NashvilleDream Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 Ok, This popped into my head a few months ago, and I just got to writing it down, I'm not sure if it allready exists, but it's from a fanfiction that i haven't finished or gotten to writing down yet. If ever you're lost and alone Look up to the stars for my face And if you are lonely call to me And listen for my voice on the wind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megumi Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 A little short... If you write some more it might be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted September 28, 2003 Share Posted September 28, 2003 [size=1] It just sounds like what you said: something that just popped up. This is, in some cases, what a poem is: but you have to let it grow more than those few lines in that one stanza are. So it's shortchanged. And it's only okay. I've said this in three threads already lol, but whatever. My motto: we all write garbage, and all poets start somewhere. Keep writing.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NashvilleDream Posted September 28, 2003 Author Share Posted September 28, 2003 It's a lullaby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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