Neoclone-7 Posted November 13, 2003 Share Posted November 13, 2003 This is my first real poem I've felt confident enough to post. Would people please tell me what they think of it? [U] A Knife to Dull the Pain [/U] Sleeping pills because I?m tired, A knife to dull the pain. Tear drops in a sea of blood, A puppet cuts its strings. No more acts to fool them all, I finally am free. Sleeping pills because I?m tired, A knife to dull the pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccansamurai Posted November 13, 2003 Share Posted November 13, 2003 I know how you feel. Already, I've tried to kill myself twice. I love your poem, its almost as if its about me, but its not. I know how it feels to think to die would free you. I'm no saying that thats not true, because I'm not sure anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Japan Posted November 14, 2003 Share Posted November 14, 2003 Hey Neo!! That is a wonderful poem. That is very good. I read the other stuff that you wrote, and this is by far the best. :love2: Please post some more...please? Also, I hope that you are not depressed. You don't seem that way at school. I also thought that you didn't like depressed poems. Anys, I will see you in a bit kakarot. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueA007 Posted November 14, 2003 Share Posted November 14, 2003 *Appears out of hiding for a moment.* Whee, very interesting poem Neo. Not what I'd expect out of you and stuff.....but oh well. >_> Probably since I haven't read any of your other poems and only your stuff in "The Book"..... Laterz, see youz in a bit too.:naughty: Kakarotto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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