Inuyashagurl_15 Posted November 4, 2003 Share Posted November 4, 2003 I free wrote this yester day in third class so it could be bad~ Black heart Shadowed eyes Fate is written in the skys Shoul I run or should I flee Thats imposable Its only me Misunderstood and alone Bent and twisted is my mind How can this happen its not my time Alone in a world so cold i have noone to hold Is this the end or just a sign on how life will be or just mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muad'Dib Posted November 5, 2003 Share Posted November 5, 2003 well I deffinatly like it... good use of the rhymes... uh, wait... I'm thinking... ok, ya thats all I have to say ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viper0529 Posted November 5, 2003 Share Posted November 5, 2003 Very beautiful, I like it, good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inuyashagurl_15 Posted November 6, 2003 Author Share Posted November 6, 2003 Thank you I am happy you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T man Posted November 10, 2003 Share Posted November 10, 2003 I say you should keep making them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnonymousSource Posted November 10, 2003 Share Posted November 10, 2003 I like it...that's all i really have to say...i'm no genious but it sounds cool:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inuyashagurl_15 Posted November 11, 2003 Author Share Posted November 11, 2003 Thanks T man and AnonymousSource Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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