Shinkoru Posted September 5, 2003 Share Posted September 5, 2003 [color=indigo]You said b4 you all liked my manga/anime drawing so heres more! PLEASE RATE! OPINIONS THING TO IMPROVE! Please? :)[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
klinanime1 Posted September 5, 2003 Share Posted September 5, 2003 The proportions are kinda funky. I'd rate it, but I usually get yelled at. I'm such a critic... anyways, cute. Keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavyblade Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 [COLOR=darkblue]I like it but klinanime is right the porportion is way off. But that can be fixed with experience. A bit to lovy-dovy for me but "whatever floats your boat"[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinkoru Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 Tkz to my hubby yeh lovey dovey and porportions r right, lmao shes 16 hes 18. thats ECATLY how it is in the manga, minus her ears, and the kids r exact same, rough lines but same sizes.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 Seen these before..good but proportions are gay... funky would be a gay wway to describe them...kind of like kissing *** and stabbing back all at once lol. aside from lack of porportionary skill your work is pleasing to my eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whadubba Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 Best parts are kiss and the kids. Looked like he was attacking her and he looks too old for her, like she is a little kid and he is much older. The kiss is the best part. awww Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OtakuSennen Posted September 7, 2003 Share Posted September 7, 2003 ooooOOOOOOOOooooooooh. Me likey. I like how you did the Japanese sound effects.. Yet, sadly, I don't know what most of them say without a guide. -_- I haven't mastered Japanese FX yet. But they're right.. The proportions ARE off. However, the three small panels with their mouths are pretty well-done. E heh heh heh.. Um.. Next time try using some sort of ruler or straight-edge. If you are trying to make the panels kinda scribbly, that's good, but it still helps to have a base straight one. [b]7.8/10[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinkoru Posted September 7, 2003 Author Share Posted September 7, 2003 yesh he its in my diary so, i was just doodlin to put out my feelings. And ill scan manga page if u wantb ut the porportion are correct on guy holding girl. Its from Chobits volume 4. Before chi runs off. hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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