Ares Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 This is my first poem, so please be understanding. Well, here it goes. [u]The Lazy Life[/u] [color=green]You sleep all the day You lack masculinity Your life's a delay A delay caused by you. You yourself can change it But do you? Nay You choose to live this life The boring lazy life.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burori Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 Not bad Ares. Not bad for a first poem. Keep at it and you might be a real Pro at making them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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