Dragon Warrior Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 This was for art class. We had to draw 5 shaded fruit. I did, then I decided to toss in some more to the picture! Enjoy! ^_^ C&C&C (Comments and critism and crap) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AuroraDragon Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 awww, too cute Gavynn! great shading too! I give it a 9.5! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OtakuSennen Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 >.< Stupid illegal operations. Had do restart this entire long review. HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY, GAVYNN!.. But let us have the review begin with the central aspect of the piece, the bowl of fruit. Everything is really well-shaded in this picture, DW. You must have put a lot of effort into that aspect. The fruit are drawn.. Properly, I guess you could say. Nothing to say about how the fruit is not exactly round, but is close, eh? The bowl seems to be kinda angular around the rim though, but maybe you intended that. The dog and wolves are not anatomically correct, so I'm afraid I'll have to mark you down for that.. :p (I'm joking.. Of course.) But I noticed something about the dog on the right.. His right hand, holding the banana, has three fingers and a thumb. Well, there MAY be a thumb there. You can kinda see a nub for a thumb, but it's kinda hidden by the banana. His left hand, however, has three fingers and no thumb. If I'm right, Gavynn, I caught you. Ha ha ha.. Also, the trees' trunks are a little wide to have such thin branches. Good treehouse material they would make, but that's not how trees normally are. *squints at the signature in the corner* Does that say your last name is Brown..? [b]9.4/10[/b] Will your teacher accept the extra material around the fruit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AuroraDragon Posted September 25, 2003 Share Posted September 25, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by OtakuSennen [/i] [B] Also, the trees' trunks are a little wide to have such thin branches. Good treehouse material they would make, but that's not how trees normally are. [/B][/QUOTE] lol, that's very true, but they're still better trees than I can draw!:rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 [size=1][color="666666"] Great job Dragon, I love the way you shadowed the trees. Most people I think just color it in but you made in some areas a darker shadowing giving it some more description. The only thing I do not like about it is the right tree the one that fat[no offense to the artist or the animal ] wolf or dog is leaning agaisnt is so large in the trunk area, ya know? But any way great job and keep up the great drawings. [/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted September 26, 2003 Author Share Posted September 26, 2003 Yes. My teacher accepted the extra bit. She was happy to see it. I finally turned in all my art to her. As for the tree, I'll admit that. I'm not the best tree drawer XD As for the thumb, there isn't one. He's a stinkin' dog XD EDIT: Now I've looked at the pic. I am correct. It is not a thumb. Look closer and you'll see it's a part of the banana peel =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Booboo Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 As I said on instant message.....It's CUTE!!!. I love the shading also. 9.5/10 from Booboo, goody job. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted September 26, 2003 Author Share Posted September 26, 2003 Heh, thanks. I should write down how many people say this pic is cute. I don't usually draw "cute" stuff so it's a change of pace, I suppose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epitome Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 [b][color=orangered][size=1]I think it looks great. The shading is done exceptionally well and the drawing itself is very well done too. I like also how you made all the characters look really happy. You did a great job DW...[/size][/color][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted September 26, 2003 Author Share Posted September 26, 2003 Why tank you, Vash :) I was meaning to make them like that. Of course, the wolves have their tongues out and someone thought the one to the left was licking the watermelon O.o I guess it does look like it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Samedi Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 Personally, the dogs looked slightly unreal to me. perhaps slightly wrong dimensions. Heh. I know, I'm picky. but otherwise, I find your pictures quite good, with nice drawings, clear definition, and professional shading. 'Grats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted September 26, 2003 Author Share Posted September 26, 2003 Well, the dogs are meant to be sort of cartoony, if that is what you mean O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whiteblaze Posted September 28, 2003 Share Posted September 28, 2003 I think it looks pretty good and I like the wolf on the left that looks so happy, unlike me at the moment, and the dog to the right is making such a pig of itself! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meteora Posted September 28, 2003 Share Posted September 28, 2003 [color=666666][size=1][i]Thats a great drawing. You make me look bad.*cries* Well anyways, i like the drawing. You are an awsome shadr. Then the cartoon dogs are adorable. It seems as if they are telling jokes to each other, because it looks like they are having a good time together. Well I'll rate it a 10/10.[/color][/size][/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted September 28, 2003 Author Share Posted September 28, 2003 Heh. Telling jokes, laughing, having a good time. That leaves it to the imagination, doesn't it? :) And Keno! Where have you been?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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