CB Shin Posted December 19, 2003 Share Posted December 19, 2003 This is a poem that got me into the semi-finalists of an international competition and my very own page in "Eternal Portraits", a chronology of poems by different people, and in Noble House publishers. Anyway here it is, Hope you like it. The Sunset The sunset, A velvety scarlett Hanging into the air, A blazing fire of life, Encompassed in the Autumn colored sky, The sight of souls, Passing on in solitude, The fringe of dark and light, Fading away in a single glance, A bright glare tranforming the sky, Into the most lively red, A fallen angel gliding down, Finally finding peace, The essence of Earth, Giving hope to all those in its presence, I can not only see the sunset, I can feel it... Nothing fancy about it, just raw poetry. I hope you enjoyed it. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kris roby Posted December 19, 2003 Share Posted December 19, 2003 yes. it's very good. it was really cool. ( just getting off-topic for a sec.) how long have you written poetry? i'm geussing years to your whole life. but, i'm not good at guessing. (sorry i had to ask) if i had to rate this id probaly give it a 8/10-10/10 my ownopinion from this one poem. tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CB Shin Posted December 19, 2003 Author Share Posted December 19, 2003 I'm only 14. Honestly, I've seen better poetry on other threads that could easily outrank me. Thanks for your high rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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