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Well, she asked me for a banner, and I made one, heh. It's an animation, so the file might be sort of large, but I'm hoping that it will fit in her sig. The theme is basically the quote in her signature, and I think I did a pretty good job on it. ^_^

Comments? Critique?

Edit: Gah, file too big. I had to cut out a few parts, so that's why it doesn't fade in the first text, and out the last text. ~_~

Edit again: File still too big. I made it short and sweet this time.
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[color=darkblue][size=1]That's really good, too bad we couldn't have seen the 'real one', I guess you could say. It sounded really good.

This one is really good, I like how it kinda' gets bigger with each phrase, I also like how it changes fonts. Very nice touch.

Overall, I find it a very good banner, hopefully Raiha will like it. ^^

[b]Rating:[/b] 9.8/10

-Lan[/color][/size]
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[color=darkblue][size=1]Awesome! Just one thing, though. The first phrase, "Some girls whine" is kind of hard to read, considering it's such a light font color against a light hade of blue. Fix that and it'll be perfect. Maybe change the font color. Still awesome though! Great job! ^^

-Lan[/color][/size]
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So Raiha. You're a robot arm, with a girl head, that comes out of an egg?

Right?

Cool. heh. I like the banner, it is a cool picture [despite blurring]. As Lan mentioned, perhaps make the opacity behind the "Some girls whine" higher, so it stands out more. Overall a good banner, I like it. We love you Raiha. Aside from one thing...

Where is my cinnamon cupcake...?
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I tried my best to fix the first sentence. It was already on the highest opacity, as well as on bold, it's just naturally a thin font. See how it looks with more outer glow.

I also apoligize for the 'blurring.' If it wasn't from the original picture, the animation program I use often degrades larger gifs.
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[color=green]I love how you tinted the second a blue color, and yet were still able to keep a background within the whole banner. The different fonts add a bit of curiousity to it, and add more meaning to each phrase.

The image you used for this, whether chosen by Raiha or you, fits well with the theme of the banner.^^ I also love the shadowing you left behind the text, though on the "Other's Cry" phrase, it could be a bit less occupied.

Overall, Great job.^^[/color]
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