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Tryed this a while back, didn't turn out so well. But i'v changed a few things.

[I][COLOR=darkblue]In the Land of Neir there live lifeform very similar to humans. They look like humans, act like humans, there is only one thing that seperates them from normal people. The stones of Neir. Billions of years ago, Neir was discovered by 6 warriors who each had a great power. Earth, Water, Fire, Lightning, Wind, and Rock. This land they discovered was pieceful and evil had never stepped foot on it. But the 6 warriors knew that once there kind settled into the amazing land that evil would soon attempt to take over. The Warriors made a plan just in case evil ever came. So, over the years the population grew and Neir became a great place and was watched over by the 6 warriors. Unfortunatly, the warriors predictions cam true. An evil man from a dark continent came to Neir with many fighters. The forces were great and couldn't be destroyed. In their last efforts to destroy the evil, the Warriors sacrificed themselves and their amazing powers to defeat the evil. The last attack was sucessful. The dark man and his forces were distroyed. Even though the warriors who sacrificed themselves died, their abilities did not. Earth, water, Fire, Lightning, Wind, and Rock, the powers that each warrior controled were cast into the world and took form into small pebble sized stones that became almost a natural resorce for Neir. The legendary weapons they had were hidden in the Land. Now, the stones that posess the powers of the warriors are givin to everyone in Neir.
The Stones are givin to a child when they are 6 months old. Its the stones that choose the person. The stones fit in between the nuckles on the hands, this allows a person to have from 1 - 6 stones.
Neir has been free of evil since that day, but now a new evil from the same continent has arrived with power as great as the stones and more, But the fighters of Neir won't go down without a fight. 6 fighters with same blood as the legendary founders of Neir have risen and have discovered the legendary weapons of the ancient warriors. They will fight with the great stones, weapons, and Spirit of Neir. [/COLOR] [/I]

[B]NOTE: Everyone in Neir has stones, whether they want them or not. People from neir have the stones when they are 6 months old. They are placed in between the knuckles and after 6 more months they have been completly rooted into the person. Only the tops of the stones show. [/B]

OK! Heres a little bit of enfo you will need to know about the stones and what powers they have. Also weapon choices.

[B]Earth Stone (green)[/B] - The Earth Stones, also called the green stones are able to use powers givin from the Earth (no duh). Fighters who have the Earth Stones use staffs (as in poles. No fancy head piece and jewls) The staff will usually have a ribbon tied to it or rings in it. The abilities of the Earth stones include: Summoning Golems (They can be from 6 feet to 12 feet, depends how much energy is used/How experienced a fighter is), Gathering energy from plants forming a beam of energy, and the ability to shake the ground (not huge earthquake material).
Earth Legendary weapon: A long gold staff pointed at the ends with 3 rings on each end as well. It has many ancient carvings on its sides. And small green jewls running up the side.

[B]Water Stone (blue)[/B] - The Water Stones (blue Stone) have the ability of water. Fighters with water stone have magic staffs that they use to bring out the Water power(This is the kind with head pieces and jewls, ect.) Water Stone powers include: A blast of water from the staff, Able to cause heavy rains in a certain area, and a water shield.
Water Legendary weapon: A white Staff with two large points that come out of the side and go upward. There is a Blue crystal in between the points. Legendary marks are also on it.

[B]Fire Stone (red)[/B] - With Fire Stones you have the power of Fire. Fighters with Fire stones have Light, quick weapons, such as a dirk, Katars, ect(one handed swords). Fire Powers include: Fire to blast from the users hands, Insurting the fire into the weapon causing burning attacks, and able to make a ring of fire in any area (but water).
Fire Legendary weapon: A pair of katars, both of the blades are longer then a normal one. On the flat side of each blade there is gold plating with a red jewl.

[B]Lightning Stone(Gold)[/B] - Lightning Stone users use Glaives, Sythes, Spears, (anything Long with a blade on the end). Lightning powers include: Shooting lightning strikes at an opponent threw the body, allowing the user to increase speed and run very fast (lighning charges threw them causing them to go fast), and a lightning attack from the sky (must be stormy if used)
Lightning legendary weapon: A Black Scyth with Lightning strikes going up the sides with a few Gold jewl on the blade. The blade is a bit longer then a normal one.

[B]Wind Stone (white)[/B] - Wind Stone users use any weapon they want. Their attacks/powers include: Small tornados that can get up to 14 feet high, the ability to hover, and just a plain out large blast of wind from the weapon.
Wind Legendary weapon: It is part staff, Part sword. On one side it is a U shape and has a white milky stone in the middle. On the other side it has a Dirk sized blade. It has legendary marks on it.

[B]Rock Stone (black)[/B] - Rock Stone (what a great name!) users use heavy weapons like two handed swords, Maces, and Battle axes. Powers include: Able to make rock come from the hand in different forms (You can't turn people to stone... sorry...but you can make stone bridges), The ability move stone (moving a big rock without touching it), and able to make the weapon Hard like stone causing heavy blows.
Rock Legendary Weapon: A Broad blade Two handed sword. Their are Gold and Black marks on the blade and the handle is Black with amazing designs and a black jewl at the bottom.

[B]Evil of Neir (evil!)[/B] - The evil of neir as you know came from a dark continent. On the continent there were also stones of power, they had pure evil attacks. The new threat of Neir has one stone. It is about the size of a baseball and is black. It can't be placed on the bodie so it is carried on a necklace, belt, ect. The stone has all of the powers; Earth, Water, Fire, Lightning, Wind, Stone, and it has darkness added to each one. Powers: If you are the evil you have all of the others powers of the stones except for the 3rd attack/power. If you are the Evil RPer, it is your job to create 1 more new power for each stone, but only you can use it and it has to have darkness in it. (The attacks will determine if you make it to the RPG or not)
Weapon: The evil weapon is a called a morph blade. It can morph into any weapon created.




Ok These are just some rules and some other things you might just want to know about the sign up stuff:

|: You can not have multiple kinds of stones. You either have water, Earth, Fire, Lightning, Wind, or rock. You can't have mixes. You can't steal stones either because it is impossible to.

|: If you join this RPG you will have to post!!! If you are one of those people who just sign-up for RPGs for the fun of it, then don't join this one! Because if you don't post enough, I will get you replaced.

|: Posting quality must be in paragraphs. I have to be able to tell who is talking (no run on sentances). None of this either:

Joe: Im Going to kick you butt!

Jack: *steps over* You suck!

Joe: No you do! *attacks*
NONE OF THAT!

|: I will be accepting 1 person for each Stone, the evil of neir, and assasins who work for the evil. From your sign ups I will determine who will make it to the RPG. I will be taking at least 6 more people because I need an evil person(and I took lightning power)!! If no one signs up as an assasin the person RPing the great evil will RP them as well.

|: Also, you are not allowed to make your character all mighty and powerful (This goes for Kyo the most ;) ! If you are on the evil side you must understand that you will die eventually.

Im also allowing everyone to have some kind of creature come with you on your journey! Just put it somewhere in your bio with a name! (this is not required) Mythical creatures are allowed, but no full grown dragons.


OK! Here is the sign ups that you will have!


Sign-Up
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Name:/ (Not too modern)

Age:/ (range from 15 - 20)

Good/Evil:/ (Only Evil if you are part of the evil)

Stones:/ (What Stone power you have and how many stones you have. Having 6 makes it difficult to control your power, but is very strong. Remember that you can only have 1 kind of Stone: Water, Earth, Fire, lightning, wind, or rock.)

Attacks: (Only put this down if you want to be the evil of neir. Read the "Evil of neir" info spot to get instructions)

Weapon:/ (Ok, pick a weapon that goes along with your stone! You can only have one weapon. If you become a stone user in the RPG, you will keep this weapon until it is destroyed/it is destroyed when you are about to find your legendary weapon.)

Appearance:/ (This is sword fighting people! Don't make it anything modern)

Personality-Talents:/ (Don't over do the talents. Sorry, but Psycic powers/abilities arn't allowed)

Bio:/ (Dont make it so short, put in some detail)

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I will be adding my Sign-up Later.

[B]Legendary Earth User: Queen Asuka (???)

Legendary Water User: Sweetreyes (Yui)

Legendary Fire User: Black_Phoenix (Quel)

Legendary Lightning User: K.K.C. (Kia)

Legendary Wind User: Stick Fairy (Tujia)

Legendary Rock user: Arika (Tsuchi)

Evil of Neir: G.D. Ryoko (Izume)

Evil soldiers/assasins: Kyo no Ryu (Kyo)[/B]
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Yay! It's back! Thanks K.K.C!

Name:/ Tujia Anemos Nodin

Age:/ 16

Good/Evil:/ Good (one can only hope)

Stones:/ 4 Wind Stones

Weapon:/ Long ebony staff with crystal spiral at the top, and a hidden blade at the bottom.

Appearance:/ [URL="http://www.angelfire.com/dragon/hiddenotaku/images/takenimages/LiviaSorceress1.jpg"]Here[/url]

Personality:/ Flirtatious and always looking for fun, Tujia will alwars try to see the best of a situation. She's an eternal optimist wo can't understand depressed people. She is somewhat spoiled in that she's used to getting what she wants, but will always share. She's also quite used to hard work. I guess you could say she's more determined than spoiled.

Talents:/ Controlling wind/air (duh), plus a little bit of basic magic. Is also good at hand to hand combat, and when necessary, an excellent seductress.

Bio:/ Tujia was born in a rather large village, to the shaman and her husband, a soldier (yes, a female shaman). She was trained by her mother to take over as the village shaman, and so became very skilled at magic. Her father taught her to fight, both hand to hand, and with many assorted weapons, so she can use most if she has to. She was best with glaives and staffs. Her current weapon was a gift from her parents for her 15th birthday. In her village, that was the time when young people were sent beyond the walls that protected them, to explore the world in its entirety. They were to live on their own for two years, and once that period was done, they returned to the village. Then they would decide whether to remain in the village, or return to the outer world. Tujia left, accompanied by a small wolf cub named Anemos, who had come to the village, and whom she had adopted.

She travelled to another village somewhat nearby, and became the apprentice to the shaman there, to finely hone her skills. She made a great many friends, and was starting to call this new place home. One day, Tujia was frustrated by something an elder of the village said to her, insulting her mother for being a female shaman, which was uncommon at that village. She was toying with her stones, which she did when she was upset, and a huge whirlwind came up and destroyed half the town. The people were angry with this, thinking she had done an act of sabotage, and cast her out. Since then, she has wandered from place to place, doing whatever she needs to do to get by. She vows not to settle down until she masters her newfound power.

Sorry it took so long, school's been tough. I hope this is okay!
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One prob. with both your bios. Everyone in Neir has stones, whether they want them or not. You need to change that in your bio. People from neir have the stones when they are 6 months old. They are placed in between the knuckles and after 6 more months they have been completly rooted into the person. Only the tops of the stones show. That was in the story line, remember to read most of everything. Please fix that in your bio too ^^. everything else is good.

MY Sign-up
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Name:/ Kia Tsume

Age:/ 16

Good/Evil:/ Good (no duh)

Stones:/ Lightning - 5

Weapon:/ A double bladed glaive. The pole part is crimson and the blade has a black streke down the center.

Appearance:/ **attatchment** Gold hair/blue eyes/Crimson cloke/black bandana/Dark green tunic with black shirt under it/black belt with pack/baggy green pants/small black boots.

Personality-Talents:/ Kia is very headstrong. She hates giving in and letting people down and she always trys her hardest. She doesn't really care if she is insulted, but hates it when those she cares for are treated badly. She likes to joke aroung even though most of the time her jokes arn't caught. She is very carefree and adventurous.

She has the talent of throwing her voice. She also has good martial arts skills and can calm animals.

Bio:/ Kia was born in a very small village not to far from the capital city of Neir. After Kia was born, her father left to start a journey of discovery for himself. He never came back. Kia trained so that she could go on her own journey when she became of age and search for her father. She didn't have her father to help her so she has to learn alone and her family was going threw some hard times. Her, her little brother, and her older sister would only go to school about 2-3 times a week so they could work and get money for the family. Kia was givin her glaive from her mother when she turned 13. Her mother used most of the money they had to buy it for her. Her mother died shortly after Kia's birthday from a deadly illness.

When she was 14 she packed her bags and left to start her own journey like her father. She traveled on her own for a year. On the way she found a young griffin who joined her journey when she saved it from an older griffin, she named him Caotan. She came to a village where lightning stone users, like herself, trained and taught each other about their skills. She met an old man who turned out to be her father and he trained her for the next year. She had pretty good control over her 5 stones, but everyonce in a while they would be difficult to handle.

She left once again to seek more adventure, wanting to make her father and mother proud of her one day.
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[i]I hope all of the info for my character from the last time is still valid. Too much work to try and do a major overhaul on it now. :p[/i]


Name: Quel (pronounced like "Kell")

Age: 19

Good/Evil: Good

Stones: 4 Fire stones

Weapon: Katana (I like that sword )

Appearance: 6-foot tall, brown hair, brown-green eyes, long legged. Wears a black shirt, black denim pants, and a crimson cloak.

Personality-Talents: Very quiet most of the time. Gets along with most people. Tends to seem cheerful around his friends. Talent: Very accurate with attacks that project from his hands (i.e. fireballs).

Bio: Grew up on a small farm, distant from any large gathering of people. Traveled to a small, nearby city for an education, and to work odd jobs on occasion. At a young age he became enraged over a trivial matter and accidentally unleashed the power of his Fire stones. The result was the destruction of his house, and the death of his parents. He wound up with a relative for a few years before running off. Since then he has been wandering about, trying to find a use for himself, and atone for the death of his parents at his hands.
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[size=1][color=ff66cc]I used my old sign-up, if that's alright?

[B]Name:[/B] Tsuchi Naueue

[B]Age:[/B] 15

[B]Good/Evil:[/B] Good

[B]Stones:[/B] 4 ROCK stones

[B]Weapon:[/B]
[B][U]Double Edged Broadsword:[/B][/U] Sheathed on her back, the 35" blade is held there until battle. The hitl on the sword is black and shaped as a dragon's mouth. It opens to hold the stainless steel 30" blade. In the eyes are two small black orbs and on the end of the hilt is a large black orb.

[B][U][URL=http://gungfu.com/pics_general/pics_swords/swords_twin_melon_hammers.jpg]Twin Melon Hammers:[/URL][/B][/U] See the attached link for the picture. She will lose this when they crack when she is fighting.

[B]Appearance:[/B] See attachment- that is what she wears. She also has a black cloak she wears around her. She has two scabbards to sheath her two broadswords.

[B]Personality:[/B] Tsuchi has an attitude at times. She will never give up, she's always going and never looking back. She never starts fights, but ends them. She is not the bubbly kind of person. She is the one you do not want to piss off at times. When there is a time that she is not in a good mood, that is a time to stay away from her. She needs her isolated moments at times.

[B]Talents:[/B]
[B][U]Rock Power:[/B][/U] She is able to create stone bridges, mold rocks, and she is able to move boulders with great strength. She is also able to create an armor of unbreakable rock.

[B][U]Rock Creatures:[/B][/U] Tsuchi is able to call on creatures that are associated with her element, as well as call upon Mythical Creatures associated with rock.

[B][U]Magic:[/B][/U] Since she was the Sorcercor's Apprentice she knew plenty of magic.

[B]Bio:[/B] Tsuchi had always lived near rocky area. She lives in a village where the villagers worship the Rock God, Golem. She was always the one who would watch the people work and play as they went about. She was the one who protected the village from enemies and creatures not wanted in her village. She is also the creature tamer within the village. She cares for the creatures that are found and almost killed.

Tsuchi was the village leader's daughter. Therefore, she had an obligation to be royalty. She was the one who spoke to other villages, keep the village happy, and train with the army. She was also the Sorcerer's apprentice. She had always wanted to learn everything there was to learn about the rocks. It was her favorite thing to do.

She is the creature tamer, therefore she meets many different creatures. 2 creatures that caught her eye were the Berapin and Gargoyle. It was a mix between a bear and a porcupine. It was the size of a grizzly bear but had the spikes of a porcupine, only larger. It had long sharp claws that enabled it to tear apart pieces of rock to dig through and make its home. It's also able to curl into a ball and become a spiked ball. The Berapin and Gargoyle could not be tamed. They were the only wild creatures that Tsuchi loved and adored. They stayed with her forever.

The matter with the stones is that she received them from the Sorceror. It enabled her to have the love for the element of rock. As well as that she also was able to put the stones on her swords. Before that she would put them inside her Melon hammers and practice with that. After an incident, she uses her swords.

Here's a picture of the gargoyle. But it is blackish grey and his wings are that of dragon-like.[IMG]http://cf.geocities.com/digi_josied3/images/Gargoylemon.jpg[/IMG][/size][/color]
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Name:Yui Tamasawa

Age: 20

Good/Evil: Good

Stones: 4 water stones.

Weapons: Blue Crystal Staff. This weapon is about 5 feet long with a blunct end on one side and a rounded end on top to place magica stoned within it. If the time ever arises. It summons the water magis from within the user to summon water spells. Can only be used in storym weather or near a water supply.

Apperance: Long dark hair with blue eyes. Stands abut 5 10 and very femine in stature. Do not be fooled thoug for she is agile and flexible. On each hand there are embedded two water stones. Thats she has used over the years.

Personality-Talents: Very cool and calm but can also become tempermental. Her mood like the water can be affected by weather. Her peak time fr fighting is when a storm approcahes or is happening or as sppn as it passes. The best time for her to speak is when the water is calm.

Her talent is singing, she uses her voice as a channel for her magic as well as simple chantting. Depending on what it sung, hr power can slightly increase but only for about 5 minutes.

Bio: Born to a family of water- people. As she calls them she was implanted with these stones at a young age. Although she didt like them at first her love for them and water grew.

She turly begn working with the stones more cooperativley around 10 years old and sine has been increasing her magic and ability. Hopfully to become one of the strongest in her clan.

Her hopes are to become powerful enough to gain the Legendary Water Weapom which will increase her powers greatly. But before she can go on with that, she must, along with other wears of various stones fight the Evil Ones of Neir.
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Ok, so far so good. Here are just a few things that people need to correct.

Black_Phoenix - I think it would be better if your character had 3 or more stones. You don't want to have too little because that would show that your character is slightly weak. Make it 3 or more. Everything else is good.

Stick Fairy - You still need to change your bio about the stones. Everyone has stones. You don't find them, you have them your whole life. I'v already sent you PM so please hurry and fix the problems.

*Spot saved for Queen Asuka*
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Name:Izumi

Age:17

Good/Evil:Evil

Stones:A large black stone containing all the powers of the stones, plus it`s own dark attacks that she wears around her neck.

Weapon:A black morphblade that changes and copies the attacks of the other weaponds created, also it has it`s own special attack.

Appearance:See attachment

Personality-Talents:Izumi is very mysertous and serious. She usually likes to be alone and enjoys torturing the innocent. Her talents include sorcery and fighting.

Bio:A decendent of the pervious evil of Nier, Izumi decided to bring back this evil after being outcast by the people of Neir for her mutant powers. Angry with the people, she decided to make them suffer. Her only true friend is a large white wolf that has always been with her since she was a little girl.
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It`s my old sign up changed a bit. I`m not finished yet though. I`ll edit later.

Edit:Attacks Earth:Earthquake
Fire:Fire tornado
water:tsunami
Wind:tornado
Rock:boulder crush
ligtning: electric storm
Dark: Shadowball
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[color=green][size=1][b]Name:/[/b] Ivory

[b]Age:/[/b] 18

[b]Good/Evil:/ [/b] Good

[b]Stones:/ [/b] Three Earth Stones.

[b]Weapon:/ [/b] A long, wooden staff, carved from mahogany, with three beautiful silver rings hanging from the top of it. On each ring hangs an emerald jewel.

[b]Appearance:/ [/b] Long white hair, bright green eyes. Tall and slender, very graceful looking. Some see her and think that she is a mystical being of the forest. She's usually wearing earth tone colors, and wears a silver headpiece with an emerald set in.

[b]Personality-Talents:/[/b] She's very quiet and serene, always willing and helpful, but extremely stubborn when she doesn't get her way. She has big hopeful eyes, and everyone always thinks she's in love. Talents wise, she's very skilled in weilding the earth magic, summoning gollums and creating small earthquakes.

[b]Bio:/[/b] Raised in a forest cottage, as a little girl she was mesmerized by the flowers. Her mother named her Ivory because of the whiteness of her hair at birth. After being blessed with recieving the earth stone, just like her parents, she began to make herself aquainted with nature.

The rest of her life is a mystery. She's often seen accompanied by a silver-white unicorn, a rare being that can only be approached by those pure of heart. Sometimes men have claimed to have been visited by her in their dreams and saw her carrying a bouquet of pure white lilies. This has caused some to be frightened and wary of her, despite her gentleness.

Never having a friend, she's waiting for another of pure heart, one whom her unicorn, Aramina, will let approach before decided to marry.

[img]http://www.angelfire.com/punk3/otakupictures/blue.jpg[/img]
She looks sort of like this, I suppose, except with the description I have earlier.[/color]

*Hope that's good. Whatever needs fixed just let me know and I'll do what I must do. ^_^; I tried to use my imagination.[/size]
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Kyo

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bad

large black stone that he wears on a chain

a switchblade, it uses the combination powers f lightning and dark. When it touches someone a shock spreads through their body.

coming soon....

he is very silent since being an assasin didnt give him much time. He is very cocky and NEVER feels anything but happiness

He is a very skilled assasin who has killed many. He comes from the evil island of Neir. He is a close friend of Izumi though, as stated, he doesnt speak much. After he found out about the 6 warriors of the same blood as the origonals he immediatly knew he had a challenge. He searched to find someone who would pay him but none would. He decided that he would go out and defeat them on his own.
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Ok, so that everyone knows, the RPG has started and can now be found in the recruitment area. Get to posting!

[B][SIZE=3]Sign-ups are now closed unless you would like to ba an assasin or soldier.[/SIZE][/B]
If you do want to be one, please post your sign-up and send me a PM so I know you joined.
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