Guest Dark Demon467 Posted November 20, 2003 Share Posted November 20, 2003 [SIZE=3]large[/SIZE] [COLOR=blue]blue[/COLOR] OK you guys I wrote a poem.....its kinda a love poem,please dont laugh at me,if you like it send me a post or a message!Its halfway done but I will do another post for it. It has no title though I want to tell you what I'm thinking but I dont know how to start.I want to tell you,but now I'm afriad,that you might break my heart,and never want to see me agian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carr Posted November 21, 2003 Share Posted November 21, 2003 [size=1] [color=tomato] Why would we laugh? Believe you me, I've written some aweful poetry in my day and yours, sir, does not qualify! I'm a little confuzzled though. What is the rythem you are going for? Does it read like this: I want tho tell you what I'm thinking But I don't know how to start I want to tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart and never want to see me again.... anyway, Like I said, It's not bad. You should finish it![/color] [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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