DragonBlood Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 Consumed by the darkness I wander the land. The ones I love, Have gone And now I am alone. To wander the plains of life, And the memories of the past. To comfort the weak, And bring fear to the fearless. I am a prisoner, In my own mind. My soul, Is free. Yet chained to eternity. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meteora Posted September 27, 2003 Share Posted September 27, 2003 [color=666666][size=1][i]Wow this is a good peom. DOes it mean something? If so tell us. Well anyways I like the poem. It was well writen.[/color][/size][/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted September 28, 2003 Share Posted September 28, 2003 [size=1] It's okay. It does what it does...and that's all it does. Really, I've read so many poems like the one you've posted that the words don't even hit me anymore. It's just like reading the same drill over and over again. This is where originality should come in, that's the only thing that makes writing poems about the same thing different...and interesting. Just keep writing. Every poet starts somewhere, and we all write garbage.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonBlood Posted September 28, 2003 Author Share Posted September 28, 2003 Yea, well, I know there are a ton out there, but I don't care, It dose hase a meaning, but You'll find that out soon enough, look for my FanFic, I don't know when it will be started, since its kinda long. But It will come, the poem has to do with one of the chars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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