Muad'Dib Posted November 5, 2003 Share Posted November 5, 2003 OCC: OK, lets keep this going strong guys!! IC: Niko was running along the various planks that made up the docking section of To'Norath. He has just heard that another trade ship was coming in... and if he was lucky, so would Tellin. As he passed a final barrier, he looked out on the most massive ship he had ever seen. It sailed across the light clouds like a gigantic whale, drifting through ocean currents. As it approached the long docking platform, ropes were throne over the side, so it could be tied to the city for unloading. For several moments Niko was stunned at the ships size. It was a giant among giants. But then he regained his senses and ruched forward to get in line for unloading, so if Tellin was aboard, he could sneak a moment to talk with her. He doubted that she was aboard though, but sailors were transferred often, and Tellin had already been swiched from ship to ship three times in the years she had been gone. Hpwever, when he approached the large plank leading into the ship, two guards lifted him up by the back of his neck and placed him several feet back. "No one is allowed on board." "What? How are you gonna unload it?" Niko couldn't beleive what he was hearing. If they used their own men to get the supplies into the city, then they would all likely fall to their deaths. "We will be sending out unloaders to assist in unloading." just as Nilo thought, the fools were going to try it. However, several hours later, there had only been one fallen worker, and the rest seemed to keep their balance rather well. Although he was glad not many were killed, Niko couldn't help but be disapointed that he wouldn't see Tellin if she was on that ship. Later, when the ship was taking off again, Niko was walking casualy down another "street" in the Northern half of Tor'Norath. Then he heard it... "SHE'S OFF COURSE!!!" Next thing Niko knew, the mast of the gargantuan ship was ripping through the wood below him, and then he felt something he rarely got to experience... falling. And then he blacked out against the ships deck. OCC: a little long, but I think that got it going pretty well :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viper0529 Posted November 5, 2003 Share Posted November 5, 2003 Klai'n walked on the docks of the floating city. He heard hospital sirens coming to the dock close to him. He picked up the pace a little to see a huge ship [U]in the dock[/U] . "Woah" he said to himself. Klai'n saw a body being pulled from the reckage. "Ewww" he heard one crowed member say. Klai'n turned his back and started to walk away. "I think hes gonna make it!" cried one paramedic and the crowed bursts into whispers. Klai'n froze in his tracks and thought [I]Wow, tough kid[/I] . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muad'Dib Posted November 5, 2003 Author Share Posted November 5, 2003 OCC: just so yall know, Niko is pronounced Neekoh (N-ee-k-oh) IC: Niko drifted slowly into consousness (sp?) and came to the conclusion that he was probably dead. Then he saw a familiar face, pushing through a crowd of blurs.... Tellin, so she was dead to... no, if he was dead his head wouldn't hurt so much. "..." Niko tried to speak, but found that he was too dizzy to open his mouth. He tried again... " Tel..." "Hey, Niko, you should be more careful where you walk." Tellin tried to sound calm, but even Niko could hear the worry in her voice. "Alright kid, back up." Suddenly another figure was there too, someone unfamiliar to Niko. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted November 5, 2003 Share Posted November 5, 2003 [color=teal][font=times new roman][b]Anya stood on the mast of the [i]Pirate's Heart[/i]. The wind rasped her charcole hair around her face. Her ship was about to dock at a city she'd never been to before, Tor'Norath. "Anya!!! Get down from there!! We gotta ship to unload!!"a fellow sailor-pirate yelled up to her. Anya giggled and daringly leaned away from the pole of the massive mast. The sailors below were yelling at her. She'd been known to dare her limits. She let herself fall from the crow's nest and floated on the force of the wind. She held her hands towards the deck and chanted a melodic tune. Her body surrounded with an aura that helped her land gently on the deck. "Damn you girl!"the sailor spat. "Why is everyone so protective over me? I can very well take care of myself,"Anya tossed her thick hair over her shoulders and pounced off the ship and onto the dock. She stood straight up and stretched. Anya listened intently to the bustling of the foreign city. She gazed around with a smile on her face. "Ah, a new and exciting adventure starts today,"Anya squatted and stood up. "Help!! The ship is falling!! Hands on deck!!" a man ran arcoss the docks. Anya looked back at the [i]Pirate's Heart[/i] to see it was still there and intact. She was furious someone had tricked her. She began to walk over to the man who was frantically yelling. "What the hell's the matter with you? You scared the p'Jesus out of me!" Anya had the man by the scuff of his shirt, shaking him. "On the northern docks! The merchant's ship is falling and taking the dock with it! We need all avalible hands!!" The man took off running, Anya grabbed her leather jacket from a fellow pirate and sprinted after the man. They reached the dock, it was in shambles, the enormous mast was embedded in the port, men and women scurried about, trying to anchor the ship keep it from dropping from the sky. Anya stood in awe and shock at the unimaginable sight.[/color][/font][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inuyashagurl_15 Posted November 5, 2003 Share Posted November 5, 2003 Brandy hummed a tune as she brought crates in to vareous (sp?) rooms. A lady yelled at her "Those dont go there!" Brandy looked up shyly and nodded. You could here the lady complane about her and how odd she was. Then she picked up the crates slowly and carried them back. "Hey girl!" A raspy voice called. Brandy looked up to see a man with a long black jacket on. "Me?" Brandy called out. "Is this all you do is load and unload?" The man yelled. Brandy was shocked,"Yes why do you ask?" But as she looked up he began walking away. She dropped the crate and as it cracked open she could hear the tune she had been huming escape out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No Posted November 5, 2003 Share Posted November 5, 2003 [i][color=lightpink]Tellin looked down at Niko, brushing some of his bangs from his face and eyes, " You really need to be more careful of where you walk." she said trying to sound as calm as she could, she really didn't want one thing to happen to him, but remembered soemthing and whisperd to him, "I have a small surprise for you but...I'll tell you it later. They want you to go to the hospital and get another check up to see if anything is broken or not. That was one bad fall you had hun." she blushed when she said 'hun'. [/color][/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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