Writing The Lost One

[Bio]

I made this as I went along without thinking. Tell me what you think!
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The Lost One

Who can stay in this world of corruption?
Who can resist the tainted one's calling?
Who can cross the river,
The river of eternity?

If I am wrong,
then what is right?
If I was wrong all these years,
Then have I suffered for nothing?

Why couldn't I see,
See how wrong I must be?
To slay the innocent,
The evil in my eyes

I know see the truth,
The how tainted my mind was,
I must now repent,
But I feel differently

Instead, I seek revenge
On the one who betrayed me
I swear, I'll be the one to slay it

But why do you mock me?
I stand firm for my cause
Yet you are laughing

What have I done now?
am I still tainted?
How is it that I cannot see the way?

[Heavyblade]

Really good. One thing, you say something about a tainted one then for the rest of the poem you refer to it as a thing not a person. You might've meant to but I think it sounds awkward. Really good I want to see some more work from you in the future.

[Bio]

The tainted one is an it. If you want to see my other work, there are poems by me in this section. they are: Rise, Prophecy, and Bio- another poem. And thanks! By the way, all my poems tie together.