wiccansamurai Posted October 27, 2003 Share Posted October 27, 2003 Salvation you bring to bright flowers taking them to utmost bliss! Carrying pollen out of dark, Despondence fading... Drifting out of somber grotto Amiable gift of life Time melting away frivolous torment Palatable gentle wings. Enfolding ebony souls of flowers In variegated numb Wind dancing through wings That carry you to paradise, Bringing with children of the petals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maikiratori Posted October 27, 2003 Share Posted October 27, 2003 I really like the word choice in this poem..It's not everyday you see words put together like that to form the ideas in one's head that I thought of... but I'm an oddball so that might just be me...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Isus Posted October 28, 2003 Share Posted October 28, 2003 i love it!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccansamurai Posted October 29, 2003 Author Share Posted October 29, 2003 Thanx!!! its an ode i worte for creative writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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