Aros Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 I made this new banner and i need some ideas on my first piece of work this is just a sample of my first so basically im asking for people to ctirique it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharmedImmortal Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 Ohh, Cloud from Final Fantasy. I like that character. ^_^ THe banner is very nice...but can you add something more? Because the blank space is....blank. o_O It would be better if you add, like umm....ya know, sayings, quotes, or poems...something like that. Or any cool background like your cloud banner that you have. Goody Job! -^_^- 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aros Posted November 16, 2003 Author Share Posted November 16, 2003 This one should be a little bit more (i just added a little quote of my own) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blista Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 Yeah, there's just way too much empty space in my opinion. Probably could have put another picture in, and faded it a little. I get what you were going for leaving it empty like that, but it just doesn't really work for me. 6.5/10. [B]Edit:[/b] Didn't notice that you posted a second one. That's a little better, but the text is a little hard to read. Try getting a more legible font and maybe lower the opacity of it a bit :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aros Posted November 16, 2003 Author Share Posted November 16, 2003 Ive done some extra stuff on this one I think it is pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blista Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 The picture is way too stretched out and distorted. Try not to do that :/ And try not to use a picture as a background, and as the main image. It doesn't work well as both. The text is boring and doesn't grab my attention. Sorry, but it's not very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharmedImmortal Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 The cloud banner is great, but make the font a little bit clearer to see. It's a little bit insy winsy mess, but it's cool. And the second banner is kinda "stretched out and distorted", as Blista says. You can also add borders or frames in the banner so it would be look much more nicer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aros Posted November 16, 2003 Author Share Posted November 16, 2003 The second is kind of meant to i was trying out some new watercolor features it is alot distorted if you notice like you two did so I thank you and wish to be better THX... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marron347 Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 I see what you were going for in the .hack banner, but it didn't really work out, sorry buddy. It's very colorful though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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