself in my mind
never to be erased
from the memories you left behind

all that we were before
all that we wanted to be
how much we tried before
all that's now left of me
has all fallen right apart
and i know it's gonna be hard
to knock down this invisible wall
that has set itself between us
so i'll try to hang on to your memory
even though it seems impossible to carry on
sometimes

would you wipe away my tears like you did before
if you knew i cried everytime i saw your face
would you embrace me once more and whisper words of comfort
if you knew i hurt 'cos i can't forget those days
what would you say if you knew
that there was someone who prayed for you every night
what would you way if you realised
that your memory was the only thing that made life bright

all that we were before
all that we wanted to be
how much we tried before
all that's now left of me
has all fallen right apart
and i know it's gonna be hard
to knock down this invisible wall
that has set itself between us
so i'll try to hang on to your memory
even though it seems impossible to carry on
sometimes

you don't know how much you mean to me
you don't know how much it hurts for me
wonder how long i can carry on
if i just hung on to your memory
wonder if i can pull through all this
if i just hung on to our memory
and all along this time you've just been
standing right next to me

[Inuyasha311]

Hey that was good I liked that..!!!!But I have one ? if you don't mind??

[Trigun 11]

Sure. Shoot the question right at meh