TigerGodess Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 :D Ok thanx. Some person was getting in a debate with me at my school saying that vampires couldnt be christian or religious. :grumble: :evil3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted November 11, 2003 Author Share Posted November 11, 2003 [color=silver] that was an awesome poem as ever anima! your writing never ceases to amazes me! it's like an interview! :eek anyhoo..here is my write and i [i]think[/i] it had it vampiric qualities... [/color] [color=sky blue][b][u]~Untitled~ [/b][/u] Hiding in Darkness Caressing the Shadows He walks in Light Never knowing her existence He a Child of Light With a Sun-kissed face Shining in the Light of Dawn She an Angel of Darkness With a shadow over her face Yearning to touch the Light Hides in the Twilight Without Light there is no Shadow Darkness cannot embrace Light... A Kiss of Shadows And Caress of Twilight Darkness can never hold, Love, nor embrace her Light?[/color] ---------------------------------------------------------------- [size=1]Author's Questions/Comments: i treally do not like the title of this poem...i simply put it there because i didn't want it as an untitled poem...someone help me please! *also i didn't like this one too well...but i had to get it out.... and hope you enjoy the poem!! ~Kittie~ =^.^=[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted November 11, 2003 Share Posted November 11, 2003 [color=teal][font=times new roman][b]Thank you Kittie. I really love your writing as well. The untitled one gave me the impression the vampire was longing for mortality. I don't know how you intended it to be, but that's how I see the poem. ______________________________________________ [center][i]~The Beautiful~[/b] A vampire's love, cannot be seen, A vampire's desire, cannot be felt, A vampire's pain, cannot be heard, A vampire's hate, cannot be subdued, The beautiful pain, The beautiful hate, Both of which the vampire has to live by, The beautiful love, The beautiful desire, Both of which the vampire, can only hope, Beauty of the vampire's heart, Beauty of the vampire's soul, A soul left to render alone, the pain and hate of love and desire, The beautiful vampire, left alone in darkness, Seeking the beauty of love and desire[/color][/font][/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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