Writing Vengeful Emergence {Clash of the Oni! The one who knows no defeat!}

[Hittokiri Zero]

I've been having "super writers-block" ever since I left for summer vacation back in June. Recently i've been wanting to start up multiple fanfics but just can't get a good intro or a good anything going... So I wrote this thing up in one sitting and just felt like posting it so I could get some feedback :'|.

Even if you just browse through any feedback is welcome =P.

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Through the darkness of night and the hampering of rain a lone figure could be seen wandering the deserted streets of Kento. All around him lay the bodies of his comrades, friends, and family; every building within in eye sight had been set ablaze and the smell of burning flesh and bone was nauseating? But he pressed on searching for the one thing that truly mattered? searching for his precious Ayumi? But it seemed as though his search for his love would have to wait?. For the Oni (literal translation = demon) that had caused this unimaginable chaos was still here waiting? waiting to exact his revenge?

Kagutsuchi -?Keitaro I told you we would meet again. I have not forgotten the trouble you caused me...?

Keitaro lowered his head his emotions were beginning to conflict his state of mind? his uncontrollable sadness and anger could not be held back anymore?

Keitaro- ?kagutsuchi? your fight was with me? why? Why did you ATTACK THEM!!?

Kagutsuchi - ?Why? If your referring to the redecorating I?ve done? Then why not?... The thought of these people was sickening? So I decided to do them a favor by putting them out of their misery.?

Keitaro had, had enough he quickly unsheathed his sword and settled into his fighting stance he began to recall his previous battle with Kagutsuchi? Kagutsuchi was a fire spirit? Meaning the body he was in now wasn?t really his own but was just being utilized as a vessel so he could exact his revenge? But the innocent body that would have to be slain in order to vanquish Kagutsuchi didn?t matter anymore Keitaro was passed that point, he had made up his mind he was going to kill Kagutsuchi and he was going to kill him now. Keitaro watched as the tall slender figure of Kagutsuchi unsheathed two twin katanas and began slowly walking towards him... Good thought Keitaro, Kagutsuchi was still utilizing the same fighting style as before? But all was not good remembered Keitaro. In his last battle with Kagutsuchi he had, had the help of a friend; a friend who ended up giving his life in order to defeat Kagutsuchi. Now this battle would be completely one on one, but what worried Keitaro even more was how much Kagutsuchi?s true power, his power to create and control flame had increased since last they met.

Keitaro began shifting his weight to his right leg and slid his right leg backwards. He then positioned his left leg in front of his right so that his feet were staggered one in front of the other. Next he brought his sword up with both hands and brought it backwards with the blade pointing directly towards his opponent?s lower torso.

Keitaro- ?Kagutsuchi! This time there is no turning back! This time you will atone for your crimes! KAGUTSUCHI I?M GOING TO SEND YOU BACK TO HELL!!!?

Keitaro pushed off from the ground and shot forward to meet Kagutsuchi; at the site of this Kagutsuchi immediately did the same. He broke into a run and charged at Keitaro; the two met one another with tremendous force and speed Keitaro tried to get the best of Kagutsuchi with a quick thrust of his sword but Kagutsuchi easily parried the blow with the katana in his right hand. He then quickly did a 180 degrees turn and unleashed a downward strike upon Keitaro with his other katana. Keitaro instinctively blocked by placing each of his hands and one end of the sword and raising it up to meet the oncoming attack; but the impact from the attack was too great as Keitaro managed to block it but was still sent sliding backwards across the ground on his knees. Keitaro quickly shot to his feet and was immediately on the defensive as Kagutsuchi was right in his face hacking and slashing at him in a merciless rage. Keitaro blocked each blow time and time again and soon managed to create a sizeable gap between the two combatants.

Keitaro now stood approximately 20 yards away from Kagutsuchi he was breathing heavily?

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Yeah I know it's just randomness but I had to write something otherwise i'd go mad X___x. And "Kagutuschi" is a real japanese entity/mythilogical thinger majiggy that was a fire spirit or something like that... (too lazy to explain).