Writing Vampire poems

[Kittie]

please feel free to post any poems you may have about Vamps here...and tell me what you think of course! :D

[color=silver][u]Seraph [/u]

He sat on the bed
And just looked at me
His midnight blue eyes
Were pools you could dive into

He whispered pretty words to me
The words flowed through my mind
Whispering things he had not said
(whispers in the dark)

He flicked his tongue across his lips
Revealing just a hint of his fangs

His bewitching eyes called me
Beckoned me towards him...

My heart thudded loud in my throat
I had to swallow hard to calm it
...not lust this was desire

I had to look away from his eyes
The look was too intimate

He called my name
His voice was like velvet
Rubbing all around me
The sound resonated off the walls
All the radiance of his voice

He caressed my face with his hand
The sensation lingered long after he removed
his hand

His kiss was as intoxicating
As the sweetest wine
New sensations danced around in my mouth

He drew strange words on my neck with his tongue
Then he let his fangs sink into my neck
It was like silk on a wound ? gentle but with an edge of pain

Darkness flowed over my eyes and consumed my world
In that instant we became as one
And I became as him
A child of the night...[/color]


[size=1]Author's Questions/Comments:
Seraph, in Christian and Judaic belief, an angel of the highest order.
this is like a pre-quel to Shade of Moonlight! ^-^
this is the start of my Shade of Moonlight Chronicles!!
(o^-^o) Kit Kat Moon[/size]

[Amorphous]

[color=crimson][size=1] First of all that was completely uncalled for Delaz, if it was up to me I would of had you banned in an instant. But it's not and I'm not a moderator. So I'm not going to say anything, but to everyone else, ignore that post. Well it would be the best thing to do.

Anyways, I'm completely obessed with vampires or I was at one time. I was more into the history of them. Still I write about them in an RP almost every single day. That's a great poem though it really gets the more seductive side of vampires. Though in my own belief I don't believe thats how they ever should be. Just for the fact that they are supposed to be pure evil.

Still though great poem. [/color][/size]

[TigerGodess]

Honestly I liked that poem it is very creative and poetic.;)

[Kittie]

i've always thought Vampires to be very dark and seductive creatures. Very beautiful...I'm a bit obssessed with them as my poems reveal...


[color=silver][u]Shade of Moonlight [/u]

In the silence
Of the night

The shadows play
With the drops of moon (light)

Illusions of Hope and Love
Lull the weak and innocent minded

Perfect for a feeding
Perfect for a Valentines Feast...

Before this night is over, my Love,
We shall taste upon their Lust

*Blood is sweeter
When the Love is stronger...*

*Love is stronger
When the mind is weaker...*

As we connect in a kiss
Empty thoughts fill my head

I can taste on the tip of your tongue
The sweetness of all things lost and gone

Blissful thoughts fill my head
As the blood drips from your lips

As a gentle breeze caresses my face
It softly whispers Happy Valentine?s Day... [/color]

[size=1] this is like a continuation of the other poem...it was written on the Day of Love :rolleyes: like it's not obvious...so well...just tell me what you think!! [/size]

[Ares]

I think you're crazy if you are obsessed with vampires. The poems are artistic and well written, but vampires you shouldn't be obsessed with. (guess we got Bram Stoker to thank for this world's madness.) Well, have fun writing. keep up the good work.......okaaaaaaaaaaaaay.

[Amorphous]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Ares [/i]
[B]I think you're crazy if you are obsessed with vampires. [/B][/QUOTE]


[color=crimson][size=1]So what's so bad about being obsessed with vampires or anything for that matter? I mean really, I'm completely obsessed with vampires. But I don't take it in an over dosage. There is lot of things I'm obsessed with. For example Nine Inch Nails, Vampires (of course), Anime, and Manga. But I don't go crazy over it and you wouldn't be crazy because of an obsession. It's a normal thing, but it's when fads start up, that it gets annoying. So I try to stick with original obsessions. Anyways, onto the poem.

It has a really nice effect in it. It shows the more seductive and passionate side of vampires. Not the type I'm exactly into, but still the words and everything flow nice.[/size][/color]

[Heavyblade]

I love the first one! It's great how you included the good and bad of vampires (sex then your soul) I dislike the second one because it really doesn't flow. The stanzas are too short and choppy and need to be stuck together. Good work with the subject. I think you captured the vampiric essence very nicely. Good work.

[Kittie]

thank you s'much for you comments everyone! i didn't like that poem that much either...but yeah it's done with now!! :laugh:
here's another one...like the conclusion...and i don't like this one much either

[color=silver][b][u]~Fin~ [/u][/b]

Faraway you are
Has my voice reached you yet

You stare up at the sky
Past my face and into the darkened sky

This night is darker than usual
Death rides in the air all around us

Don?t say anything
You?re just a bit frightened now
So don?t say anything

Inside of the dream
Inside of the memory
We?ll definitely meet again

The silver in your heart
Forces out the pure red crimson
That once filled you with life

Not even my blood
-Or Love-
Can bring you back to health

The commotion reflected in your eyes
It all happened too fast
And now has left you weak...
Dying in my arms

Your fangs still shine
Though they will pierce my skin no more

You flashed a smile at me
-A weak smile-
And the light from your eyes vanished

Into the night...
Into the wind...

Never to shine again...[/color]

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[size=1]Author's Questions/Comments:
so now concludes my story of my vampire friend...from Shade of Moonlight and the other works of mine...

tell us what you think!

=^.^=[/size]

[No]

[i][color=lightpink]Here I'm going to give this a try...here's mine....


[b][u]~Deep within~[/u][/b]

I said in these words
It was said to be gone
What I have become
I don't want to awake,
from my dreams
I've found love at one time
I wish for it again
So I could live again

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I hope you enjoyed it somewhat...I think i did horribly.[/color][/i]

[Annie]

[color=teal][font=times new roman][b]First of all I want to say, Kittie, your poems are beautiful. Second, Amorphous that first post of your was rather rude, in my eyes. Third, let me take a whack at this..
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[i][center]~ It was you~[/b]

It was dark and cold,
Depression in my heart,
He nurtured me through my pain
and yet caused me the pain,

Lonesome for so long
Cannot feel love, cannot happiness,
For so long, I could not feel
And then there was you,

Your touch electrified my numb body,
Your words sang my soul to heal,
Your lips tickled my senses,
I felt alive again,

It was you, Aruzan,
You awoke within me,
Emotions set free from
their deep sleep,

My soul can now feel, love, and live,
It was you, Aruzan..

~Love,
Chinkan[/i][/center]
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Roxanne will probably be the only one who understands this^^[/color][/font][/b]

[No]

[i][color=lightpink]Aww!!! That was so sweet!!!! You should show that to him ya know! I think he'll enjoy it very much so. *nods* Yes yous hould *claps* Nice job![/color][/i]

[TigerGodess]

Yes I must agree that was a good poem. * smiles *

:angel: :demon:

[Annie]

[color=teal][font=times new roman][b]*Takes a bow* Thank you..Let's see..
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[i][center]~Sweet~[/b]

The taste so sweet
from the warmth of the blood,
Blood that we drain for nurishment,
Blood that we need to stay alive,

The taste so sweet
from the kiss of your lips,
Lips on which my lust remains
prominant to our love,

The taste so sweet
of the tears you shed,
Tears of which I kissed away
from cheeks of pain,

Pain of what we were
forced to become,
Vampires we roam the night,
Fate gave no option for us,

Ho, the taste so sweet..[/i][/color][/font][/center]

[Kittie]

[color=silver] thank you for that beautiful comment anima...it meant so much to me! *hugs* :D

Roxanne...i don't think you did horribly...i think it was a Loverly write...but only wish that you would have expanded the poem a bit more...

anima...your poems are very graceful in form and vivid in imagery...i enjoy your work and hope to see more soon! :) [/color] :wave:

[Annie]

[color=teal][font=times new roman][b]:blush: Thank you once again, and you are most welcome Kittie.
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[i][center]~Times of Worry~[/b]

Light comes from over the horizon,
We take shelter from the burn,
Light comes from the fire
of a silver bullet,
We fight for our lives,

Touch of your hand,
I flee from your grasp,
Touch of you lips,
I tremble with doubt,

Knowledge of your humanity,
Fear for your survival plague my heart,
Knowlede that our love is forbidden,
Sorrow fills my soul,

Worry to protect my human,
My love, My soul,
The times of worry are now...[/i][/font][/color][/center]

[Kittie]

[color=silver] i Love that you gave a vampire a soul...this was such a sad and beautiful write...shows a deep intense Love...
now here's one of mine...enjoy please! :D[/color]


[color=sky blue][u][b]Love Vampire [/u][/b]

The scarlet moon awakes my lonely slumber
A silver breeze caresses my face

With the smile of an angel
And a voice lined with sweet secrets
I welcome you to my lair

Fast awake is my desire
-Love Desire-

My greedy fangs pierce your heart
Love flies from your soul
As I drain it into mine

Leaving your forsaken shell
Empty ? Numb ? Emotionless

Sleep and rest
You?ll fare better to-morrow

Let your soul get renewed
When my feeding is due

I need your Love
So I can Love you...[/color]

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Author's Questions/Comments:
so i have an obsession with vampires
maybe i would like to be one...
:wave:

[Annie]

[color=teal][font=times new roman][b]*Claps hands* Beautiful, yet as always. I really enjoyed that one. To me it seemed as if the vampire was lonely and wanted a companion and got one. I don't know how you intended it to be, but I thought it was great...
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[center][i]~Do not fear~[/b]

Fear is a strong being,
He can come to us
anytime He wants.

Fear is greedy,
He feeds from the hopeless,
frightened souls and does
not stop to satisfy His hunger,

Fear is hate,
Humans and Vampires alike
hate because they fear,

Do not fear,
For I will not,

I will not give in to
His hunger, His greed,

Fear dare not feed
from me,
For I can not fear,

Fear in my mind
is weak, unkind, merciless
and unjust,

I may not be the perfect
soul, but I know
that my heart still beats,

My heart gives me strength
for when my mind does not,

Fear does not frighten me,
He is incompetent and He
disgusts me,

So my dear friends,
Do not fear,

For Fear is merely fear at all..[/color][/center][/font][/i]

[TigerGodess]

Thoes two poems were very very good. * claps hands and smiles *I would show you my poems but I dont think they would be appropriate for OB. :demon:

[Kittie]

[color=silver] thank you TigerGodess my kindred spirit of the night and anima my vampire Lovin' friend! :D

anima~ your approach was very different this time! your poem wasn't merely about just vampires or humans...it was about an emotion with vampires in the background!
nicely penned! shows that you can think outside the box or something like that! liked it! :wigout:

Tiger~ post them anyway! or at the very least e-mail me at least one! i'd Love to read them especially if they about vampires!

i'll have another one up soon! :wave: [/color]

[Annie]

[color=teal][b][font=times new roman]Thank you Kittie. I enjoy reading your poems and I would love to see yours, Tiger.
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[center][i]~Touch~[/b]

It is secretive,
It is sensitive,
It is sinful,
Your forbidden touch,

It is warm and soft,
It is cold and empty,
Your forbidden touch,

My mortal heart,
Your forbidden touch,

My mortal soul,
Your forbidden touch,

My mortal lips,
Your forbidden touch,

Your bittersweet lips,
My burning tears,

Your seductive spirit,
My longing hunger,

Only left to feel,
Your forbidden touch[/color][/font][/center][/i]

[TigerGodess]

I'll find my favorite poem and try to post it. * claps her hands * very good poem anima. Keep up the good work the both of you. ;)

[Kittie]

[color=silver][b][u]Beast of Blood [/b][/u]

As the sun goes down
In a fiery rage
The nocturnal lights
Begin to glow

The angel?s eyes shone
High in the sky
With a twinkle unlike mankinds

As the night falls
The urge comes stronger
I need blood to fulfill my hunger

As the moon rises high
Life on the street comes alive
-My madness starts to awake-

I hide in the shadows
Crimson eyes gleaming in the darkness
I await my feast of innocence
My desire starving of blood

I can sense his fear
As I calm him with
Illusions of immortally
To-night I shall not make another
I drink to his very soul

I lean closer to him to get a taste
Fangs are shining brighter
My breathing has now become obscene

He screams the scream death brings
It rips apart the silence of the night

Red drops on my greedy lips
Fall on his life-less body...

With my desire pleased
My madness ends

*Don?t be ruled by your Beast
Or it will destroy you*

*I can?t control it...*
I said sadly
Because I knew it was true

He wrapped his arms around me
And we vanished in the wind...
The wind carried a message :
?I will help you...?[/color]

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[size=1]Author's Questions/Comments:
this is the third piece of my Shade of Moonlight story...seems a bit incomplete or something...can't quite put my finger on it...don't be too harsh (i don't like it that much :()
this is like my first night as a vamp...and i can't control my urges or anything yet...'my Love' as he has been dubbed should have been with me and was night...for namesake he is Jean-Claude! ^-^ for now...

Kit Kat Vamp =^-^=[/size]

[Annie]

[color=teal][font=times new roman][b]That was suspensful. I wasn't quite sure what would happen. Good, very good.
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[i][center]~The Awe of Wonder~[/b]

What makes you feed
upon the living?

My lust for blood,

What makes you lust?

My will to live,

What makes you live?

My need for a companion,

What are your desires?

My soul to be set free,
From my torment of
immortality,

To live in peace
with my soul,
With a love
that I can trust,

To enjoy life
instead of taking it,

To gaze upon the Earth
with mortal eyes,

Why do you wish for these?

I want to stare in awe
at the wonder of life
and death,

Wonder how life will
treat me,
Wonder how death
will greet me,

I wish to stare
in the awe of wonder[/color][/center][/i][/font]

[TigerGodess]

That was very good the both of you. I really liked yours kittie. Hey I have a question for you guys can there be such a thing as a christian vamp?? I'm so happy its a full moon and there is going to be a lunar eclipse soon. (full moons make me happy:D ) :excited:

[Annie]

[color=teal][font=times new roman][b]Actually, I think vampires are the most faithful and honest beings. I think that they are more religious than most humans. They are very spiritual and intune with their faith. It may not be the faith that human's would consider Christianity, but it might as well be.

I love vampires for their air of spiritual insight and faith.[/color][/font][/b]