Satori Night Posted December 14, 2003 Share Posted December 14, 2003 Hello! Time for my depressing Poetry!!! It's called Reality. The reality is the cage Surrouding by flickering flame Do you think you can escape? Think again You can't touch the flames Of this reality's cage You can't escape Mere mortal For outside is the air The sky, the sea, the land The freedom of dreaming That you can only glimpse Through flickering flame Barred you into existence I think you mistaken Your state for something real Or maybe you mistaken Yourself for real Either way you cannot escape The flickering flame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sonicdivision Posted December 14, 2003 Share Posted December 14, 2003 someone cut my wrist, so i can fit in with this this open discussion on boring depression woe is me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satori Night Posted December 30, 2003 Author Share Posted December 30, 2003 ....That was...a nice review...not very helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccansamurai Posted December 30, 2003 Share Posted December 30, 2003 Well, its better than a lot of the stuff I see here. My only problems are the fact it could be a bit f prose if the lines weren't seperated. It doesn't have much rythme. Don't worry, sonicdivision is banned now :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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