Jokopoko Posted October 3, 2003 Share Posted October 3, 2003 [CENTER][COLOR=CRIMSON][SIZE=2][B]On the world of Archon Magic & Machine blend together in perfection, but there is an evil force at work to destroy the perfect balance and plunge the world into war [U]Archon, the Worlds tale[/U][/B][/SIZE][/COLOR][/CENTER] [COLOR=TEAL][SIZE=1][B]Welcome to Archon, the TechnoMagi world where all is in a state of union, but not for long. The rebel Magi known as Orphe has gone against the council of TechnoMagi and begun destroying the bond between the magical and mechanical, this is a course of action which will lead to the destruction of Archon and cause the factions of Magic and Machine to begin a War that will cover the entire world. ------------------------------ [IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/shu-1.jpg[/IMG] Orphe is highly skilled in the casting of Magic and distrust all machines. He believes that for Archon to become all that it can be all of the machines must be purged from the planet and that the Magi should Rule with Magic. He has a select group of followers that believe his words to be true and will follow him till the end [IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/arc-1.jpg[/IMG] In light of this fact the Council has dispatched one of it's most loyal followers to destory Orphe and his minions. His name is Roph and with the help of some friends he will find and destroy Orphe and bring an end to his evil plot. He is highly skilled in the weilding of the sword and the use of MechaMagic, he is the champion of Archon and all know his name. ------------------------------ Orphe has already destroyed many of the machines in the western realm of Archon and is getting ready to launch an attack on the east and the main headquarters of the TechnoMagi council. It is the duty of Roph and his group to stop Orphe creating his army and attacking the land of Archon. But this is easier said than done. ------------------------------ Okay, thats the two main characters introduced. I'll give the list of Rophs group and the people under Orphes control. ------------------------------ [U]The TechnoMagi Rangers[/U] [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/alec-1.jpg]Vinz[/URL] -Vinz is effectively the second in command of the group. This is not offical but generally excepted. He knowns much about Machines, mostly flyers, and tends to use partical weapons in combat instead of swords. Though his skill is machines he knows some about MechaMagic. [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/cyhryl-1.jpg]Delles[/URL] -Delles is Vinzs sister and the 'tough cookie' of the group. She is skilled in armed combat and has knowledge of MechaMagic. She sometimes feels that Vinz doesn't act like the Second in Command but she has yet to try and take his place. [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/erik-1.jpg]Xenz[/URL] -Xenz has a deep connection with the magic of Archon and prefers to use it instead of machines. But unlike Orphe he sees that the union is best for Archon and will fight to protect it. [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/masia-1.jpg]Chelte[/URL] -Chelte is a TechnoMagi in training, in a manner of speaking. Her tutor has on the council and she has much skill in the field of MechaMagic and combat. She uses her staff as a weapon as well as using it to cast spells. She sees Orhpes idea of the true Archon as untrue and will die protecting her home. [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/ruts-1.jpg]Strift[/URL] -Strift is the ultimate handy man, having parts for any and all machines of the Rangers and he can repair them in the fastest time. He grew up in a heavily mecha area of Archon so he has little talent with MechaMagic, nor is he skilled in combat, prefering to make and take apart weapons rarther than fire them. [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/teo-1.jpg]Jelvi[/URL] -Jelvi is a mysterious person from the Temple Ruins where Magic and Machine first became one. He is one of the guardians and is gifted in both Machine and Magic. He was sent by the older guardians to assist Roph is hunting down and destroying Orphe and his plans. [U]Minions of Orphe[/U] [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/Kukuru-1.jpg]Fenix[/URL] -Fenix is one of the DarkMagi from the sect known as the broken circle. They share the same views as Orphe and so sent Fenix to assist him in his task. He is one of the most skilled DarkMagi on the planet being able to cast spells from a great distance but he is terrible when it comes to using machines and would rarther destroy them then live along side them. [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/sania-1.jpg]Tythl[/URL] -Tythl is Orphes right-hand woman when it comes to dealing with trouble like Roph and his team. He is devoted to his cause and is highly skilled in MechaMagic as well as some of the machine weapons used by the TechnoMagi and others around Archon. The cards she uses are charged with magical energies and each have a different effect. [URL=http://jokopoko.250free.com/shante-1.jpg]Aven[/URL] -The wife of Orphe and his most trusted advisor and companion. It is her job to keep the others in line and make sure they are devoted to the cause of making Archon pure and eliminating the TechnoMagi so the Magi and DarkMagi can rule alone. Her skill is in the DarkMagi spell craft. ------------------------------ Main plot line and main characters introduced, time for the sign up sheet. For each of these sections I'd like real thought please, not just one-liners with no effort put into them. I'd like at least a paragraph for personality and the same, if not more, for the biography. ------------------------------ [U][I]Application Sheet[/I][/U] [U]Name:[/U] [U]Age:[/U] [U]Gender:[/U] [U]Apperance:[/U] (Use the pictures provided) [U]Personality:[/U] (Please [U]DO NOT[/U] copy and paste the info I posted) [U]Chief Skill:[/U] (Either MechaMagic or Machines, some are balanced) [U]Weapons:[/U] (Either MechaMagic, Machine or a mix) [U]Alligence:[/U] (TechnoMagi or Orphe) [U]Biography:[/U] ------------------------------ [U][I]My Character[/I][/U] [U]Name:[/U] Roph [U]Age:[/U] 19 [U]Gender:[/U] Male [U]Apperance:[/U] [IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/arc-1.jpg[/IMG] [U]Personality:[/U] After having years of training under the Master TechnoMagi Roph has become a very serious person. He does not enjoy fooling around while on a mission and expects all of his orders to be followed to the letter. While off mission he does ease up a bit an allows himself to relax but he is always on his guard and ready to face a challenge. It is not in his nature to make rash choices or go on the spur of the moment but sometimes he does. Due to his training he has a link to the MechaMagic of Archon and this can sometimes sother him or work him into a rage. He doesn't really know what it means to have friends but Strift and Chelte will change that. [U]Chief Skill:[/U] A mixture of MechaMagic and Machine, though MechaMagic is higher [U]Weapons:[/U] MechaMagic Sword, Own MechaMagic and a Particle rifle [U]Alligence:[/U] TechnoMagi [U]Biography:[/U] As said before Roph was trained by the TechnoMagi for many years. It started when he was around 5 and his skill in the machine and MechaMagic was made apparent. The first stages of his training where with MechaMagic and his sword, this would get him tuned to the MechaMagic of Archon and allow him to use his sword with greater ease because, being charged with MechaMagic, it would become in escence a part of him. His training became more intense when he was around 13 and he was released into the world to face real challengers. He has defeated many enemys in his short life and has taken their own energies into himself, this is a unique skill that he alone posseses. He knows very little of his past life before the TechnoMagi council took him in and so he does not remember his parents or siblings if he had any. His main goal in life is to find his family but right now it is his mission to defeat Orhpe and bring peace to Archon once again......so this is what he will do. ------------------------------ The Catches 1. I want to have good RPGers in my RPG, not people who punctuate evey sentence with many '!!!!' and litter their posts with incorrect spelling. 2. All applications must have a detailed Personality and History which mirriors the personal information I provided for each of the characters. 3. As usual, I expect regular posting on your part, good spelling and grammer and each post will have three paragraphs or more. Anyone who's quality and/or post amount will be given one warning, if it continues they are out of the RPG. 4. I have the right to accept or reject anyone who I feel does not come to the standards set out by the previous rules. 5. Have fun with the RPG :D. [/B][/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicky Posted October 3, 2003 Share Posted October 3, 2003 [SIZE=1]Name: Vinz Age: 20 Gender: male Apperance: [IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/alec-1.jpg[/IMG] Personality: As he knows much about machines, this effects his perosnality. Mainly he understands most people, and sometimes he would be glad to help. That's sometimes. He usaly thinks about his life long ago. Where there wasn't as much to worry about, so this makes his mood dreamy and strange sometimes. His perosnality is like his life, strange, dreamy, though and sad. But he not very sad, just really down sometimes. Chief Skill: Machines, and a little MechaMagic . Weapons: Particle shot riffle and a small riffle. Alligence: TechnoMagi Biography: He's very picky with people that don't look like they've trained. His father was a skilled flyer, and most people think that's where his skills come form. He was born in Jiste City, were his father drove many different flyers. He had many friends in this city, but left them all behind. He found a sheet of paper, that had his friends names on it. The paper had three words: Honour-Toil-Pride He would remeber these words forever and ever, no matter how far he goes. Friends are the most imporant thing in his life, there always where and always have been. His father told him alot to do with machines and fylers. Mostly flyers. His life has been though from day one, and he never knew his mother, only his father and his friends. Sometimes he forgets there dreams, and remebers there dreams are the same as his. And one of them would be to have a peaceful moment for once in his life, maybe his friends wanted the same. Who knows where they are now. He would dread the day he dies, because he would never have the chance to live a normal life. Guess this was just his life right? Well in his eyes it stucked. [/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Fairy Posted October 3, 2003 Share Posted October 3, 2003 [color=indigo] Name:Chelte Age: 16 Gender: Female Apperance: [img]http://jokopoko.250free.com/masia-1.jpg[/img] Personality: She has a friendly vibe, and while some may ignore her it's almost impossible for anyone to dislike her. She has a tendency to stick her nose where she doesn't belong, but people often overlook that. She expresses her emotions very clearly, so no one around her can NOT know what she's feeling. But she's very skilled at hiding what she's scheming. Despite her carefree demeanor, she is extremely serious when it comes to her beliefs, and will fight to the death to protect them. Chief Skill: Mostly MechaMagic Weapons: Staff which she uses as a weapon and for spells. Alligence: TechnoMagi Biography: She was forcibly taken from her home by the council of TechnoMagi, who sensed great power in her, when she was six. She adopted the council and her friends as family, and will do anything to protect them. She has no desire to find her real family, because she believes that they betrayed her by letting the council take her from them, and is content with her "adoptive" family. She trains hard in her study of MechaMagic so that she will be able to stand up to anyone in her way. She has been known to sneak away during lessons, yet though she's something of a slacker, she still gets her training done with ease. At the age of 14, she was put to study advanced MechaMagic with the council, and has not yet finished. She longs for when she'll be sent off on a real mission, but as she is somewhat lacking in her skill with machines, she knows that day may not come soon. [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokopoko Posted October 4, 2003 Author Share Posted October 4, 2003 [COLOR=TEAL][SIZE=1][B]Okay, you two are both in. I'd just like to note a few things for those that sign-up after this message. The world is of my own creation but if you want to make up a place or city etc where yout character came from your welcome to. Also the weapons and skills, you can judge that from the little bit of info I gave on the character I.E. Strift doesn't know any MechaMagic but is highly skilled with machines etc. Any thing else I need to say will be edited on to this or posted in a new message.[/B][/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 [font=gothic][color=indigo]Well, someone had to play him... And if this doesn't work out, I'll play Jelvi. Name: Orphe Age: 32 Gender: Male Appearance: [img]http://jokopoko.250free.com/shu-1.jpg[/img] Personality: Orphe is, contrary to popular belief, not the twisted, bitter man people believe him to be. Labelled a demagogue, rabble rouser, someone hellbent on the destruction of all moral, rightthinking, honest, hardworking societies, and whatnot....Most people are actually disappointed when they really meet him. He's basically the opposite. Orphe believes fully in the supremecy of the human race. Existential to the nth degree, Orphes would rather die than have a coerced entity do his work for him. Magic, he believes, is as alive as any human, and thus can be worked with, on its terms. He has overwhelming respect for the art, and for all those who accede to his theories. To Orphe, machines weaken not only human kind as a whole, but also human kind's respect for other entities. In his view of the world, he does not destroy, but rather refines. Chief Skill: Magic Weapons: Magic, though within the limits he sets himself. Alligence: Orphe....Damn narcissist. Biography: In his youth, Orphe's family was the smallest influence he had. Orphe, disdaining their technical bent for as ye unformed reasons, spent all his time in the wilderness, which, due to his location, was mainly thick forest. Wildlife was a neccessary side effect. Surrounded by creatures esoteric and bizarre, Orphe grew quickly to respect the wild power and beauty of all beings, sentient or otherwise. His days were spent dicing with animals that would devour him if they could, yet he felt a strange affection for them, for more than any human could, they understood their place in existance, and chose not to exert it on others unless is be neccessary for survival. And always did they respect another's individuality. Their was no slavery in the animal world. Each night, when Orphe returned home, and found himself surrounded by machines that humans callously used, he felt sickened. His family wanted him to become as mechanically inclined as they were. He, of course, refused. Which bothered either party not at all. They separated without resentment, and Orphe found himself in the company of what could be described as modern day druids. He found himself educated in magic, as a rather interesting side bonus. Amongst the arcane instruction, natural philosophy was also a topic he found himself intrigued in, and through long conversations with those far wiser than himself, he came to realise just what his hatred of machines was based on. After several years, Orphe separated from the enclave, though not by his own desire. Orphe had shown a frightening interest, not to mention facility, with the darker side of magic, that which revealed the darker side of the natural world. Fearing to give him further abilities in that area, they forbade him any more congress with magical practioners, and enforced it with a seal upon his aura. It took nearly a decade for Orphe to have that seal lifted. And when he did, it wasn't his doing. Aven. She saved him from a mundane life of mechanised arrogance, and reinforced his beliefs in the process. In truth, it was time for Orphe to act. I can't stand not putting a spin on my villians.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakura Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 [b]Name:[/b]Delles [b]Age:[/b]16 [b]Gender:[/b]Female [b]Appearance:[/b][IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/cyhryl-1.jpg[/IMG] [b]Personality:[/b]Delles is quite cold to people that are new to her.She only shows her caring side to those she's close to and cares about.She can be friendly at times,depending on her mood.She's tough and likes to stand up for herself and doesn't take things laying down.If she ever sees someone in trouble she will help no matter who it is. [b]Chief Skill:[/b]Armed Combat and MechaMagic [b]Weapons:[/b]Pistol and some MechaMagic [b]Alligence:[/b]TechnoMagi [b]Biography:[/b]Delles doesn't like her brother.He's obsessed with flying like their father did.She'd rather go to a shooting range and practise her aim or go to a secluded area to practise her MechaMagic.She's always looking for someone to fight with so she can practise her Armed combat. Delles dislikes staying in one place for a long time and is usually never found staying still at one place for more than a few days. She really thinks that her brother doesn't deserve his role as Second in Command and she's trying very hard to beat him and take his place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muse Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 [COLOR=firebrick][SIZE=1] [B]Name:[/B] Xenz [B]Age:[/B] 19 [B]Gender:[/B] Male [B]Apperance: [/B] [img]http://jokopoko.250free.com/erik-1.jpg[/img] [B]Personality: [/B] Quiet and calm, due to years of slow training. When around people, he is quite friendly but speaks very little. People pass him off as a thinker, which is partially true, for his Mother had taught him knowledge is power, which he believes so true he almosts worships the saying. He is very serious on some matters, but he is usually pretty carefree and shows it well. [B]Chief Skill:[/B] Magic [B]Weapons: [/B] Magic [B]Alligence: [/B] TechnoMagi [B]Biography:[/B] Born to a broken family, Xenz lived with his mother and never knew his father. His mother was a naturalist and she taught Xenz to dislike the Machines that were ruining the wildlife we would love so much, but he, a very smart child, understood what these Machines could do and realized they weren't all that bad and sometimes were even necessary. The two lived in the open woods. Xenz knew for a fact that his mother was capable of using magic, but she hid it so her son could lead a normal life. It didn't work. Ever since Xenz could walk and talk on his own, he showed extraordinary talent with magic. He could make small patches of dirt grow flowers in seconds, and with a swipe of his hand they would wither and die like months had passed. The council was aware of this talented boy living in the woods. They sent a messenger boy to where Xenz and his mother lived to ask for him to come live with them. Xenz was still young, about five or six, when the messenger came. His mother was doubtful, but the council assured her the Xenz needed to learn to control his powers and not to abuse them. Understanding that her son was special, she agreed. After a short farewell ordered by the Council, Xenz's mother presented him an necklace with an eagle feather, a treasured item to him to this day as he keeps it around his neck 24-7. And Xenz lived with the council, his magical capabilities grew with every spell and magic book he read and was soon one of their most trusted Mages. Alright. Thats it. Not my best sign up. If you want me to change anything tell me.[/COLOR][/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjah Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 [size=1] [b]Name:[/b]Jelvi [b]Age:[/b]16 [b]Gender:[/b]Male [b]Apperance:[/b][img]http://jokopoko.250free.com/teo-1.jpg[/img] [b]Personality:[/b] He is a kind and caring person who likes making friends.When around others he'll try to make friends.He'll always try to help people and assist people.He can get serious also when fighting and protecting.He usually keeps a smile on his face hiding his true feelings. [b]Chief Skill:[/b]Mixture of Mecha Magic and Magic [b]Weapons:[/b]A steel spear [b]Alligence:[/b]TechnoMagi [b]Biography:[/b]Jelvi was born in a small village where he trained with one of the eldest gaurdians in Mecha Magic and Magic,for the eldest gaurdian knew Jelvi would be useful in a party one day.Years after trainning in Mecha Magic and Magic the eldest gaurdian thought that he'd train with a weapon since he knew much magic already, so he forged a steel speer for Jelvi. Before Jelvi could weild the spear he trained in agility and strength.Soon after Jelvi was strong enough he earned the steel spear. When Jelvi got it it seemed like it wasn't heavy at all,he could move fast.Once the eldest gaurdian heard about Orphe he sent Jelvi to join Roph's party. Hope this is ok.^^; [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 Name: Tythl Age: 21 Gender: Female Appearance: [IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/sania-1.jpg[/IMG] Personality: Tythl is considered to be the most intelligent of Orphes minions. And therefore may be considered one of the most dangerous. Tythl is skillful when it comes to weapons, MechaMagic or machine. She is able to think her way through most situations. For this she can do pretty well when it comes to having to dealing with trouble, like Roph and his team. Tythl knows when to think, and when to take action. She is totally dedicated to work, and the magic she uses. Chief Skill: MechaMagic Weapons: DarkMagi Cards Allegiance: Orphe Biography: Tythl was born in a place where most knew how to use MechaMagic. So it was only natural that she learned her self how to also. After learning her self, once Tythl could think and act for her self. And was no longer a young child, but near the age of 15. The elders of her village had decided that it was a new age and that they must learn to use machines. So that they could protect the village more. Every one in the village was to have some sort of knowledge of the machines. Tythl in the end, practiced using magic and some machine type weapons. After a few years Tythl felt that the villagers would forget the magic and devote them selfs to using the machines. Later at this time she went and talked to the elders. Asking them to stop the importing of machines into the village. But her request was denied. Causing her rage and anger, when she was fooling around with magic and a deck of cards. She set the village a flame, afterwards becoming an out cast among the survivors. Wondered around and learned more of the world. To only find that most used machines now instead a magic. Yet when traveling she heard rumors of a man named Orphe. Who had a deep faith and magic. Tythl then traveled around looking for him. And eventually join him as a minion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revelation Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 [size=1][color=ff66cc][B]Name:[/B] Aven [B]Age:[/B] 29 [B]Gender:[/B] female [B]Appearance:[/B] [IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/shante-1.jpg[/IMG] [B]Personality:[/B] Some people believe her to be the witch of all Magic, others believe her to be the Goddess. Most want her dead. Aven gives off the effect of evil, with a twist of purity within her. She is one of the most trusted who is alligned with Orphe. She is a seductive, magical, mysterious woman who creates illusions, as well as takes the boundaries between reality and fantasy. She is a woman who can be a powerful ally, but can also be a deadly enemy. No one has ever escaped her wrath, those who do, do not run that far. She has eyes and ears everywhere. She knows all, and will tell all. Secrets are kept within her, plans are not given away, and everything that Orphe tells, stays with her. She is the most trusted person by Orphe. [B]Chief Skill:[/B] Magic [B]Weapons:[/B] DarkMagi Spell craft, as well as two bladed fighting fans that retract into daggers. [B]Alliance:[/B] Orphe- who else? She's the wife. [B]Biography:[/B] Long ago, Aven and every female before her generation were practioners of Dark Magic. They believed that Dark Magic was stronger than Light. They also believed that a power so great will arise and help reunite all those who were thrown away. Aven had heard of a man who was sickened by the sight of machines and seperated from the enclave, but not by his own decision. He had shown much interest of the darker side of magic, which then revealed the darker side of the world. They feared him too much and they put a stop to further his congress. They enforced a seal upon his aura. A decade later, who should but the seducing, magical Aven. She had helped life this seal that which was enforced upon him and saved him from a life of mechanised arrogance. From then on, she had followed him, Orphe, and detroyed all Mechanoids. If there were prisoners, she was allowed to take them. Punishment is a specialty that she approves of. There those who only screech, pull, yell, and try to run from her grasp. Yet others accept their fate and stand still, or better yet, bow down to her and Orphe. Throughout her years of practice, she had achieved great skill and power faster and stronger than anyone had known. She was also a woman who did not tolerate those who disagree with Orphe and the way to create a new and better Archon. I believe this to be my first Evil character. Hmm....[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayokano Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 [size=1][COLOR=green]Application Sheet- Name:Strift Age:17 Gender:Male Apperance:[img]http://jokopoko.250free.com/ruts-1.jpg[/img] Personality:Strift is phased out, and is in his own world. He enjoys his life and every secound of it, because it is so short to him. He likes to have fun,and is very social to others. Strift does not like to fight without a reason, and hardly knows how to use his weapons. He manages though, and likes to play with machines,see how they work, and what are their used for, before anybody tells him. Chief Skill:Machines Weapons:Two particle pistols Alligence:TechnoMagi Biography:Strift grew up in the slums of his area, and most of the males in his family helped with earning money. They were mechanics, and when old enough they would teach the youngest all they knew. Strift started to learn about mechanics at 11 years old, and his father and brothers tought him as much as they knew about mechanics. He listened closely to his father and bothers and learned from them. He was determinded to help his family, and he started to. Learning from so many and doing what they did by himself made him a ace at mechanics. The amount of people coming to the mechanics' shop was dying,and for the lack of payment, they where thrown out of their home. They had lost everything they had. Even the mechanics shop was taken from them,and the only way they lived was by asking others if they could fix something of their's for money. One day a council offical came to Strift's family, and ask if he would help the others with a mission to stop Orphe and his followers. The goverment would give Strift's family money, enough for them to start over agine. So, doing it for his family, Strift took the mission.[/size][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokopoko Posted October 5, 2003 Author Share Posted October 5, 2003 [COLOR=TEAL][SIZE=1][B]This seems to be going swimmingly ^-^, I believe one of my most replied to RPG applications. Heres the standings of those who have applied (All of them): -------------------- [U]Ayokano[/U] [I]Strift[/I] *Accepted [U]Arika[/U] [I]Aven[/I] Accepted [U]Ruby[/U] [I]Tythl[/I] Accepted [U]Sakura Kid[/U] [I]Jelvi[/I] **Accepted [U]DaisukeAngel[/U] [I]Xenz[/I] Accepted [U]Ohkami[/U] [I]Delles[/I] ***Accepted [U]The Harlequin[/U] [I]Orphe[/I] Accepted [U]Stick Fairy[/U] [I]Chelte[/I] Accepted [U]Vicky[/U] [I]Vinz[/I] Accpeted -------------------- [I][U]Ayokano *[/U][/I] I'm accepting you but theres a few things I'd like you to change. Firstly you put 'Strife' as your name in the sign up, please change it. And the grammer i.e. spaces after full stops and colons, also add more to and change your personality. [I][U]Sakura Kid **[/U][/I] Basicly the same as Ayokano with the grammer and spelling. I'd like you to change the history as well because Jelvi has always been one of the Guardians. [I][U]Ohkami ***[/U][/I] Same as above for the grammer. And please make your history A.S.A.P.[/B][/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solo Tremaine Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 [COLOR=#503F86][U]Name:[/U] Fenix [U]Age:[/U] 29 [U]Gender:[/U] Male [U]Apperance:[/U] [IMG]http://jokopoko.250free.com/Kukuru-1.jpg[/IMG] [U]Personality:[/U] Fenix is relentlessly brutal when it comes to using his magic- he believes it is a gift to him from the heavens and that he should use it to his full extent to rid the world of what he deems 'unnatural impurities'. He lends himself a much nastier streak than the leader whos ideals he follows, but would never overthrow him because he respects him and his views too much. That said, he is not dishonourable. When in a fight, he will not simply obliterate his opponent because he feels it is unfair. He believes in the honour and romance of battle, and enjoys duelling his opponents one-on-one. Despite his vicious nature, he thinks magic is a beautiful power that can be used for many other things than just destruction, and hence is very protective over its uses. He believes infusing it with machinery makes it impure and dangerous to use, corrupting its very essence. [U]Chief Skill:[/U] Magic [U]Weapons:[/U] Dark Magic, which he weilds using a large staff. [U]Alligence:[/U] Orphe [U]Biography:[/U] Fenix was born into a family of DarkMagi- both his parents were notoriously powerful members of the Broken Circle and often carried out vicious attacks on unsuspecting TechnoMagis, having vowed that they were an evil influence on the planet. They were caught by a team of vigilante TechnoMagis and executed. Although Fenix had been trained and raised by them, he had never liked his parents' way of using magic, and started to teach himself more efficient ways of using it, far surpassing many of the oldest mages in his area when he was only 18. Some joked that his hatred of machines stemmed from his inability to understand and use them properly, but he soon destroyed anyone who dared make fun of him. He learned of the Broken Circle through a family friend; he soon became enthralled by its teachings and ideals and vowed to follow them and bring back to Archon the 'magical sanctity' that it had before the advent of machines. Orphe's war was too tempting a chance to pass off.[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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