Writing something i wrote in my journal

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can't see anyone,
can't touch anyone,
can't hear anyone,
but i hear the music
and it brings back the memories,
of the people i left behind.
Running in the dark,
i feel alone
and the music gets louder,
as it ends.
I'm lost in a wolrd
where no ones there
i am alone
no one else is here.


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