Ben Posted August 25, 2001 Author Share Posted August 25, 2001 ?Go Hoot-hoot!? Falkner said as he released his pokemon. ?Go, Squirt!? Ben said as he let out the tiny cubone. Ben noticed that the two pokemon were almost equal in size, with Squirt a little larger. Falkner was just as stunned as Dave had been. Ben again used that to his advantage. ?Mega Punch!? ?Fly!? ?Water gun!? Squirt shot a stream of water at Hoot-hoot, a direct hit! Hoot-hoot fell to the ground, it?s wet feathers too heavy to fly. ?Fury attack!? ?Bone thrash!? Ben?s plan worked. Every time that Hoot-hoot tried to peck at Squirt, he slapped it away with his bone. ?Wing attack!? Hoot-hoot began to run toward Squirt, its wings extended. ?Bite!? Squirt bit one of Hoot-hoot?s wings and didn?t let go. ?Now, seismic toss!? Squirt grabbed onto Hoot-hoot?s wings and began to spin. Faster and faster they spun. Then, Squirt released. Hoot-hoot went sailing over Falconer?s head and over the side of the building. Falkner ran over and recalled his pokemon. ?Go Dodrio!? Falkner yelled as he released the three-headed bird. ?Squirt, return.? Ben said as he recalled his pokemon. ?Go, Freeza!? From the look on his face, Ben could tell that Falkner was scared. He knew that his flying type pokemon were weak against ice types. ?Icy wind!? Freeza extended his right arm and a freezing cold wind blew from it. In the wind were large and small chunks of ice. ?Agility!? Dodrio jumped out of the way and began to run all around the roof, attempting to confuse Freeza. ?Freeza, fire an ice beam at the floor!? Ben said. Freeza charged up and ice beam and fired it at the floor. A layer of ice covered the entire roof, also several ice spikes had grew up out of it. Dodrio slipped on the ice and crashed into one of those spikes. CRASH! Bits of ice went flying. Dodrio tried to stand up but continued to slip. ?Freeza, Ice Punch!? Freeza began to run toward Dodrio, not slipping a single time. Then, blue energy began to build up around his hands. He punched the two outside heads, then fired an ice beam at the middle. However, the ice beam did not stop at the head, it continued down Dodrio?s body until the whole thing was frozen solid. ?Dodrio return!? ?Freeza return!? ?Go Pidgeot!? Falkner yelled as he released the magnificent bird. ?Go Hitmonbone!? Ben said as he released the muscular cubone. Nurse Joy had requested that Hitmonbone wear boxking gloves so as not to damage his hands any further. ?Fly!? Pidgeot flapped its wings a couple of times and took off. ?High Jump Kick!? Hitmonbone took a few steps back. He got a good running start and leapt into the air, foot extended, at Pidgeot. ?Quick attack!? Before Hitmonbone could deliver his kick, Pidgeot disappeared. He reappeared behind Hitmonbone and tackled him. Hitmonbone crashed into the rooftop, making a fair-sized crater. ?Counter attack!? Hitmonbone jumped into the air and slammed Pidgeot into the roof, making another crater. ?Now, Thunder Punch!? Hitmonbone powered up the electricity on the front of his glove and slammed it into Pidgeot. The large bird shrieked as the energy surged through its body. Then it slumped to the ground. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry I took so long, no computer access. :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sia Posted August 25, 2001 Share Posted August 25, 2001 BRAVO BRAVO nice story so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k9* Posted August 26, 2001 Share Posted August 26, 2001 YAY! i like it. :ball: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gachi Posted August 26, 2001 Share Posted August 26, 2001 [COLOR=blue]Great job, Ben! Keep it up.[/COLOR] :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stratigyless Posted August 27, 2001 Share Posted August 27, 2001 bravo encore encore:ball: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liamc2 Posted August 27, 2001 Share Posted August 27, 2001 best i've ever seen that keeps with the actual pokemon ideal:cool: :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben Posted August 27, 2001 Author Share Posted August 27, 2001 I need your guys' help for the next chapter. I'm going to have two people coming with me, one boy and one girl. The boy is Dave, but what should the girl's name be? And what type of pokemon should she have? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k9* Posted August 27, 2001 Share Posted August 27, 2001 how 'bout using one of the names off of crystal? type, hhhhmmmm, that's a hard one, grass or fire. just my 2 and a half cents :D :ball: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stratigyless Posted August 28, 2001 Share Posted August 28, 2001 the girl should use steal type and her name should be WE R SORRY YOUR MESSAGE CANNOT GET THROUGH PLEASE TRY LATER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gachi Posted August 28, 2001 Share Posted August 28, 2001 [COLOR=blue]Why don't you use the girl from Crystal? Her name is Kris, I think...[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sia Posted August 28, 2001 Share Posted August 28, 2001 yes, it is kris, i know....i picked her to see what it would be like lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiden Posted August 28, 2001 Share Posted August 28, 2001 How about Wendy Wind, using a Charizard, Bellosom, Ampharos, Fearow(duh), Steelix, and Sneasel. O n heres her background: her mother died when she was 4, she lives in a cottage with her father. They barely have enough money 2 eat, so she becomes a bandit who roams in the Ilex Forest, and steals money from bystanders. So guess who's the bystanders this time, that's right, Ben & Dave. She challenges then 2 a battle with Ben, winner takes all. Ben wins, Wendy realizes there is something fishy going on (mutant Cubones), and decides 2 investigate by joining Ben & Dave. At first she's suspicious, but after a while she becomes friends with d 2 boys. So what do u think Ben? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben Posted August 28, 2001 Author Share Posted August 28, 2001 Here's what I got so far, her name will be Liz, as in Elizabeth. Her type of pokemon will be either grass or normal. Need to decide between the two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sia Posted August 28, 2001 Share Posted August 28, 2001 how bout normal. they r kewl. they have ummm snorlax :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stratigyless Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 normal because i have something against grass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiden Posted September 4, 2001 Share Posted September 4, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Raiden [/i] [B]How about Wendy Wind, using a Charizard, Bellosom, Ampharos, Fearow(duh), Steelix, and Sneasel. O n heres her background: her mother died when she was 4, she lives in a cottage with her father. They barely have enough money 2 eat, so she becomes a bandit who roams in the Ilex Forest, and steals money from bystanders. So guess who's the bystanders this time, that's right, Ben & Dave. She challenges then 2 a battle with Ben, winner takes all. Ben wins, Wendy realizes there is something fishy going on (mutant Cubones), and decides 2 investigate by joining Ben & Dave. At first she's suspicious, but after a while she becomes friends with d 2 boys. So what do u think Ben? [/B][/QUOTE] Don't u like my idea???:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben Posted September 8, 2001 Author Share Posted September 8, 2001 Yes I do, it's just that Dave is a flying type trainer, and I don't want both of them to have the same type. :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiden Posted September 8, 2001 Share Posted September 8, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Ben [/i] [B]Yes I do, it's just that Dave is a flying type trainer, and I don't want both of them to have the same type. :p [/B][/QUOTE] oooooo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkerSephiroth Posted September 13, 2001 Share Posted September 13, 2001 Ben are u gonna post to this thread again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest david hendricks Posted September 13, 2001 Share Posted September 13, 2001 ;) Ben when is the next chapter coming out? A note to readers I am the basis for "dave" Ben please confim this!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sia Posted September 14, 2001 Share Posted September 14, 2001 C'MON BEN! woooooo hoooooooo the story is good. but u said u had the NEXT FEW chapters written lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkerSephiroth Posted September 14, 2001 Share Posted September 14, 2001 Come on post soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stratigyless Posted September 16, 2001 Share Posted September 16, 2001 i am tired of waiting:flaming: :flaming: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k9* Posted September 16, 2001 Share Posted September 16, 2001 guys.........simmadownnow ;) j/k, let's give him some time without yelling at him, he might be preoccupied irl. i have enjoyed his story too, but it seems to bug him when we get a bit overenthusiastic (sp?), as well it should, i'm sure he'll post them when he gets a chance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Man_05 Posted September 16, 2001 Share Posted September 16, 2001 hey when your book gets published I'll be sure to by one this is an awesome story. great job!!!!:cool: :) :p :love: :smirk: :babble: :wigout: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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