Zeos Posted October 8, 2003 Share Posted October 8, 2003 [SIZE=1]These are some new poems of mine.. There supposed to go together.. (I havn't written anything in awhile, so I'm a bit rusty..) ------------------------------------------------------------------ [b]And Now I See The End[/b] [i]I close my eyes.. Darkness is coming.. I regret many things.. My soul is cloaked in sorrow.. My mind begins to recall.. Everything that has happened in the past.. Painful memories overtake the good ones.. I find myself wishing I had never lived at all.. But then.. I think of you.. The one who brought me through.. All the hard times.. Times I thought I wouldn?t be able to live through.. For that moment.. I?m happy.. But now.. I see the end.. The end is near.. My final breath is here.. And with it.. I say.. ....Thank you....[/i] [b]She Cries[/b] [i]A tear falls from the woman's eye.. Her love is gone.. He was consumed in darkness.. And only at death did he see the light.. What can she do.. Without the love of her life..? How can she go on.. Without his love..? Thoughts run through her mind.. Thoughts of killing her self.. Maybe she could see her love again.. Somewhere.. No.. She can?t.. She has to go on.. She has to continue.. Where her love left off.. She turns around, and walks away.. She knows, she will see her love again someday.. ..She Cries..[/i] ------------------------------------------------------------------ Yes, I know they arn't that good.. I just felt like I should write again..[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharmedImmortal Posted October 9, 2003 Share Posted October 9, 2003 [size=1]Both of them are so awesome! Especially the last one, ooo, very touching. It makes me cry. Write more please. ^_^[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeos Posted October 13, 2003 Author Share Posted October 13, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by CharmedImmortal [/i] [B][size=1]Both of them are so awesome! Especially the last one, ooo, very touching. It makes me cry. Write more please. ^_^[/size] [/B][/QUOTE] [size=1]Thank you, it feel's good to hear positive comments on my poetry.. I'll be writing more soon.. [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fyxe Posted October 14, 2003 Share Posted October 14, 2003 [SIZE=1][COLOR=darkblue]Oh man Zeos, I didn't know you were so good at poetry. I love both of them, I think the first is my favorite. But the second one was just as touching. Keep them coming, I think I'm hooked. ^_^[/COLOR][/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeos Posted October 17, 2003 Author Share Posted October 17, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Conna_da_fox [/i] [B][SIZE=1][COLOR=darkblue]Oh man Zeos, I didn't know you were so good at poetry. I love both of them, I think the first is my favorite. But the second one was just as touching. Keep them coming, I think I'm hooked. ^_^[/COLOR][/SIZE] [/B][/QUOTE] [size=1]That's sweet Conna, thank you.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieko Posted October 18, 2003 Share Posted October 18, 2003 <-> <-> Both were very touching. I loved them! Keep !____' them coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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